*Mouth is slightly opened* Wow! I like it! I've tried writing poems, but they never turn out the way I want them to. LOL!
I love how your poem is so vivid and just ...Well, I'd say a jaw dropper! Good job!
wow. that was really good. it brings back all that sadness after HBP. 10/10.
Good Job! Very well written.
*tear* *sniff* 9/10, I like your style