Reviewer: Vivekrn
Date: 01/18/08 12:21
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part One

Its simply fascinating. I feel like reading the actual novel. You have a knack for making the reader to ask for more of the stroy.

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 01/17/08 13:58
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part One

This story is simply full of surprises. And what's really lovely about it is that I feel like I am reading an actual novel: something that has been edited countless times so that everything is just perfect. It's a wonderful feeling. You have a way with words - the descriptions you use are astounding, as is your vocabulary.
I'm enthralled. Keep up the great work!!!

Reviewer: rivers of gold
Date: 01/16/08 23:56
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part One

O.O Fascinating. We 'keep with you' because your writing is awesome, ya know. When are you going to write an original novel? ;)

Reviewer: rivers of gold
Date: 01/13/08 22:16
Chapter: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two

O.O Completely and utterly amazing. A work of art. I had forgotten how good you are...I'm basically speechless. xD

Reviewer: Celestina
Date: 12/01/07 4:11
Chapter: Home and Memories

Wow, I'm hooked.

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 11/09/07 2:47
Chapter: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two

Oh, wow! I loved the chapter. Amazing.
I loved the Harry/Hermione confrontaion. How you had described the DoM. Very exciting & hooking. How it all ended up. How Harry felt pain & regret, & how he missed the Hogrwarts days. & how he finally gave in to lust.

I liked how you ended the chapter, BTW. can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 11/07/07 22:21
Chapter: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two

Amazing two chapters there. FINALLY we're heading for the forest, we've seen Hermionie and harry and daphene finally did something about the other. I can't even begin to imagine what you'll come up with for these next chapters!!

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 11/06/07 23:25
Chapter: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two

Woooow. This is one of the most involved plots I've ever come across. It's honestly dizzying. But I like it! You're doing a good job.
I felt bad for Hermione getting Obliviated. Knowledge was always so important to her and even losing that little bit...I don't know, I can sympathize with her on that front.
I'm glad that Harry and Daphne...connected. ;) I liked the line 'which was not surprising given how eagerly he had just worked on releasing his tension.' Made me giggle, it did. But yeah, even just the fact that he's starting to feel human again, and is having those emotions like nostalgia, guilt, confusion...He's making progress.
And I'm sure more shall be made in the woods! That's going to make for an interesting few chapters, I bet. I'm excited to see what happens to them!
Great job!

Reviewer: Hestia Jones
Date: 11/06/07 18:59
Chapter: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two

Intense!! Incredibly well developed as well.

Reviewer: MusicShoes
Date: 11/06/07 15:20
Chapter: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two

Awesome chapters!!! I was so excited when I saw that another one had been updated! They were definetly worth the wait. I was glad that you put some temporary closure on the Hermione situation, too. I love this story!!!! :)

Reviewer: Aesculapius
Date: 11/06/07 11:18
Chapter: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two

update soon, please

Reviewer: GreenMan1966
Date: 11/05/07 22:32
Chapter: Home and Memories

Hurry! We've got to see Hermione start to trust Harry again!!

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 11/05/07 21:58
Chapter: A So Precious Friendship -- Part One

Oh man! This was an exciting chapter! I knew the meeting between Harry and Hermione wasn't going to be, was I right. Hermione's crock about doing it *for* Harry is, well, a load of crock. I'm with Harry on this one: if she wants to help him, she can work with him.
And man, the setting was so cool. That Department of Mysteries is quite a trippy place. I loved the line "a place where every law of physics and magic no longer made sense." It paints such an interesting picture to see Harry's biggest challenge in this situation is the setting instead of his actual opponent.
And what a predicament they're in now - Hermione trapped against a gear and Harry with a choice...can't wait to see where it goes!
Good job, as always.

Reviewer: MusicShoes
Date: 09/23/07 18:36
Chapter: The Cat and the Spy

Absolutely wonderful. Brilliant. And addicting. Each element is fresh and new. The theories are dazzling. Each chapter has left me wanting for more. I, myself, greatly enjoy the length of the chapters. They fulfill expectations. Wonderful twists and turns lead me through an enthralling tale. It leaves me capable of saying only one more thing: PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!

Reviewer: zenron
Date: 09/19/07 6:40
Chapter: The Cat and the Spy

damn was getting really into it then. but it finished :(. Great story.

Reviewer: zenron
Date: 09/19/07 6:39
Chapter: The Cat and the Spy

damn was getting really into it then. but it finished :(. Great story.

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 09/08/07 15:55
Chapter: The Cat and the Spy

Wow! that was intense. Brilliant chapter I love how Daphne's singing made Harry actually sleep and for 10 HOURS! Now that's interesting, I hope he gets to go back to talk with her more lots of stuff to be looked at there. Then Harry losing control and killing that guy was just crazy how is anger got out of control or something. And now he's going to see Hermionie! This story is really getting crazy just when I think it can't get more complicated you blind side me and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Awesome! :D

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 09/07/07 6:00
Chapter: The Cat and the Spy

Wow. THe Chapter was amazing.. I loved it. & That was a really nasty cliffhanger! Maybe I should hate you for it... :D

Anyway, I love the tense interaction between Daphne & Harry. It's so mysterious & adds an unusual touch of romance into the story. Though, I'm not sure I should call it romance. Lust would do better, maybe.
Martin is really a nasty piece of work. He & Umbridge should get together. But killing him was a dramatic act, don't you think? Harry now knows how dangerous his power is, & how difficult it is to control it, mroe than he ever did, I think.

Oh, & I'm soooooooo happy Harry had slept! That's a great improvement. Though I can't see Harry letting that happen again. Daphne singing him to sleep everynight? Unless they get closer to each other, I don't think Harry would get over his pride & let that happen.

I wonder if he would blow his cover in his anger. To Hermione about his secret mission, or maybe about how he knew everyone is conspiring behind his back. I don't know i I want him to or not. All this secret-keeping attitude he has must have made him really frustrated (Never mind the fact that it made me frustrated too, I want to see him telling someone!) & he's bound to let it out sometime. But that would be baaaaaaaad for his quest's sake..

I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder how he would confront her. Or would he at all?

Reviewer: Vivekrn
Date: 09/05/07 14:16
Chapter: The Cat and the Spy

Great chapter. Looking forward for the next.

Reviewer: Aesculapius
Date: 09/05/07 9:10
Chapter: The Cat and the Spy

at last!:) awesome chapter

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