Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 05/27/07 5:30
Chapter: A Slytherin, a Gryffindor -- Part Two

this is a very cool story. I hope you have the next chapters up soon. Is Harry drawn to the forbidden forest because he is one of those things you were talking about earlyer in the other chapters? and does he evenualy help ron and the others? cant wait to find out!!!

Author's Response: Aha! Keeping the mystery is the author's priviledge... Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 05/26/07 20:07
Chapter: Home and Memories

I think you should this is so intresting. I want to see where this goes. so please keep going with this.

Author's Response: Thanks, and I will.

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 05/25/07 12:57
Chapter: Interlude

I really like this, very cool idea. the last two seemed a little irrelevant to the story but I guessing it's one of those things that will come in good time. But yeah I think you should do another interlude later on. Kind of a good way to recap what's happened because there is so much information in each chapter. Not that you need reminding by now but, I LOVE your story. :D

Author's Response: The last two are mainly about showing articles published in June and September, so as to make the transition with ch8 smoother. Thank you for the other comments, I'll think about adding more interludes :).

Reviewer: Mnemone Radford
Date: 05/23/07 17:33
Chapter: On the Way to Recovery

Did I like it? Like it? Hah. I loved it! This probably isn't news to you, but you can definitely write, and amazingly so! Ugh, I wish I had more time to read the rest of your story, but in any case, welcome to my favorites!

Author's Response: Wow :D. Thanks!

*happily settles in Mnemone's favorites.*

Reviewer: blueidgrace
Date: 05/12/07 23:54
Chapter: Changing

not my fave chapter. You are such a Harry/ Ginny hater. You so changed her character. Well it may just be the moodiness of this Harry of yours. Well, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I hope it doesn't involve Ginny bashing also. Shouldn't people have already noticed that Harry's changed? Kind of confused on that. I'm glad you didn't kill Ron and I hope he and the others will be revived before long.

Author's Response: I did not change her character. I merely brought out her annoying aspects; Harry's perception of her has changed, thank God, since his 6th year. I'm afraid the rest of the story will involve as much Ginny bashing as is needed for the plot... as for your being confused, you're not the only one; I tried to fix it by adding an Interlude. That was my fault, I'm sorry.

Reviewer: blueidgrace
Date: 05/12/07 23:04
Chapter: Those Unfolded Mysteries

For a chapter you said to have had problems with it seems to have turned out all right. Can't wait to see how the forest thing unfolds. DID U JUST KILL OFF RON?? Better make the story good or else serious.... tears!!

Author's Response: ...

Oookaaaaay...

Answer to your question in the next chapter.

Reviewer: blueidgrace
Date: 05/12/07 22:28
Chapter: In the Moonlight

hmm... very interesting. I like the twist. You're writing again could almost be mistaken for JKR's herself but alas you didn't get Luna the way that she does. Other than that awesome work can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: How did I get Luna wrong, since she sounds OOC to you? I need to fix that. Otherwise thanks for the review.

Reviewer: phoenix_19
Date: 05/08/07 10:29
Chapter: A Slytherin, a Gryffindor -- Part Two

i just wanted to say wow... your writting is amazing and so intence and just outstanding, you have such a talent...
but i think one of my favourite parts of the whole thing, i just love the whole things but the bit that i loved most and i hope i haven't jumped in the wrong direction her well to much anyway but the other wolves... and those 'blue eyes' that show intelligance and knowlege...i just loved it and can't wait to read more.
thank you so much for posting something so wonderful for myself and others to enjoy...
good luck with the rest of it...

Author's Response: Thank you, and you're welcome, I don't get such an elogious review everyday. I'll continue it, for my pleasure as much as for yours! Thanks again for the review.

