Reviews For The Broken Soul
Reviewer: snejku
Date: 04/13/07 12:55
Chapter: Chapter 26: Snape's Trial

Well well well you just had to leave us like that :)
You left me with thousends of questions :) like is snape going to be kill or what are the bad and the good news :)
Nice chapter!! I'm waiting to see another one :)
Have a nice day :) though it's friday the 13

Author's Response: We will find out in chapter 28 more about Snape and what is happening with him. Just remember he isn't dead yet, so anything is possible. :)

Reviewer: AnaMolly
Date: 04/03/07 13:17
Chapter: Chapter 26: Snape's Trial

Letís see, Snapeís TrialÖIf he gets off the hook Iím going to be mad that he didnít get what he deserved, but if he gets punished who is going to train Harry? I mean I could care less what happens to him Iím more concerned about Harry getting ready to face Voldemort, and Snape seems to be the only one who can help him. HmmÖIím not sure what I want to happen to himÖCongratulations! Youíve managed to slightly change my mind about Snape in these last few chapters, than all the time and energy my friend has put in the last year to do just that!

Author's Response: ha ha ha, it worked! I can change a person's mind! Yeah, Snape's fate will become slightly more clear in chapter 28. Though, can we ever really know Snape and his destiny. I love his illusive character, but I promise by the end of the story his character will have his motives explained and his destiny revealed. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: pixy0116
Date: 03/23/07 5:03
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

just finished this yesterday and i hafta tell ya I am in love with your story!!! I hope we dont have to wait to long for the next chapter!!!! You are doing an amazing job! I look forward to finding out just what Harry will say at Snapes tiral!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thrilled that you love my story! More is coming so hold on, because the end is closer than you might think. Sadly all great things must come to a close. *sigh*

Reviewer: ioname2you
Date: 03/22/07 1:00
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

once i started reading your story i couldn't stop i read from chapter one til chapter 25 with only taking bathroom breaks i was glue to it can't wait for the second half brilliant keep them coming sorry about spelling

Author's Response: Wow, that's truly a lot to accomplish in one sitting. Congrats! :) I'm so excited that you find my story so captivating. There will be more to come!

Reviewer: AnaMolly
Date: 03/19/07 13:54
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

I'm still wondering if I should trust Snape or not. I definately don't trust him in the HP books, but I'm undecided in your story...
Anyway this is a great story...can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Yeah, Snape is a shifty character. You never know what he's going to do. That's why I love him so much. The unpreditability keeps you on the edge of your seat. Thanks for the review! I should be finishing up with the next chapter soon. :)

Reviewer: Moonysgirl79
Date: 03/18/07 6:19
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

your story is brilliant so far please write more

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I plan on it!

Reviewer: anneke
Date: 03/17/07 12:48
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

wow can't wait until the next chapter :)

Author's Response: I'm waiting on my beta. :)

Reviewer: bite
Date: 03/16/07 18:01
Chapter: Chapter 2: For the Last Time

I find it hard to read because of the spaces.

Author's Response: I'm sorry. I wasn't aware of it. I'll have to go back and fix it. Thanks for telling me!

Reviewer: jm2000
Date: 03/15/07 12:13
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

i haven't reviewed this story before, but i'd just like to say that its great! keep up the good work.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 03/14/07 23:34
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

Oh man. Intense chapter! Godric Gryffindor... well.... Nah, couldn't be.... But still.... God, Dudley's such a sweetie, isn't he? Such a kind, thoughtful, forgiving boy. As long as Harry doesn't get Mrs. Weasley killed. Ah, funny stuff.

Author's Response: lol... Thanks.

Reviewer: phoenix_93
Date: 03/14/07 12:54
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

really good cgapter. keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Phoenixis
Date: 03/14/07 0:48
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

Brilliant chapter! So, Harry is the heir of Gryffindor? An interesting twist, I wonder if Voldemort knows. Or for that matter if other members of the Order know.

