Reviews For The Broken Soul
Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 07/16/07 1:07
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

I really liked the end, all mysterious-like...

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: harry potter girl12
Date: 07/06/07 22:44
Chapter: Chapter 29: Lupin's Legacy

please don`t leave us hanging

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 07/02/07 2:49
Chapter: Chapter 29: Lupin's Legacy

Oh. Well that's just great. Not that it wasn't expected; Harry always gets caught while doing something stupid. Why didn't they just Apparate out of the hospital from outside Tonks' room or something?

But Tonks and Remus, so sad. I'm dying to see the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, that's Harry for you. Anyways, they didn't apparate because their are anti-apparation spells on the hospital. I hope it doesn't take too long for the next chapter to come up, because I have chapter 31 ready to be posted. :)

Reviewer: nutmeg22
Date: 06/28/07 16:21
Chapter: Chapter 29: Lupin's Legacy

I LOVE this story, it's so good!
How can Harry be arrested???? How will he escape????
I really liked the Harry/Ginny scenes, they show his frustration so well; also, you got Tonks' emotions spot on, I felt so sorry for her. Hmm...so is Remus Jr's name really going to be Remus Jr? (Ok that might not have made any sense lol)
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad to hear it! Yes, the baby is named after Remus. I really couldn't come with something better and I figure it was one way Tonks could hold onto Remus in some way. :)

Reviewer: Phoenixis
Date: 06/28/07 4:33
Chapter: Chapter 29: Lupin's Legacy

Awesome chapter! You portrayed Tonks' emotions really well in all those scenes. That was just brilliant.

Harry's time in hiding was so similar to that of Sirius, in the sense that they both wanted to get out. If Harry would have realized this, he would have stayed at Godric's Hollow. It's uncanny, how similar the situation is. But, no such luck, it seems.

I loved the conversations between Harry and Ginny. I'm glad they had a good Valentine's Day.

A thought just struck me, what is the possibility that the person who just arrested Harry is an Order member. Oh, please let it be one.

Once again, this was a great chapter. It's a real treat, reading this story. I really do love it.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter and hope you'll be able to post it up soon.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the lovely review! And no, unfortunately an Order member was not the one to arrest Harry, but good try. I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoy the story so much. The next chapter is up for validation now!

Reviewer: Oharachic1
Date: 06/27/07 19:39
Chapter: Chapter 29: Lupin's Legacy

great chapter...keep it up!!

Author's Response: Thank you. There is more on the way!

Reviewer: Sinner
Date: 06/27/07 17:27
Chapter: Chapter 29: Lupin's Legacy

Great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 06/27/07 17:10
Chapter: Chapter 29: Lupin's Legacy

NOO! Harry can't be under arrest! NO! This is not fair. And a cliffie! Are you trying to kill me? And what is Tonks going to name her baby? So was Snape and Lily romantically involved? Ohh. You are most definitely trying to kill me.. but to make up for it you can update soon! =D

Author's Response: Tonks baby is named after Remus. As for the rest... the next chapter is up for validation. :) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 06/27/07 16:51
Chapter: Chapter 29: Lupin's Legacy

AAAAAARRRRGGGGHHHH! Please update soon!


Author's Response: The next chapter is waiting for validation.

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 06/27/07 11:09
Chapter: Chapter 29: Lupin's Legacy

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! There will be more to come very shortly. :)

Reviewer: Phoenixis
Date: 06/18/07 3:24
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Lost Memory

The last few chapters were brilliant. I loved reading them. The reason why Dumbledore trusted Snape is quite a common one, though you pulled it off brilliantly. I actually am against the idea that Snape could have had a relationship with Lily. Boy, that's gross. To me the best reason for Snape's loyalty could just be that he was friends with Lily. But till now, I don't think we can be sure about what you really meant there. The picture in the locket actually doesn't explain much except that Snape and Lily were friends at one time, even though it could have been more than that. The rest of was just Harry's deduction.

It's great news that the armour has been destroyed and that the goblins are the new allies for the good side in the fight against Voldemort.

There's something I was wondering about. It's been a while since I have been a regular reader for any of the stories that I have been reading, so I'm a little confused about the plot in a few of the stories. Whatever Harry used to get himself and Snape out of the cell where he was being held, did you mention somewhere earlier what it was or not? I've completely forgotten and for that I'm sorry. If you did mention it, could you please tell me what it was.

Anyway, great chapters and I would love to read more soon. I hope the next chapter gets validated soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for being such an advid reader! The relationship between Snape and Lily will be explained a little more in chapter 30. I agree with the idea of them actually having a relationship is gross, so you just may see that reflection in my story. :) Oh, don't worry about asking me questions. Ask away! As for the object that he used to get Snape out of his cell, no it was not explained or used in any other chapters. I sort of left it to the imagination, but in my mind he was using a new gadget from the Weasley twins. Something that was small, but has a big bang. It is also undetectable as a weapon. Thanks for the lovely review. :)

Reviewer: LouPotter
Date: 06/02/07 13:28
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Lost Memory

Yet another brilliant chapter. Please keep 'em comin a.s.a.p! Thank you for exccellent entertainment!

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is FINALLY up, or at least up for validation. :)

Reviewer: Snoopygonewilder
Date: 05/26/07 18:33
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Lost Memory

Wow, good thing... I love the whole Tarantony ting you did... Its one of my favorite styles of writings... I love thw whole break out scene... The scene at the ministry... great... Keep on writing this great story//

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you loved it! I absolutley LOVED writing it. In fact besides Heroes 1&2, it may be my favorite chapter.

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 05/25/07 19:40
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Lost Memory

OOOO.... erie. Snape is sorry? Wow. Amazing! I loved the breakout. I can just picture a headline from the Daily Prophet say Hero Harry Potter Turned Bad? Haha. Its not funny if you believe it but it is if you don't believe it. Well, keep the chapter coming, they are amazing! =D

Author's Response: LOL... yes I find that title hilarous. And we will see what happens to the wizarding world when their saviour's loyalties are in question. Ooh, the drama.... Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SimpleMinds
Date: 05/25/07 14:45
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Lost Memory

Absolutely amazing! At first i thought that the snape/dumbledore vow was a bit obvious but you pulled it off! I NEED more of this story!

Author's Response: Twists are so much fun. You never know what's going to happen in this story, so hold on. More is on the way.

Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/25/07 13:16
Chapter: Chapter 1: Consequences

Well that certainly is a fearful start. Can't wait to see what happens.

Author's Response: I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: skippy agogo
Date: 05/24/07 16:50
Chapter: Chapter 7: Dudley

Way ooc for Harry to give a damn about his rellies. Dudders, meh, who cares... I doubt that voldy would kill the durselys until after harry was gone, but that's me.

Author's Response: To each their own. I happen to disagree.

Reviewer: adele
Date: 05/24/07 16:36
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Lost Memory

This chapter had some really great twists! But the Lilly/Snape pairing is believable, I hope you'll elaborate more on thier story. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, look for chapter 30 to explain their relationship more.

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 05/24/07 14:57
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Lost Memory

That is too sweet for words!!! Update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!! Perhaps in a day or two?

Author's Response: Sorry I wasn't able to update in a day or two. :( I finally submitted the next chapter. I hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: pheonix_song_719
Date: 05/24/07 14:39
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Lost Memory

Excellent. Brilliant work dear!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!

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