Reviews For The Broken Soul
Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 08/29/07 8:38
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

I just wanted to say that I went to the other site and finished reading this story. Thanks for sending the link, it was really helpful. :D It was a very good ending and I enjoyed reading the whole thing.

Author's Response: You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 08/16/07 17:08
Chapter: Chapter 21: Heroes, Part 2

sorry, scavenger hunt!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 08/16/07 17:08
Chapter: Chapter 21: Heroes, Part 2

Remus watched on with satisfaction as Greyback fell to the ground. That should give Harry at least a good head start. He felt the energy leave his body as his wounds painfully reminded him of his own predicament. Remus felt his body shudder and his wand hand fell to his side. Someone picked the wand and stood over him. He saw those familiar emerald eyes staring back at him.


ďHarry, go. ItĎs too late to save me,Ē he gasped.


The young man disappeared from sight and Remus noticed that the light was becoming dimmer. The moon would be up soon and for the first time he could remember, he welcomed it with a smile as he realized he would never again have to face the change into that brute of a creature. Finally after all of these years he was free. A vision of beauty filled his sight as he remembered every curve and line of his life. Her name rested on his lips as he took his last breath, ďSugar Pops.Ē
i claim this! i claim Moony's death! *sobs*

Reviewer: midnitepotter
Date: 08/11/07 18:54
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

Thank goodness that it's actually finished though!! This is the most anticipated fanfic that I always look up to see if there are any updates...it's wonderful!!!


I'll be over there at HPFF, and thanks for telling us!!!

Author's Response: Glad you've looked forward to it! And I just couldn't leave you guys hanging! Happy reading!

Reviewer: shakestuffup
Date: 08/11/07 16:26
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

i read the whole thing over at HPFF it was GREAT!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Professor_Chris
Date: 08/07/07 9:10
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

Great story, looking forward to seeing the rest.

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 07/26/07 18:51
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

Wow, shocking ending there. But I'm confused: why should Harry be dead? Were all of the other Ministry prisoners killed, too, and he was the only one left?

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: Debbie_Lou
Date: 07/26/07 15:01
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

WOW ! that's all I've got to say
I've been reading this story all day non-stop
it's simply amazing !
&& I particulary enjoy this little cliff hanger
update soon !

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 07/25/07 15:36
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

oh this is getting good i hope you up date very soon i realy like this story. i hope to read more you are a very good writer.

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: pojtilwj216
Date: 07/25/07 3:02
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

i dnt understand but i love ur story

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: midnitepotter
Date: 07/21/07 2:12
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

WOW, I've read through this whole thing in one reading...and I must say, your plot twists are unlike any other fics I've read!! I love your writing style, and I can see how it's changed from chapter 1 to now...it's so much more exciting! Yeah...I definitely think that this needs more attention.


Keep it up, and I got my eye out for you :D

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 07/20/07 16:14
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

AHH! Thank goodness Harry is okay and alive. Haha. I loved the part where you had Ginny write in the diary to tell what has been happenin g lately. Wait there are 2 different diaries right? Harry's and then Lily's? I am also relieved Lily and Snape were just friends! Well update soon.. hopefully before the 7th comes out.. actually it comes out tonight.. I am so excited! =D

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 07/18/07 17:31
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

That was some unexpected ending.
Nice chapter! Hope Neville makes it.

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: HarryandGin27
Date: 07/18/07 14:04
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

I just read this entire fanfic in one go. WOW. You are a super talented writer, I love how you portray all the characters. (Especially harry and ginny, do you think we could have more moments with those two?) I do have one question, if lily and snape were such good friends how come he was so awful to her in that memory harry saw when snape was giving him occulmecy lessons? just wondering..
FACNTASTIC job. i cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: Snoopygonewilder
Date: 07/17/07 13:54
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

Wow, I just read this chapter... and I can't believe the ending of it, I was really upset when I couldn't continue to the next chapter because the mods haven't put it through... not that mad... That was an amazing ending, I love how mad-eye is speaking to Harry, always mistrusting, "the question is, why are you still alive Mr. Potter." so like him..... great stuff...can't wait for more.... Brenda G.P.

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: dorrkeek
Date: 07/16/07 23:43
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux


Iíve been reading the story since twelve something this even and I love it. SNAPE IS A GOOD GUY yes! Anyway, I love it - the cliffy at the end . . . maybe Harryís father necklace had some say in his mystery survival. That boy has more lives the slyest cats, I swear on everything that is Harry Potter! Waiting until the next validation . . .!

- lynnie 071607

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006
Date: 07/16/07 10:58
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

wait a minute is this the same weapon from book five or a different one??? and also can you hurry up on the next chapter i really want to read it...:)

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: pheonix_song_719
Date: 07/16/07 10:22
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

Omg i hate cliff hangers :( its awesome! cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: AnaMolly
Date: 07/16/07 10:19
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

WHAT?! How can the people in the ministry just die like that? Wow this was a chapter full of surprises. They were able to find the fifth horcrux, although Neville had to risk his life for it. And thank you so much for clarifying the relationship Lily and Severus had, it put mine, and Harryís mind, at ease about that whole situation. But the whole thing about the ministry is just mind-boggling! Please, please donít let Harry be Voldemortís secret weapon or anything of that sort. But I am wondering why nothing happened to Harry? Canít wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

Reviewer: nutmeg22
Date: 07/16/07 8:46
Chapter: Chapter 30: The Fifth Horcrux

oohh interesting ending...who's gonna be the Minister now? Or will there just be complete chaos? Can't wait for the next chapter, this one was excellent!

Author's Response: Dear Reader, I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be updating my story The Broken Soul on Mugglenet. This decision was a tough one, but I have decided that due to the unfriendliness of Mugglenet submission policies and my limited time schedule (I will be having a baby in a few months) this is necessary. I find it too much of a hassle to submit my chapter, wait for weeks on end to have it validated, and then have it rejected for very small details or have the chapter validated and not show as validated on the website. If the latter happens then the moderator has to send the error off to a coder to fix which can take a day to a week or more. I understand that Mugglenet is busy and that they have a lot of submissions to go through, but I donít think it is fair for such long waits for the readers or myself. So I will be abandoning this story, but donít get too upset because my story is posted on HPFF (and itís completed!). So instead of messing with two websites, I will now only have to deal with one. If you would like to continue to read my story click, on the following link, which will take you to my author page http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?showuid=62783. I apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause for you. I appreciate you as a reader and that is why I am emailing you to let you know of what will be happening. I hope to see you on HPFF! Cynthia (silverfox)

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