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 05/06/07 18:31
Chapter: A Slytherin, a Gryffindor -- Part Two

When I say out of Character he just seemed more human I guess. In your previous chapters he was more cold and uncaring but when he was talking to Romilda he seemed more like a Harry that might have been if he had never gone into the forest. I wasn't sure if this was his character growing or recovering. I might just be me being overly insightful or something but to me he came across more like a Harry with a saving people thing than the one you've been portraying. It may be nothing but just my initial reaction when reading it. It's not like he was over the top old Harry maybe there was just a shadow peaking out. I'm sorry if I overacted. but yeah I'll stop writing now I'm suppose to be doing my homework (sighs). ok well til the next chapter?

Author's Response: Harry's evolution is an important point in the story. You'll notice his emotional 'numbness' comes and goes in waves, it's lessened in chapter 3 to 7, to start again on chapters 8 and 9... then talking to Romilda lessens it again. Will be explained later.

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 05/05/07 14:17
Chapter: A Slytherin, a Gryffindor -- Part Two

That was really good. I thought you would kill Romilda even before she died. But I hoped you wouldn't. Isn't it getting a little bit too much for him? I'm starting to wonder if things will ever go his way.

All in all, The chapter was great. Loved reading it. Please update soon!

I just read your Author respond to my last review. You really didn't kill Ron? I must have gotten that wrong, I'll go back & see where my brain decided it needed a little break from reading. :D

Author's Response: Lol. No I didn't! See chapter 8, or the Interlude I added lately.

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 05/05/07 12:19
Chapter: A Slytherin, a Gryffindor -- Part Two

That was really good. I thought you would kill Romilda even before she died. But I hoped you wouldn't. Isn't it getting a little bit too much for him? I'm starting to wonder if things will ever go his way.

All in all, The chapter was great. Loved reading it. Please update soon!

Author's Response: ...Answer to first question in next chapter... Thanks for another nice, to-the-point review.

Reviewer: rivers of gold
Date: 05/03/07 23:33
Chapter: A Slytherin, a Gryffindor -- Part Two

I can't believe you hate this chapter! I loved it. I was reading with my mouth open the entire time...this chapter was fascinating and wonderfully written. I realize that I had begun to take your writing for granted, but this chapter reminded me all over again how well you write. Great job! Oh, and I'm glad Greyback is dead mwaha. I kept hoping Lupin wasn't there...

Anyway, you are one awesome writer and don't you ever think otherwise. XD

Author's Response: Well I'm happy you liked it, I'll probably change my mind about it in a bit, when I have the time to forget how much trouble it gave me. As for Lupin, he's back on the Wolfbane potion so no worries. Thanks for all the lovely compliments :).

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 05/03/07 22:28
Chapter: A Slytherin, a Gryffindor -- Part Two

I don't know this chapter was good and all but Harry seemed a little out of character for this story. It might be him changing or something but he seemed more like Harry should be not the Harry that you've been portraying. The whole Greyback thing was fantastic as well as the wolves and Romilda being killed like that is nothing short of tragic she was one of the few people who treated him like an actual person. I hope you'll be able to update I don't know if your done with classes yet or not, so till next time. keep on writing, I'm looking forward to breakfast with McGonagall!! I luv it when they have breakfast. :D night!

Author's Response: Out of character? In what way? Please explain, I need to know if I am to change it.

I do keep on writing, as much as my schedule enables me to. Thanks for the review, and breakfast in the next chapter :).

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 05/03/07 15:53
Chapter: A Slytherin, a Gryffindor -- Part Two

I don't know why you hated this chapter. I thought it was astonishing. You have an incredible gift for description and keeping things interesting.

But you never seem to give Harry a break. He meets Romilda and sees the personification of innocence and hope and all things still right with the world, then sees her mutilated corpse. I don't know if you meant to attach any symbolism to Romilda or no, but whether you did or not, you're message got through (to me, at least).

His goal was to go into the Forest and instead he ends up nearly dead at the hands (or should I say jaws) of Greyback. Glad he's dead, though. Ugh, I hated Greyback...But I still wish he could've gone into the Forest and learned about everything. He does need to. But now I fear that he'll have to wait another whole month to do so, which would stink.

