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Name: JC_Cainstone (Signed) · Date: 04/01/06 1:58 · For: I Hate Myself For Losing You
Love it!


Name: JC_Cainstone (Signed) · Date: 04/01/06 1:58 · For: I Hate Myself For Losing You
Love it!


Name: m00n_un1t_luna (Signed) · Date: 03/29/06 20:51 · For: I Hate Myself For Losing You
I don't know why exactly you have a telephone in your story...but okies! I like your writing style! However, the setting needs some work. Good job! Keep reading! Keep writing.


Name: petiteloupegarou (Signed) · Date: 03/29/06 15:14 · For: I Hate Myself For Losing You
your writing style is quite good. i just think it is sad that remus has to deal with even more grief. so it this supposed to be a few years after HBP, cause some things didn't make sense: did fleur die or something, cause tonks says that bill still misses her, even after he and tonks are married. i feel sorry for remus and at the same time angry at him because he is so self-degrading. do you think, if you're going to continue at all with this, you could clear up a few of the background details. it's all probably very clear in your mind- it's that way for me with my stories- but when i read it i didn't really know what you were talking about part of the time. Otherwise, very nice job! oh and sorry to be so critical.


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