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Name: Vivekrn (Signed) · Date: 01/18/08 12:21 · For: The Song of the Trees -- Part One
Its simply fascinating. I feel like reading the actual novel. You have a knack for making the reader to ask for more of the stroy.

Name: Misdemeanor1331 (Signed) · Date: 01/17/08 13:58 · For: The Song of the Trees -- Part One
This story is simply full of surprises. And what's really lovely about it is that I feel like I am reading an actual novel: something that has been edited countless times so that everything is just perfect. It's a wonderful feeling. You have a way with words - the descriptions you use are astounding, as is your vocabulary.
I'm enthralled. Keep up the great work!!!

Name: rivers of gold (Signed) · Date: 01/16/08 23:56 · For: The Song of the Trees -- Part One
O.O Fascinating. We 'keep with you' because your writing is awesome, ya know. When are you going to write an original novel? ;)

Name: rivers of gold (Signed) · Date: 01/13/08 22:16 · For: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two
O.O Completely and utterly amazing. A work of art. I had forgotten how good you are...I'm basically speechless. xD

Name: Celestina (Signed) · Date: 12/01/07 4:11 · For: Home and Memories
Wow, I'm hooked.

Name: Meme0 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 2:47 · For: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two
Oh, wow! I loved the chapter. Amazing.
I loved the Harry/Hermione confrontaion. How you had described the DoM. Very exciting & hooking. How it all ended up. How Harry felt pain & regret, & how he missed the Hogrwarts days. & how he finally gave in to lust.

I liked how you ended the chapter, BTW. can't wait for the next one!

Name: lovingu4ever (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 22:21 · For: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two
Amazing two chapters there. FINALLY we're heading for the forest, we've seen Hermionie and harry and daphene finally did something about the other. I can't even begin to imagine what you'll come up with for these next chapters!!

Name: Misdemeanor1331 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 23:25 · For: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two
Woooow. This is one of the most involved plots I've ever come across. It's honestly dizzying. But I like it! You're doing a good job.
I felt bad for Hermione getting Obliviated. Knowledge was always so important to her and even losing that little bit...I don't know, I can sympathize with her on that front.
I'm glad that Harry and Daphne...connected. ;) I liked the line 'which was not surprising given how eagerly he had just worked on releasing his tension.' Made me giggle, it did. But yeah, even just the fact that he's starting to feel human again, and is having those emotions like nostalgia, guilt, confusion...He's making progress.
And I'm sure more shall be made in the woods! That's going to make for an interesting few chapters, I bet. I'm excited to see what happens to them!
Great job!

Name: Hestia Jones (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 18:59 · For: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two
Intense!! Incredibly well developed as well.

Name: MusicShoes (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 15:20 · For: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two
Awesome chapters!!! I was so excited when I saw that another one had been updated! They were definetly worth the wait. I was glad that you put some temporary closure on the Hermione situation, too. I love this story!!!! :)

Name: Aesculapius (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 11:18 · For: A So Precious Friendship -- Part Two
update soon, please

Name: GreenMan1966 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/07 22:32 · For: Home and Memories
Hurry! We've got to see Hermione start to trust Harry again!!

Name: Misdemeanor1331 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/07 21:58 · For: A So Precious Friendship -- Part One
Oh man! This was an exciting chapter! I knew the meeting between Harry and Hermione wasn't going to be pleasant...man, was I right. Hermione's crock about doing it *for* Harry is, well, a load of crock. I'm with Harry on this one: if she wants to help him, she can work with him.
And man, the setting was so cool. That Department of Mysteries is quite a trippy place. I loved the line "a place where every law of physics and magic no longer made sense." It paints such an interesting picture to see Harry's biggest challenge in this situation is the setting instead of his actual opponent.
And what a predicament they're in now - Hermione trapped against a gear and Harry with a choice...can't wait to see where it goes!
Good job, as always.

Name: MusicShoes (Signed) · Date: 09/23/07 18:36 · For: The Cat and the Spy
Absolutely wonderful. Brilliant. And addicting. Each element is fresh and new. The theories are dazzling. Each chapter has left me wanting for more. I, myself, greatly enjoy the length of the chapters. They fulfill expectations. Wonderful twists and turns lead me through an enthralling tale. It leaves me capable of saying only one more thing: PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!

Name: zenron (Signed) · Date: 09/19/07 6:40 · For: The Cat and the Spy
damn was getting really into it then. but it finished :(. Great story.

Name: zenron (Signed) · Date: 09/19/07 6:39 · For: The Cat and the Spy
damn was getting really into it then. but it finished :(. Great story.

Name: lovingu4ever (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 15:55 · For: The Cat and the Spy
Wow! that was intense. Brilliant chapter I love how Daphne's singing made Harry actually sleep and for 10 HOURS! Now that's interesting, I hope he gets to go back to talk with her more lots of stuff to be looked at there. Then Harry losing control and killing that guy was just crazy how is anger got out of control or something. And now he's going to see Hermionie! This story is really getting crazy just when I think it can't get more complicated you blind side me and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Awesome! :D

Name: Meme0 (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 6:00 · For: The Cat and the Spy
Wow. THe Chapter was amazing.. I loved it. & That was a really nasty cliffhanger! Maybe I should hate you for it... :D

Anyway, I love the tense interaction between Daphne & Harry. It's so mysterious & adds an unusual touch of romance into the story. Though, I'm not sure I should call it romance. Lust would do better, maybe.
Martin is really a nasty piece of work. He & Umbridge should get together. But killing him was a dramatic act, don't you think? Harry now knows how dangerous his power is, & how difficult it is to control it, mroe than he ever did, I think.

Oh, & I'm soooooooo happy Harry had slept! That's a great improvement. Though I can't see Harry letting that happen again. Daphne singing him to sleep everynight? Unless they get closer to each other, I don't think Harry would get over his pride & let that happen.

I wonder if he would blow his cover in his anger. To Hermione about his secret mission, or maybe about how he knew everyone is conspiring behind his back. I don't know i I want him to or not. All this secret-keeping attitude he has must have made him really frustrated (Never mind the fact that it made me frustrated too, I want to see him telling someone!) & he's bound to let it out sometime. But that would be baaaaaaaad for his quest's sake..

I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder how he would confront her. Or would he at all?

Name: Vivekrn (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 14:16 · For: The Cat and the Spy
Great chapter. Looking forward for the next.

Name: Aesculapius (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 9:10 · For: The Cat and the Spy
at last!:) awesome chapter

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