I like the last-ish line. If you will excuse me now, he said at the empty courtyard, I must go and have breakfast with Professor McGonagall.
And so it goes.

But anyways, incredible, as always. :)

Author's Response: *cringes* I know, I never gives him a break... that's the biggest, ugliest flaw of this story. Everything that happens to him has to, I can tell you that, and sometimes it's less depressing that what it seems, but I do need to put in more light-hearted moments.

He has to do a couple more things before going back into the Forest, hence the plot-friendly interruption :). Plus it enables me to do some characterisation (Harry's hero complex) and to get rid of the one-eyed werewolf. Many advantages for one inconvenience.

Thank you for yet another review. Excellent, as always. :)

Reviewer: FordPrefectZaphod
Date: 05/03/07 10:06
Chapter: A Slytherin, a Gryffindor -- Part Two

Now that mugglnet.com is caught up to thedarkarts.org, I am avidly awaiting the next installement of this story. The writing is first rate and I have been loving the sinister undercurrent running through it whenever the old trees in the Forbidden Forest come up. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I enjoy writing about the old trees for the same (slightly morbid, I confess) reason. I already have 10k words of the next chapter written.

Reviewer: dogluvr
Date: 05/02/07 19:57
Chapter: A Slytherin, a Gryffindor -- Part Two

i actually really liked this chapter but WHY DID ROMILDA HAVE TO [insert verb/verb phrase here]??!!!!! WHY?????!!!
ps- ireally dont want to spoil it so i had an insert! :)

Author's Response: How very thoughtful of you :). As for Romilda [insert verb/verb phrase here], well... You'll hear more about it in the next chapter. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: blueidgrace
Date: 05/02/07 15:57
Chapter: The Curse and the Werewolf

Why does Harry never write Ron? Are Hermione and Ron married or do you think Harry will be with Hermione? Where the hell is Ginny? Sorry that bothers me cuz I'm so for Harry and Ginny! Good writing. You've got Remus to a t.

Author's Response: ...What?

Harry never writes Ron because he didn't keep in touch with his friend. His letter to Hermione was his first step towards a reunion. Hermione and Ron had not married, as I showed it in chapter 3, and Ginny and Harry definitely broke up in the same chapter. And they won't get back together.

Thanks for the review, I hope that cleared it up...


Author's Response: friend=friends. Had=are. Sorry >_<

Reviewer: blueidgrace
Date: 05/02/07 14:50
Chapter: Nocturnal Stroll

I liked it! Was really good! Damn you're making Harry suffer aren't you. Keep up the great writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, and I will.

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 05/02/07 11:17
Chapter: Those Unfolded Mysteries

A few quotes: And the day Hagrid gets a Dark Mark, Hermione will marry Malfoy. and
Heres an idea: why dont we just cut off all those trees and make a huge bonfire with them? And roast the centaurs on it, while were at it? Loved those! Not much to say about this except - OHMEGEE! What a cliffhanger! If I read this when you first submitted it, I would have MURDERED YOU!


Author's Response: *takes a few cautious steps backwards*

You were lucky to only find the story now then... I had the biggest writer's block after this chapter.

I liked writing the lines you quoted. Ron is a fun character to write about.

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 05/02/07 11:02
Chapter: In the Moonlight

He's not a werewolf?! What the heck? And Snape is a - a - a DUNDERHEAD! What's he playing at? I wish Harry and Lupin had gone back and transformed with him in the room, really! Hmm.. what else... yes, I'm so glad you put Luna and Fleur into the story and that was a cute thing to do, naming the baby James. ^^ And Ginny - well, I'm sorry, but so far, I'm hating her. She's never been so rude! I suppose I should be sympathetic - BUT I'M NOT! Grr!

Author's Response: YAY! Join the club! :D I precisely wrote Ginny this way because I despise her character. As for Snape, yes that would've been fun, but incompatible with the plot :). Thanks for the review.

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