Reviews For Ultimate
Reviewer: EvangelineLongfellow
Date: 12/23/10 3:07
Chapter: Surprise, Surprise

I love this story!!!!!! You should really keep on writing it is wonderful!

Reviewer: BlaireTrask
Date: 01/28/07 21:19
Chapter: Surprise, Surprise

wondeful story! i love it!!

Reviewer: Lady Alanna
Date: 12/19/06 19:12
Chapter: Surprise, Surprise

This story didn't really seem very interesting to me. I don't know why, but I was kinda dissapointed...
The first one was AWESOME, though. I might not have liked this one as much because I like stories that take place when the characters are at school a little better, but that's just me being starange (as usual) . Great job anyway!!!!!

Reviewer: pheonix_princess
Date: 09/20/06 18:20
Chapter: Surprise, Surprise

brilliant,amazing wow.

Author's Response: *bows* Thank you! I really hope you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 09/20/06 14:40
Chapter: Surprise, Surprise

YAY!!! That was an aweosme chapter! And it would NOT have been a grammatical nightmare, you were getting MUCH better!! Thank YOU for letting me beta such an amazing story. This lastr chapter was the perfect one to wrap the whole thing off. The last bit was lovely - and i loved the fact that you didnt make them win. You got them to accpet her instead - far better!!

Hope to see more stories from you in the future!



Author's Response: Aww!! *hugs you* I'm really happy that it got posted this time, I have no clue what happened last time...*shrug* I'll write some more Ari/Charlie fics. I can't just ditch them...=) Thanks again for the review, rating and Beta-ing!!

Reviewer: Captain Chemo
Date: 08/09/06 7:38
Chapter: Hello, Goodbye

YAY!!! or not...because Ari's unhappy...but make her happy (and me) by updating!

Author's Response: I'm typing up Chapter 10 now, which is NOT a short chapter. I actually re-wrote this chapter MANY times, so I apoligize that it took so long. =( But expect an update soon!! =)

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 07/22/06 4:54
Chapter: Hello, Goodbye

good moderator - they get accepted so quickly! :D The ending.... oh boy... i had to laugh! Your article was very good - in an evil twisted kind oif way! Well done! 10000000000000000000/10
And, yes, you are getting better t typing quick without making mistakes!

Author's Response: Yay!!! Thanks so much!! =) I guess the ending kinda lets off some of the strain of the argument. Yes, this chapter did get accepted quickly...three hours after I sent it in, I got the approval message. =O I guess they liked it. XD

Reviewer: Midnight_Girl
Date: 07/19/06 18:44
Chapter: Chasing Ghosts

ooooo please post the next chapter asap

Author's Response: Chapter 9 is with my beta right now. Thanks for the review! =)

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 07/19/06 15:15
Chapter: Chasing Ghosts

Yes! You are right! You are getting better - your spelling is improving by MILES!! This is - once again - a fab chapter. It brings a tear to my eye to think that there is only 2 more chapters... sniff, Anyway! WELL DONE!!!! You have a lovely writing style, keep it up!

Author's Response: XD Thanks! I try to watch out for my spelling, but I type pretty quickly, and I don't notice a LOT of things. Ahh, there may be only two more chapters left, but there will be more series and one-shots to look forward to. =)

Reviewer: pheonix_princess
Date: 07/13/06 11:47
Chapter: Night On the Town

that was a great chapter

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! ^^ I've decided to get ahead of the game, so I've already written the next two chapters. =O Hopefully, the updates will come a lot quicker now! =) Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: fightingokra4life
Date: 07/12/06 23:09
Chapter: Night On the Town

please do update soon... this is one of the only fanfics i will read... little things like seeing a new chapter make my day :)

Author's Response: Expect one to be up in a day or two (If all goes well while it's in queue). Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it so much! =)

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 07/12/06 10:40
Chapter: Night On the Town

Wooot! Well done! Superb chapter! Silly Ari, thats what comes of not eating anything and over doing it!! The opposite of me today! Relaxation and tons of food = birthday!!

Well done! 10/10

Author's Response: Oooh, Happy Birthday!!! =) Enjoy yourself, and stay away from the bubbly. XD Thanks for the review, and thanks for BETA-ing it too! ^^

Reviewer: grim reaper
Date: 07/12/06 0:04
Chapter: Night On the Town


Author's Response: Could you please elaborate on what makes it wierd? Is it wierd in good way or bad way?

Reviewer: Captain Chemo
Date: 07/11/06 21:03
Chapter: Night On the Town

ooooh! cliffie! YAY!

Author's Response: lol, I thought you guys would kill me for leaving such a cliffhanger! XD Expect a (hopefully) quick update, since I'm typing up Chapter 8 right now. Thanks for the review! =)

Reviewer: fightingokra4life
Date: 07/08/06 18:10
Chapter: Trials of Training

will charlie and ari ever work things out? i hope so... i loved reading your last story when they were so in love...

Author's Response: Ahh, that would be spoiling the ending. But ponder this: everytime Ari's hangs out with Leo...who does she think of? =O Thanks for the review, and I hopfully, I'll get done with the next chapter tonight!

Reviewer: pheonix_princess
Date: 07/06/06 13:50
Chapter: Trials of Training

update update

Author's Response: =) I'm working on the next chapter! It's a little hard to write since you don't exactly know what happens at a wizard party, but it's also kinda fun. ^^

Reviewer: Captain Chemo
Date: 07/02/06 6:40
Chapter: Trials of Training

YAY!!! UPDATE!!! that's right Ari! stick it to the man(s)!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol! That's hilarious - you just made my day!! =) I'm glad you liked this chapter, and that little swearing lesson. =O

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 07/02/06 4:05
Chapter: Trials of Training

Whoopeeee!!!!! Another fantastic chapter Ivona! You have a lovely style of writing!!! Glad i was able to help you, and i'm REALLY pleased that it got updated so soon, i mean to say i only beta-d it yesturday night!!! :-) Well done, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks again! I was in shock that it got accepted so soon too. I guess they liked it! =D

Reviewer: fireflower
Date: 06/21/06 0:42
Chapter: Trust Be Told

That was usual. Soz to charlie, but i hate him right now, can't he let her be friends with Leo?? Lol, anyway that chapter came up really quick, i only betad (sp?) it yesterday....not complaining tho!! ;-) Well done !!!! 100000000/10

Author's Response: Yes, it was accepted very quickly, but I'm not complaining! =) Thanks for the review! ^^

Reviewer: Captain Chemo
Date: 06/20/06 21:35
Chapter: Trust Be Told

Sweet. Why was it *sniff* so short!?! Oh well...It was good...that's all that really matters!!!!

Author's Response: I know that it was a bit short, but I covered all that events that I needed to. If I added description as filler, I'd bore you to death. ;) Thank you very much!

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