Awwwwwwww! It's so sad! I WUV RON!!!! But this is such a sweet poem! You're very talented! I'm gonna go read some more of your poems!!!!
Author's Response: thank you! i really appreciate all your reviews! ok wlel i gotta go study for my stupid finals! >_< thx again!
Rest in Peace, Ron.
Author's Response: thx for reviewing!
For the most part, it's decent. A few grammatical and spelling errors, but overall a nice poem. I like the free-form, but with the message you're trying to get across it might have been a bit better rhymed. 7/10.
Author's Response: thanks! but just for the record, poetry has no grammatical rules (actually it has no rules at all) and thats why i love it so much. but thank you SO MUCH for reviewing! i LOVE it when people do that!