Reviews For The Broken Soul
Reviewer: Plagued_Pirate
Date: 01/01/07 17:56
Chapter: Chapter 2: For the Last Time

Nice! same exact good-bye i'd give ;).

Author's Response: lol... thanks!

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 12/31/06 9:07
Chapter: Chapter 18: Potion's Master

Dun dun dun....
Great job!

Miss Radcliffe~

Author's Response: Thanks! More to come soon.

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 12/30/06 12:54
Chapter: Chapter 18: Potion's Master

Off to the Chamber of Secrets! That potion sounded really yucky, but it got the job done. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: dun dun dun... what happens next? My lips are sealed! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: viator
Date: 12/29/06 22:36
Chapter: Chapter 18: Potion's Master

Excelent!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll have the next chapter up soon. Keep a sharp eye out!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 12/28/06 14:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: Consequences

Poor Draco. And Remus! He isn't...dead, is he? He can't be gone, it's not fair! He was still young, like Sirius! You're making me cry.

Author's Response: sorry... :( Keep reading not everything isn't what it seems. And here is a tissue.

Reviewer: abbycadabra
Date: 12/28/06 12:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: Consequences

NOT REMUS! =[ I don't like the way this is going already. But still, good work. Even if I do hate you. Just kidding, lol.

Author's Response: lol... keep reading it gets even better. :)

Reviewer: viator
Date: 12/23/06 15:30
Chapter: Chapter 17:Deep Wounds

This is the best story I've read, it is amazing! Keep it coming.

Author's Response: ooops...

Reviewer: viator
Date: 12/23/06 15:29
Chapter: Chapter 17:Deep Wounds

This is the best story I've read, it is amazing! Keep it coming.

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreiciate that! Next chapter is up!

Reviewer: altanna
Date: 12/22/06 13:44
Chapter: Chapter 17:Deep Wounds

I can't take it!!!!! More please!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Next chapter is up!

Reviewer: Castlewizard27
Date: 12/21/06 18:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: Consequences

I feel that you have managed to bring a sense of Rowling to your story, but also placed your own spin on the characters. I especially enjoy the way that you manage to keep Snape in a grey area between good and evil. Also kudos on being one of the few writers I've read so far who don't make Ginny out to be a weepy schoolgirl. I think you captured her perfectly, I can't wait to see the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you that review! It was very insightful and lets me know I'm on the right track. I love reviews like this. Thanks again and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. :)

Reviewer: GreenMan1966
Date: 12/21/06 9:56
Chapter: Chapter 18: Potion's Master

Check your grammar on your author's note!
- Manky Old Boot (GreenMan1966)

Author's Response: Ooops... Thanks. It's changed.

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 12/19/06 21:46
Chapter: Chapter 17:Deep Wounds

Okay, whose pregnant? Tonks? hmmm I don't like the way Harry and Ginny left things. I'm really torn, I don't think either of them are right. I see both sides, Ginny feeling like Harry doesn't trust her and Harry not ready to open up. I'm glad Hermione will be okay. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Since you guessed right, yes Tonks is pregnant. Poor Ginny and Harry you have to wonder if things will ever be right between them, but consider the obstacles they have to go through. Rest assured I want to see them work things out as much as you. :)

Reviewer: JulieC
Date: 12/10/06 15:00
Chapter: Chapter 16:Traitor

wonderful story, cant wait for an update

Author's Response: Thank you. Next chapter has been submitted just waiting on valadation.

Reviewer: Frenchfan
Date: 12/07/06 13:17
Chapter: Chapter 16:Traitor

Your story is absolutely amazing! I've found it out several hours ago and I couldn't take my eies off it until now! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I'm so glad you are enjoying it. I just updated the next chapter. So hopefully it won't take long to get valalidated.

Reviewer: moonyt
Date: 11/13/06 21:32
Chapter: Chapter 16:Traitor

nnnnoooooo! write another chapter quick!

Author's Response: I should be updating soon.

Reviewer: lilys_daughter
Date: 11/10/06 10:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: Consequences

awesome!!! keep writin!!!

Author's Response: Thank!!! I plan on it!!!

Reviewer: GreenMan1966
Date: 11/09/06 15:48
Chapter: Chapter 16:Traitor

HURRY! I just read this from the beginning and I can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: Glad to hear you chose my story to read. Hopefully I'll have the next chapter up real soon.

Reviewer: fangedphoenix
Date: 11/08/06 16:19
Chapter: Chapter 16:Traitor

i should probably start this story again from the start cos i 've forgotten a majority of what came before...

Author's Response: Oh, I hate when that happens. It's the plaque of a long drawn out story. Sorry.

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 11/08/06 14:36
Chapter: Chapter 16:Traitor

Evil cliffie! I can't wait to find out what/where that address leads them. Will Hermioine be okay? Good chapter, very exciting! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you. There will be plenty more. So keep an eye out. :)

Reviewer: bigworm0808
Date: 10/02/06 22:50
Chapter: Chapter 15: Midnight Encounters

Very good story, I cant wait for the next chapter get it up ASAP please lol.

Author's Response: Thank you. I will soon.

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