Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 04/01/06 1:58
Chapter: I Hate Myself For Losing You

Love it!

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 04/01/06 1:58
Chapter: I Hate Myself For Losing You

Love it!

Reviewer: m00n_un1t_luna
Date: 03/29/06 20:51
Chapter: I Hate Myself For Losing You

I don't know why exactly you have a telephone in your story...but okies! I like your writing style! However, the setting needs some work. Good job! Keep reading! Keep writing.

Reviewer: petiteloupegarou
Date: 03/29/06 15:14
Chapter: I Hate Myself For Losing You

your writing style is quite good. i just think it is sad that remus has to deal with even more grief. so it this supposed to be a few years after HBP, cause some things didn't make sense: did fleur die or something, cause tonks says that bill still misses her, even after he and tonks are married. i feel sorry for remus and at the same time angry at him because he is so self-degrading. do you think, if you're going to continue at all with this, you could clear up a few of the background details. it's all probably very clear in your mind- it's that way for me with my stories- but when i read it i didn't really know what you were talking about part of the time. Otherwise, very nice job! oh and sorry to be so critical.

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