The letter from Dudley was really nasty. At least he had the decency to give Harry the box he rightfully owns. Harry getting a letter from his parents is a brilliant idea. A number of fics have this but I still feel that J.K. Rowling should include something like this in Deathly Hallows.

I look forward to your next chapter, which hopefully is going to have Snape's hearing and some news about the destroying of Gryffindor's armour. Harry being the heir of Gryffindor makes it even more ironic that Harry was almost killed by an artifact of his ancestor.

The hearing of Snape is going to provide a few more twists and turns in the story, I presume. But whatever happens, I hope Snape proves his true alleigance. This topsy-turvy-Snapey ride is otherwise going to make me really confused.

Anyway, brilliant update, once again and I eagerly look forward to reading more soon.

Author's Response: No one but Harry, Ron, Ginny, Hermione, and Dumbledore knows about Harry being the heir of Gryffindor, and Harry's parents. Though I think Voldemort may suspect it... The next chapter is all about Snape's trial. In fact that is the title of the chapter. Chapter 27 will give more info on the goblins and what has happened to the suit Horcrux. Also, look for Snape's alligaince to become more clear in chapter 28. :) Thanks for your wonderful review. I will get the next chapter up as soon as I can.

Reviewer: emmawatsonishot456
Date: 03/13/07 21:25
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

wow cant wait for the next chp. Hurry up mugglenet

Author's Response: Chapter 26 is still out with my beta. It should be up soon.

Reviewer: emmawatsonishot456
Date: 03/13/07 20:49
Chapter: Chapter 23: The Secret Passage

nice

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: snejku
Date: 03/13/07 17:49
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

Sorry for the mistakes I think I drank too much :)

Author's Response: lol... thants alright. Have a drink for me. :)

Reviewer: snejku
Date: 03/13/07 17:47
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

OK I got an email which said that there was an update and when I clicked on it the page went down. So I made a small break for a pint. When I came back everything was warking :)
I must admit that this chapter was very .... touching. I must admit that I cried in some parts :) I've learnt something about Harry's parrents and I wonder if you are going to develop the content of journals which Harry got from his mother? Also i'd like to now how long the story is going to be? (don't get me wrong I want it to be as long as it could be )
Thx in advance for you answers.

Author's Response: I'm so touched that you enjoyed the chapter so much. Look for the journal to be explored a little more. He will become closer to his mother through it. Also, know it may not seem like it because I have so many storyllines going on right now, but look for the story to run to 40 to 45 chapters. So the story is really getting close to winding up fairly soon. Thanks so much for your lovely review!

Reviewer: The Seeker
Date: 03/13/07 17:17
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

You took us through a nice range of emotions there! From Harry's frustration over the Muggle killings to Quidditch and the gift from his parents. Well done, especially well done was Ginny's handling of Harry's mood at the start of the chapter.

Looks like Tolman is setting the stage to extort as much gold from Harry as he can. Will we find out soon?

Author's Response: Thank you!!! Look for chapter 27 to find out what Tolam is up to. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 03/13/07 16:23
Chapter: Chapter 25: The Wooden Box

So there's a trial against Snape. Good! Life in Azkaban and a nice Dementor kiss, please! What's up with the goblins? Jeez, I'm suffering over that one.
The Christmas break was a nice relief.
And the quick update was a real treat.
Keep the good work!

Author's Response: Don't worry the goblin storyline will be wrapped up in chapter 27 and the fate of Snape ??? We'll let's just say he goes to trial in Chapter 26. What happens after that is anyones guess. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 03/12/07 22:20
Chapter: Chapter 24: Golden Opportunity

O-oh! This is getting worrisome! That goblin is awful! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Next chapter is in the for valaidation. Thanks for your reveiw!

Reviewer: MankyOldBoot
Date: 03/12/07 20:45
Chapter: Chapter 24: Golden Opportunity

Can I please beat Tolman over the head with a manky old boot?

Author's Response: lol... be my guess. He desires it.

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