Wow, I didn't like Umbridge but I wouldn't have killed her off!!
Author's Response: Unfortunately, no matter who was in her position, they would die. I decided to make it Umbridge for dramatic purposes. Just know, she is paving the way for something. She didn't die in fictional vain, as it were.
Straight into action - I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks. I prefer to try to start these things off with a bang, but some of the next few are going to be slightly more mundane. Emphasis on slightly. However, I'm already planning some of the set pieces, it's gonna be good!
Very well written, especially the Gringotts break in. I am curious to know what Voldemort is looking for there. Please continue writing this. Also, Umbridge Ministress??? What a revolting idea! I hope you're going to give her a good come-uppance. (By the way, I don't believe ministress is a word...was it an invention of yours? I don't mean to criticise; I was just curious)
Author's Response: Whoops! I just realized, there is potential for a more exciting reason for Voldy to be at Gringotts, so I'll do that! Thanks again
Very well written, especially the Gringotts break in. I am curious to know what Voldemort is looking for there. Please continue writing this. Also, Umbridge Ministress??? What a revolting idea! I hope you're going to give her a good come-uppance. (By the way, I don't believe ministress is a word...was it an invention of yours? I don't mean to criticise; I was just curious)
Author's Response: The answer to your Gringotts question is not as exciting as it seems, and for that i apologize. And yes, I'm going to have a lot of fun with Umbridge. I think now that ministress was an invention, though I didn't have the intention of inventing a word at the time. So, thank you for reviewing!
