Reviewer: Auror Freya
Date: 06/29/11 11:37
Chapter: One Wedding

This story is so amazing! The plot line is so interesting and made me want to read more. I thought the end was the best! Fred and George deserved it even if it was rather effective their plan.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 05/25/08 8:24
Chapter: One Wedding

A happy ending...lovely.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 05/25/08 8:24
Chapter: Six Tears

I love the French.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 05/25/08 8:23
Chapter: Six Problems

Tres amusante.

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 05/25/08 8:22
Chapter: Six Women

Intriguing.

Reviewer: loony1723
Date: 02/13/08 18:19
Chapter: Six Women

hi

wow

bootifol

Reviewer: loony1723
Date: 02/13/08 18:19
Chapter: Six Women

hi

wow

bootifol

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 11/18/07 21:42
Chapter: One Wedding

amzing story, so clever!!!!!!!!!!11 i really like this alternative eve of wedding!!!!!! Great job:)

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 11/18/07 21:29
Chapter: Six Women

Good story!!! Cant wait to continue reading:)

Reviewer: obsessed x3
Date: 08/28/07 15:02
Chapter: One Wedding

i lovee this story

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: obsessed x3
Date: 08/28/07 15:02
Chapter: One Wedding

i lovee this story

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Diadem
Date: 07/21/07 9:42
Chapter: One Wedding

This is a really good story. I really like the style you write in; it has a proper plot and touches some quite serious topics, while still containing humor. Even the chapter titles are quite poetic!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. I try to write with a little bit of everything. I try to put drama and comedy into all my stories. I don't like stories that are too much of one thing or the other. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 05/12/07 18:34
Chapter: One Wedding

This was a lovely story and I am sorry that I didn't review all the way through, but I just had to finish it! Fantastic job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and don't worry about the reviews.

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 01/30/07 19:48
Chapter: One Wedding

good plot i liked this story

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 01/30/07 19:35
Chapter: Six Women

its good but
a) the spell to move bodies is movilicorpus not wingardium leviosa
b) Ginny can't use magic outside of hogwarts.. she wouldnt dare try the alohomora spell

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. They used the spell lingardium leviosa to make her body float, not to move it. And yes, Ginny can't use magic outside of Hogwarts. My mistake. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 12/14/06 14:02
Chapter: Six Women

Oooh nice start! This is a very funny and enjoyable fic. I love the way you describe the tension with the families. There aren't any mistakes I could find apart from where Fleur's mother tells Fleur to “Put on the dress, vite!” shouldn't that be a ze? Sorry to be annoyingly picky but it's such a great fic and you've done so well with the accents I wouldn't like soemthign like that to get in the way! :)
My favourite line by far is definately:

'Ginny and Gabrielle were left alone in the living room. They gave each other evil stares for a couple of minutes,LOL!!

I found that hilarious, I can just imagine them sitting there glaring at each other!
I also like the letter from the twins at the end and the underlying theme of how 'dificult' girls can be.

Overall very well done, I'm eager to read the rest!

Author's Response: Yes, that "the" should be a "ze". I hadn't caught it, thanks for letting me know. I'll fix it when I find the time. I find it interesting that you said that that line in particular was your favorite. Usually people pick lines that the characters say. Thanks for the review and for reading.

Reviewer: unicorngirl22
Date: 09/28/06 16:39
Chapter: One Wedding

Really cool

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: unicorngirl22
Date: 09/28/06 16:39
Chapter: One Wedding

Really cool

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: mugglegirl713
Date: 08/24/06 19:42
Chapter: One Wedding

I like it! however, in real life, there would be a heck of a lot more violence....

Author's Response: LOL, I wanted to include more violence, but my beta said it was OOC. Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: mugglegirl713
Date: 08/24/06 19:34
Chapter: Six Women

it's pretty good so far! it's going 2 B quite scary when we find out wut the women all do....

Author's Response: Yes, the women can get quite scary

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