Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 06/08/06 7:43
Chapter: Chapter 2- Cloak and Dagger

A chapter filled with suspense. I like it. :D

Oh dear, the trio are in big trouble. The old toad-woman uses Dark curses (again!) ... Imperiused Percy's got a suspect Horcrux ... bad signs. *gulp*

Author's Response: I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Chapter 3 is already in the works, so you won't have to hold your breath too long. Many thanks for adding my story to your favorites!

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 04/04/06 23:38
Chapter: Heliopaths and Headlines

This fiction is really good and well-planned. I was hoping for a more personal interaction between Harry and Dumbledore. You're kind of right, it's almost as though he never died, but the portrait makes it obvious. Nevertheless, I was grinning as I read that part. Good job! :)

Reviewer: rotfangconspirator
Date: 04/04/06 14:55
Chapter: Heliopaths and Headlines

I really liked your story, it was almost as if i was reading something from Rowling's pen. I especially liked the avalanche tournament and yeti not showing up. I thought it was quite creative, something like those little amusing things rowling comes up with. The story has been developed quite well. I eagerly await for the next chapter. One thing, no explanation has been offered about Harry's staying in the school after he had already decided that he would leave it in OOP. What made him change his mind?

Reviewer: mugglemama
Date: 04/03/06 18:58
Chapter: Heliopaths and Headlines

I really like what you've done with your story so far. Well written and very true to character. My only comment/suggestion would be that I would have hoped for a little more personal/comfort in the conversation between Harry and Dumbledore. It would have been the first time they had spoken since his murder, and I think he would have offered reassurance to Harry, not just been caught up in Order business. I like the direction you're taking with Bagman, and I loved that you used the heliopaths (I am expecting Jo to make at least one of Luna's outlandish stories come true). I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I understand what you're saying about the conversation between Harry and Dumbledore, and I do intend to make it more personal as the story progresses (Hint: there is more to Dumbledore's eyes flickering to the other portraits on the wall). I'm delighted that you liked the reintroduction of Bagman and the Heliopaths, and there is more to come of that as well! I am making progress on the second chapter and hope to have it up very soon. Once again, thanks so much!!

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