Reviews For Blue Eyes Scheming
Reviewer: ceres51892
Date: 10/08/09 8:25
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

Awwwww/ =[ Poor Draco! It made me so sad when he curled up around his pillow and cried.

Stupid dumb Ron! Why couldn't he just explain it better??? I want things to be better! I also don't want this to end.

I need more Ron/Draco in my life. *laughs*


Reviewer: Nerissa_vampirechick
Date: 04/28/09 5:06
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

I've just read all three of your 'Blue' series, so far. They are absolutely brilliant.
Will there be any more?
I really hope there will
Jenny :)

Reviewer: mugglish
Date: 06/14/08 18:13
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

Hi. I've just read all three of these (there are only 3 right? If you've written more... I definitely want to know about it!). I'm a bit of a fan of same-sex pairings but it's rare to find stories as good as these. You very cleverly made the unlikely pairing believable, wrote very well and are apt at writing a one shot... short and sweet but without the sudden, jarring ending that you often see. I think the trick lies in your appropriate level of canon use... I love the way it all fits in with the books.
Well done. I think you should seriously consider doing regular fiction one day.

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 03/13/08 21:16
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

Wow! I read all three of the Blue series and loved them all; though I really really wish you'd write another about *after* the fifth-year-reconciliation, because I want to see these two happy again!

Reviewer: werloser22
Date: 01/09/08 11:12
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

poor Draco his heart is now broken, but I love it. Is there going to be another sequence to this one?

Reviewer: Padfoot519
Date: 08/23/07 0:31
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

no! they must get back together

Reviewer: shadow123
Date: 07/18/07 10:29
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

I'm not really a big fan of slash, but I do think you're a very talented writed. We need another story, though!

Reviewer: spideresque
Date: 03/20/07 17:35
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

I really like your stories, and I hope you write more! Until reading this, I never pictured Ron and Draco as a pairing.

Author's Response: There's a few in Seren's files, too, if you like the pairing. Thanks!

Reviewer: Snapes_secret
Date: 01/27/07 8:43
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

The subtle selection of the word 'companion' speaks volumes. You've a deft hand, as usual.

Any possibilities of another "Blue Eyes" tale? Perhaps relating to the whole Lavender "Won Won" bit? Did Ron turn to Lavender because he couldn't turn to Draco? I'd be interested in seeing Draco's take on the whole thing.

Yes, I'm shamelessly offering you plot bunnies. I'd send over some dark chocolate and firewhisky if I thought it would help.

Author's Response: Definite possibilities, and by all means I won't turn down the chocolates and firewhiskey. ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: _Sirius_Obsession_
Date: 11/17/06 22:00
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

Oh sad... *cries*

Is it all over now? forever? and ever?

But they were so good together!!!!

Author's Response: It does look a right mess for them, doesn't it? There's a bunny getting fed up in the bunny cages, though. One of these days, thanks to Masked One, it really will grow into a good Bigwig of a rabbit. Thanks for the encouragement!

Reviewer: DA_twins
Date: 10/22/06 19:03
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

creepy u have a sick mind

Author's Response: This space is generally reserved for constructive criticism, of which this review is not an excellent example. To all future reviewers -- you will be answered respectfully and politely if you use more-or-less correct grammar, know your punctuation keys, and do not use netspeak. Nobody demands that you like the story. I do expect that reviewers will obey the rules of the site, however. Also, be prepared to say what, exactly, makes the story creepy and sick. Otherwise your review may be considered a homophobic rant and deleted by whatever mod is in a mood this week.

Reviewer: Everlasting
Date: 10/05/06 18:52
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

awww :[ that's so sad.. to be honest, i cried. you're a really good writer.

Author's Response: Thanks! *passes tissues*

Reviewer: amortentia maker
Date: 10/03/06 18:40
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

i want some hot gay action!

Author's Response: ... Which presumably meant something like, "I've really enjoyed this series, and hope that someday soon you will reunite Ron and Draco in a meaningful, mutually satisfactory, loving relationship." Yes, I'm also a Lemony Snicket fan. Thanks for reviewing, and I'll see if the plotbunnies cooperate. If the action is too hot for Mugglenet, well, it'll be out there somewhere.

Reviewer: Elita
Date: 08/26/06 13:52
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

No way! how dissapointing, please write more, you couldnt possibly know what it would mean to me, and im sure many others in my position, Thankyou for what you have written, Elita X

Author's Response: More? Still brewing, I'm afraid, and seems to be in the mental queue behind a few others. I've dratted the plotbunnies and their power squabbles before. Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 08/10/06 13:07
Chapter: Ron/Draco III


Author's Response: What?

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 07/19/06 21:55
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

A wondeful third installment in this series. I feel so sorry for Draco. Love the explanation for the song (and indirectly for Ron's strong reaction to it)! I hope you make another addtion to the "Blue" series soon. A happy one? :D

Author's Response: Ron's strong reaction -- oh, yes, Draco can be a very evil boy when he feels rejected! And poor Ron has to put it all down to general nerves. Uh-oh. Bunny. Drat.

Author's Response: Oh, and thanks for the triple-pack reviews!

Reviewer: Bestidea
Date: 07/15/06 12:02
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

I love this pairing! Never thought I'd enjoy a D/R slash, but it's really awesome. I like the way you portrayed Lucius, too, since everyone thinks he's an evil bad man who stinks at being a father =] Keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: Thanks! It was a surprise to me, too, but these stories turned out to be really fun to write. Lucius needed a little complexity, but it sounds like I may have to boost up the 'sinister' a little.

Reviewer: lilmissmalfoy
Date: 07/04/06 8:14
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

i love the eyes fanfictions keep them going and not just for compations

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm up to my eyeballs in plotbunnies right now, but I'm working on it, honest.

Reviewer: anAnachronism
Date: 06/25/06 13:32
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

Well, normally I'm not a huge slash fan, but when it's so tastefully written, I get hooked! Besides, Ron's all wrong for Hermione, Draco really does seem like the logical alternative. Congrats on making it fit together so well! I'd really like to see how Ron reacts to Draco's abuse and how Draco feels after such abuse...

And then there's the "Weasley is our King" song. Possibly from the earlier conversation in "Reflecting"? Haha, that's an amusing way to look at it. Oh, the possibilities.

Please do consider a fourth installment. Thinking up titles to it is fun. I do like "Blue Eyes Crossing". Or "Blue Eyes Weeping" Opening? Shutting? Blinking?

Author's Response: 'Opening' is appealing to me for some reason. Hmm...

Thanks for reviewing -- I'm glad you enjoyed this little foray into slash. I had such a good time finding things in canon that could suggest the pairing. Poor Jo. She probably never expected her words to be scanned for that sort of thing and twisted around like this!

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 06/12/06 23:16
Chapter: Ron/Draco III

Please write some more of these stories! Please!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'll keep feeding the bunnies and see what happens.

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