Reviews For The Broken Soul
Reviewer: AnaMolly
Date: 05/24/07 14:27
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Lost Memory

I understand why Snape would love Lily, although I don’t think so my self, but I highly doubt…or maybe its what I really want to believe, that Lily wouldn’t even have considered Snape in any way. You might have slightly changed my mind about him not being evil…but I still think he’s a slimy git, and I could care less if he’s happy or not. But I have to admit that this makes for an interesting twist, and a good reason why Dumbledore believed him. I really do hope Snape and Lily didn’t have any type of relationship, because that would devastate Harry (and me)…like he hasn’t gone through enough already, to know that his mum and Snape had feelings for each other…I think I got sick to my stomach too. Anyway I love how you wrote this chapter, at first I was lost as to what was going on and I thought I had missed something, but then you explained it very well. Can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Snape is a mysterious charaacter. That is why I love to write about him. Anything can happen with him. I would also like to think that he does have a heart, or at least had one. As for Lily, I don't really think she ever was more than friends with Snape, but then who knows. Their relationship will become more clear in my story in chapter 30. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Abz
Date: 05/24/07 12:46
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Lost Memory

That was really unexpected. It does make a lot of sense that Snape loved Lilly though. Excellent and i can't wait to see what kind of trouble Harry's in

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I love to know that I threw a twist that wasn't expected. It makes reading stories more interesting and writing them a lot of fun.

Reviewer: AnaMolly
Date: 05/21/07 15:03
Chapter: Chapter 27: Heart and Soul

Wow, there were definitely places in the story where I was holding my breath without even realizing it. I’m just so glad Hermione is fine…she was really brave facing Dolohov…then again she is a Gryffindor. Let me tell you I already love Ron, but this chapter made me go crazier for him…he’s just wonderful! They got the horcrux back and on top of that the goblins joined them too, you can never have too many allies. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Ron is such a great character and I love him and Hermione as a duo. That is why I placed them as the main characters in this chapter. I thought they deserved some spotlight time. :)

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 05/10/07 17:32
Chapter: Chapter 27: Heart and Soul

AHHH. The tension is unbearable! Did they get the horocrux? What will Dolohov do? He has such a big house! Wow! It was such a nice descriptive chapter. I can't wait for the next one.... =D

Author's Response: The next chapter will answer one of your questions, as for the other... You may have to wait awhile. Sorry. :( Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: mommcgonagall
Date: 05/09/07 18:56
Chapter: Chapter 27: Heart and Soul

Bloody brilliant! The best of the lot that I've read! In my favorites after the first paragraph, and that's saying something!
Eagerly awaiting updates.
Characters pretty true to their nature in canon. Keep it up!

Weasley is our King!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I always love to hear that my readers love my story. There is still more to come, so hold on. :)

Reviewer: Sinner
Date: 05/08/07 21:19
Chapter: Chapter 14:The Ninth Memory

I like this story so fare

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: The Seeker
Date: 05/07/07 17:42
Chapter: Chapter 27: Heart and Soul

Very intense chapter, especially since Harry isn't in it. It seems Tolman's mistake actually brought good luck, since the goblins are now with the Light Side.

But with each question you answer, several more came up, which means we need the next chapter quickly, please.

As always, your writing made the chapter move very quickly and your descriptions made everything easy to follow. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your review. And yes I always like to satisfy the reader by not holding out on unanswered questions for too long, but I have to introduce new ones to keep you coming back for more! he he he... Oh, and next chapter is off to my beta.

Reviewer: snejku
Date: 05/07/07 15:55
Chapter: Chapter 27: Heart and Soul

Another chapter :)
Yessssss Finaly :)
Good chapter! Packed with action! And one of my favourite creater appeared (Telford). I wonder how's the trial going on :) We are about to see that in next chapter I presume
Update quickly :) I mean in a week time :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! :) I'm glad you are enjoying Telford. I think he's my favorite that I've made up so far. There will definately be more about Snape's trial in the next chapter, but I doubt you will be expecting what's coming *rubbing hands together wickedly*. I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: MandrakeMs
Date: 05/01/07 12:34
Chapter: Chapter 26: Snape's Trial

Great!! I just cant wait for the rest of it!

