Reviewer: Emily_the_Poet
Date: 07/31/08 4:28
Chapter: The Hidden World - Part Two

Okay, this is probably one of the most original fics I have come across in my three years here on the site. And that is truly saying something. I find myself asking why the best works tend to be incomplete. I will be waiting in the wings for the next chapter. My heart practically broke when I saw I had reached the end of my reading.

Reviewer: siriuswas36
Date: 07/10/08 14:31
Chapter: Home and Memories

Wow!! I read this fanfiction once before but I never reviewed it. I'd actually forgotten everything about it accept the title! Anyway, I've only read the first chapter, and already I think it's phenomenal! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 05/23/08 19:22
Chapter: The Hidden World - Part Two

I'm a little confused as to what exactly was the deal with Lily and why they couldn't contact her. I mean what was such a big burden? I get Dumbledore watching her and all kind of. Sounds like there are quite a few chapters to go still which is perfectly fine with me!

Reviewer: Hestia Jones
Date: 05/12/08 20:27
Chapter: The Hidden World - Part Two

You have woven a beautiful story! ! ! Congratulations, it's truly a joy to read.

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 05/11/08 11:12
Chapter: The Hidden World - Part Two

Hm, so Lily wasn't related to the Queen. Interesting still, though. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 05/09/08 1:21
Chapter: The Hidden World -- Part One

Amazing! I love it, it's so riveting.
Can't wait for the second part!

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 05/03/08 13:21
Chapter: The Hidden World -- Part One

this is so cool I can't even explain what you have done with this story. It's so elaborate, well thought out and creative i can barely stand it (jk). you've just taken a bunk of little parts from the Potter universe and twisted them into a beautiful new story. I know i'm showering you with complements but this story insane! :D I can't wait for part II.

Reviewer: Marauders Girl
Date: 05/02/08 20:03
Chapter: Headmasters of Hogwarts -- Part Two

Oh my god. I'm still not caught up, i'm almost painfully behind, but oh my god. You are honestly one of the best authors I have ever read the works of, and I truly hope you go on to write novels of your own. I cannot wait to keep reading. This is amazing.

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 05/02/08 14:04
Chapter: The Hidden World -- Part One

Can't wait for the second! :)

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 02/08/08 14:49
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part Two

Wow. Never in a million years could i have guessed that any of this would happen, it's freaking brilliant. This story is absolutely amazing. Will we be learning more about what happened with James and Lily and the swords they picked up in future chapter?

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 02/07/08 16:29
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part One


Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 02/06/08 13:48
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part Two

Oh, wow. This answers a hell load of questions. Amazing chapter. Can't wait for the next.
I hope we find out soon what Daphne's got to do with all of it, & what does Lily finding the queen's maid's sword & James finding the wizard's -Whom her & her army's spirits killed means.

can't wait for next chapter!

Reviewer: Jammy
Date: 02/06/08 12:29
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part Two

wow.... that was simply wow

Reviewer: Jakob
Date: 02/02/08 22:05
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part Two

Great I cant wait to read more..... Jake

Reviewer: Vivekrn
Date: 02/01/08 15:07
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part Two

This chapter is wonderful. Things are getting clearer. I canít wait to read the last chapter. Donít make me wait for too long. I may die of enthusiasm.

Reviewer: BlueFalcon
Date: 02/01/08 1:10
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part Two

Argh! Cliffrhangers! I don't know how you do it, but it seems as if you know exactly how to make a person satisfied and annoyed at the same time. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 01/31/08 21:37
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part Two

Veeeery interesting! I feel like this is the chapter I was waiting for - the chapter that tied it all together and made it all make sense.

The Third Kind *is* the Forbidden Forest and it's also Harry, through his mother who is somehow descended from Cassie. I like that Lily got Rosalyn's sword and James got Pallas'. Kind of a yin/yang relationship. Which makes me wonder if Harry, possessing traits from both his mother and his father, will act as a kind of intermediary between the Forest and wizard-kind.
I'm interested in a comment that Godric made - that he would train wizards and witches in case the Third Kind rose up again (which, obviously, they are). But what I wonder is if it's going to be another war on wizards, or if it's going to be a more subtle kind of battle. I'm guessing subtle, which would work if Harry actually does act as the intermediate between the two.

Daphne is obviously Third Kind, too, but just how is a mystery. Rosalyn's child, perhaps? Either way, I'm interested to know what the Third Kind's plans are for the pair.

Very good story - your plot is great and your structure and vocab makes me feel like I'm reading a professionally published novel. Awesome job!!!

Reviewer: Jammy
Date: 01/22/08 13:20
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part One

really really excillient stuff...... cant stop reading it...... love it...... thanks for coming out with it..........

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 01/19/08 10:52
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part One

OMG, WHY is there a bloody count restriction! That is SO unfair. The next chapter better be really long & satisfying! Oh god, so Lily wasn't exactly a complete Muggleborn? She must've had some Third-kind royal ancestor, then. Queen Cassiopeia, Great great great great great, etc. grand mother of Lily Evans. Nice. =D

Can't wait for the next chapter! Really!

Reviewer: Vivekrn
Date: 01/18/08 12:21
Chapter: The Song of the Trees -- Part One

Its simply fascinating. I feel like reading the actual novel. You have a knack for making the reader to ask for more of the story.

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