this was really entertaining! also, may i just add, the fact that it was the cherry-flavored candy that made her lose her memory was a tad obvious at the beggining... brilliant fic otherwise!
lol great story! it was really creative!
No twist... 4/10
good job give yourself a pat on the back
Author's Response: Okay, I will... haha. Thanks for the review!
I loved this story. It was well written, and had a good sense of humor to it. Well done!!!
Author's Response: Thanks... wow, I'm really loving these reviews so far. Thanks! -Bryant:-)
Brilliant! ABSOLUTELY brilliant!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I'm really happy with this story, partly because it won the challenge, and partly because I had no idea that it would turn out as good as it did. Thanks for your reviews!
Author's Response: Thanks... glad you thought so. :-)
I really liked how you took a serious topic and funny and really a joy to read. The little things like the name tags made me smile. The only thing I wish was in there was the talk Molly said she was going to have with the twins. Sequal maybe? Oh and by the way congratulations on being named the winner, it was well deserved.
Author's Response: That's a good idea... a sequel. If I ever find the time to write it, I might. Thanks... the win was a really big and pleasant surprise for me!