He's a chicken, no doubt, but lucky for Harry, Hermione steps in and saves the day. Good, very good.
I loved the part about the freshly pickled green toad. I'd forgotten about that and laughed out loud. How very like Ginny, too--she is confident enough to poke fun of herself. Good job--all were very in character!
amazing... really i laughed, i cried... okay i didnt cry... but i definately squealed... several times in fact.... i really liked all of it but i LOVED when ginny was describing her type to Harry.... i was grinning the whole time i read it... and i loved the bit at the very very end when rons all obliblivious and harry and ginny are together... but seriously i tend to squeal when characters in the storys i really like get romantic (its one of my more embarassing characteristics) and i think my dear old mum thought i was turning into a pig while i was reading this
:::hearts:::
sarah
So cute! "Yeah, I guess that's true." Love it! And the fresh-pickled toad. Cutest line ever!
This was very touching and you had a very creative idea. This was extremely well-written and you captured the tension between the characters. Terrific job!
fluff to the extreme!!! but I loved it!!!!!
Aw i really loved it. Wouldn't it be great if that happened in one of the books? It was so cute! 10/10 definately
That was so frustrating to read, but at the same time "It was bloody brilliant." lol!
Count on Ron to be completely oblvious. Just-- whoosh-- right over his head. *swipes hand over head quickly* I agree with Harry, Brilliant! I'm adding you to my favorites! hehe
I think this could have been organized into more than just one chapter, but regarding the actual content of the story: it was bloody brilliant. very well written, and unlike many other similar ones I have read. Good job!
Again!!!! Okay, you're gonna think I'm crazy, but what I'm trying to say is that Harry loves Ginny and Ginny loves Harry, and that it's so cute! I can't believe it took 3 reveiws to say that! But it's true....sorry for acting like a spaz. Thanks for writing. I really enjoyed your story.
Rrrr...my last review got messed up by who knows what....So, here it is again: This was great. I really love your on-shots; you do them really well. And this is the best part: Harry
This was great. I really love your on-shots; you do them really well. Harry
Wonderful! Took me a looong time to read it, but I enjoyed it. 10!