Reviews For Ultimate
Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 06/16/06 11:08
Chapter: Wishing

As usual my friend, that was breathtaking, you have a knack for compltley captuvating me. Your writing is so simple, jet so complex, it really allows you to imagine sweet! That last sentance was beautifu; - 'He was wishing for his sister, and i was wishing for Charlie'.....i wonder what's up with Charlie anyway, his letter was, well, distant at the last.

Anyway. Well done and keep it up.
100000000000000000/10 (with little snitches dancing around it)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! ^^ Charlie will be appearing in the next chapter. The next chapter is also when the major problem of the story will occur.

Reviewer: Captain Chemo
Date: 06/15/06 19:59
Chapter: Wishing

YAY!!! I love it! But more please!!!!!

Author's Response: =) I have summer break, so the chapters will come MUCH faster now.

Reviewer: bookworm2011
Date: 06/10/06 10:08
Chapter: Good News, Bad News

Update soon.Please.soon.really soon.How about now??Please. Update. Awesome, by the way. I think i'm addicted to fanfiction. Maybe i need help. proffesional help. Keep Writing!!!(ignore the rambling)

Author's Response: I havn't had much time to update because of exams and school...-shudder- don't get me started. I have summer break now, so I'll be writing a LOT more. =) Yes, I'm addicted to fanfiction too, but who says that is a bad thing? It's really cool to see what other people can think up of using the characters in Harry Potter. ^^

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 06/04/06 5:51
Chapter: Good News, Bad News

Yipee! It finally got accepted! Great chapter as usual, and i just can't wait to see what happens next. I must say you really got my emotions running with that Quidditch team, they are horrible...shudder...shudder....except Leo of course. It was such a relief when he got introduced....

Keep up the good work! 100000000/10!

Author's Response: Leo's going to be a key character in this fiction. Actually, if Leo wasn't in this fic, this fiction would even exist - he's practically the purpose.

Reviewer: fightingokra4life
Date: 05/05/06 14:20
Chapter: An Unexpected Reunion

i am so excited you decided to continue on with the story! i loved the first one!

Author's Response: =) Of course I'll continue on with the story! Also, this won't be the last Ari/Charlie story I'll write, so don't worry! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Captain Chemo
Date: 04/29/06 17:52
Chapter: An Unexpected Reunion

YEA! I loved Q & L...(sry I am lazy)...and now A SEQUEAL!!!!!!

Author's Response: Woah, I always refer to "Quidditch and Love" as "Q & L" when I'm talking about it! How did you know that I use that too? lol. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad that you like it!! =)

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 04/29/06 15:50
Chapter: An Unexpected Reunion

Yay! well done on getting it accepted Ivona!! And yes, you did get rid of all of those 'I's' at the beginning of the setances!! Lol! Smashing story, keep up the truly amazing way that you have of captuvatng me! Keep it up!!
1000000000000000000000000000/10 (And it has little silver arrows darting around it!!!)

Author's Response: *bows* Thank you! =) I tried getting rid of all the "I's", it's not always easy! It's a very long chapter, but there are a lot of events to cover. Thanks for BETA-ing, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Alexarama
Date: 04/23/06 0:57
Chapter: Job Hunting

I absolutly loved Quiditch & Love and have been waiting for the sequel , and now i've read the first chapter, i'm angry. because i NEED to know what her perfect job is :( and charlie left the selfish git. Great chapter by the way :) lol

Author's Response: Don't worry! I just submitted Chapter 2! It's going to be pretty long, but that's because there is a LOT of events to go over! Good eye with catagorizing Charlie...that's something key in the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 04/19/06 14:27
Chapter: Job Hunting

OMG!!! hi, its me, the loyal Quidditch and Love reader and reviewer!! when i accidently came across this i literally did a double take. i just couldn't believe it. Well i can now, cos i have just read it but thats beside the point. I just want to say that the first chap is awesome!! I loved the way you did her emotions over Gringotts and Charlie leaving. It was great! The ending was fab, with the whole blood stuff. I can't wait for the next chappy!!!!!!!! I want to know what her fav job is!!!

Update soooooooon please!!!! 2000000000000000000000000/10 (and is red with blak flashing dots!!!) avid reader fireflower x

Author's Response: Hello Fireflower! Thanks for reviewing! Chapter 2 is coming along should be done soon. ^^ I know the chapter was pretty short, so chapter two will make up for it in size! =D lol.

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