That is a great story so far! I'm going to tell people to read it on the beta readers forum! Is this your first fanfic? If not, could you tell me your other stories? I really like your style of writing!
Author's Response: Ag, I hate it when my I review and it doubles, lol.
the flashback was good and you had James and Sirius play off of eachother very well. Im interested to see when they meet Peter. I liked Sirius's arrogance, though I never pictured him with short brown hair. (note- I may have just read that wrong or something) Well done, a good start and I'm interested to see how it goes.
Author's Response: Thanks...James and Sirius are my all-time favorite HP characters. Well, I gave Sirius short brown (I think I meant black) hair because I can't imagine an 11-year-old with long hair, can you? He'll grow it out...thanks for reviewing!!!
I really like this story. It's an interesting look at Lupin when he was young! Keep going!!!
Author's Response: First review! Yippeee! Thanks for reviewing!!!!