Author's Response: It's coming! :)

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 05/01/07 9:58
Chapter: Chapter 26: Snape's Trial

Argh!...... it ended! please update soon!

Author's Response: The next chapter is up and another is on it's way!

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 05/01/07 8:20
Chapter: Chapter 21: Heroes, Part 2

you killed remus

Author's Response: I know. So sorry, but the story must go on.

Reviewer: RemusdelaNoche
Date: 04/29/07 3:52
Chapter: Chapter 26: Snape's Trial

GREAT story so far... im looking forward to finishing it. As you commented on chapter 21 being the midpoint of the story, i only hope the rest is finished and posted before HPDH is released!

Author's Response: I am trying. My last estimate the story will run to about 39 chapter. So the end is in sight. If I get there before the release of book 7, is still up in the air. I will do my very best, because I want it done before then too. :)

Reviewer: truelight
Date: 04/24/07 20:01
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Locket

i hope he did not trust snape, but you never know. something i could tell he is brave

Author's Response: We'll see. Thanks for your review. :)

Reviewer: sweetdevil
Date: 04/21/07 15:30
Chapter: Chapter 24: Golden Opportunity

“If you guys insist on making out, I’m going somewhere else,” Ron complained as he opened the office door and let out a yell.

"making out" is an Americanisim, "snogging" would be the correct term ^_^
Otherwise, I love this story!! One of the best I have read!

Author's Response: Ooh, thank you for catching that. I'll have to change that. I get so into the story I forget the little things. Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 04/18/07 14:49
Chapter: Chapter 26: Snape's Trial

Whoaaa. What happened at Bill's??!! And who was the old man?? Ahh. SO many questions and so few answers! Please, please update soon! Such a good chapter. =D

Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry, you'll have to wait for the next chapter. I just finished it and I sent it off to my beta.

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 04/18/07 11:57
Chapter: Chapter 12: No Mercy

What a brilliant twist! I love it! I was surprised to see Snape. I think you did an great job with his character. The memory thing from Dumbldore was wonderful idea, something I've thought about alot. The line at the end was fantastic. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you for all your wonderful reviews! I'm so excited that your enjoying the story so much! There's more to come!

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 04/18/07 11:37
Chapter: Chapter 11: Missing

That was so sad. I am really into this, I really want to know how Harry is! I hope he's alright. Great job with the emotions!

Author's Response: Thanks! Poor Harry and Ginny. The next chapter should answer some of you questions. :)

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 04/16/07 12:56
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Locket

OOHH, I was wondering when Harry would take Snape up on that invatation!! This was a really good chapter, I liked the character you have with Beckly. I can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Look for chapter twelve to really explain a lot about Snape and Harry. It even has a little of Dumbledore thrown in. :) Hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 04/16/07 12:48
Chapter: Chapter 9: Back to Grimmuald Place

That was a great reconciliation! I loved the dialouge between Harry and Ginny. Harry and Dung was also sort of funny, yet seriously gripping. Will they find the locket? Is it even the one they are looking for!? I am really enjoying this!!

Author's Response: I figured it was time that Harry and Ginny had a heart to heart. You can only go for so long ignoring the huge elephant in the room like that. Thanks for your reviews!

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 04/16/07 12:37
Chapter: Chapter 8: Godric's Hollow

That was really good! I think it was very nice of Sirius to restore the house for Harry. Looks like he did a good job. I like he fact that Lily wanted Harry to know how Muggles lived. Really great all around, and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted Sirius to do something really nice for Harry even though he's not around anymore. It was kind of like reaching from the grave and giving Harry a pat on the shoulder saying, "It's okay. Everything will be alright no matter how bad it gets."

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