Reviewer: LisaK
Date: 12/16/04 22:55
Chapter: The Gray Mare, The Better Horse

you have a really good story. i was going to wait until I finished the next chapter to review, but i actually burst out laughing because we studied Browning's poem in class today and I had another reason to be amused

Reviewer: psychofreak
Date: 12/16/04 19:27
Chapter: Weasley Wizard Wheezes; Diagon Alley

That was freaking funny with Cho Chang's advice column! lol...aww...I'm so happy for Ron and Hermione! That's really cute! Peace Out!!

Reviewer: Atarwyn
Date: 12/13/04 19:13
Chapter: Weasley Wizard Wheezes; Diagon Alley

I love this story! It's great for me 'cause I'm a H/L and R/Hr Shipper. So it's so cool for me! Write more soon!

Reviewer: Atarwyn
Date: 12/13/04 19:07
Chapter: Weasley Wizard Wheezes; Diagon Alley


Reviewer: psychofreak
Date: 12/13/04 16:49
Chapter: The Gray Mare, The Better Horse

Aww...Fred and Angelina get cute! tear...that was a really good chapter...but why so short?! lol. Well can't wait for you to continue...I would love to read how Harry avenges his parents' and Sirius's death, by getting Peter! lol. Peace Out!!

Reviewer: psychofreak
Date: 12/13/04 5:42
Chapter: Trinal Prophecy

Wow...that was an interesting graduation. And Hagrid and Madame, cute! lol. Well this is really interesting your plot! Keep up the good work...Peace Out!!

Reviewer: psychofreak
Date: 12/13/04 5:37
Chapter: Memories On the Hogwarts Express

That was a good chapter...aww they have a baby named Lily! tear...that was cute. I wonder how old she is? Well this chapter was odd...Crookshanks is half cat half shoot I forgot what else, that's how he can detect and understand people. But shoot, I forgot what it was...oh, well. But a cool twist to make Crookshanks an Animagus, lol. Peace Out!!

Reviewer: psychofreak
Date: 12/13/04 5:30
Chapter: The Dark Mark

That was very interesting. Just a minor error, well not really minor, but you get my point. In the beginning with Harry and the newspaper, it read that Ginny and Neville are getting married in the year 2001, but why is Harry's certificate of completion for his Auror training 2002?! lol. Well I think you might want to fix that. Oh, and I think in most cases people will tell you that Ginny name is not Virginia, its can check for yourself on J.K. Rowlings site! lol. Well good chapter...too many paragraphs...can't wait to see what happens with Harry. Great pairing, I still think that Harry and Luna might end up with each other! lol. Peace Out!!

Reviewer: Goy
Date: 12/05/04 10:22
Chapter: The Dark Mark

Very blue

Reviewer: Goy
Date: 12/05/04 10:21
Chapter: The Dark Mark

It was blue!

Reviewer: t_grint
Date: 12/04/04 16:03
Chapter: The Dark Mark

even though i dont like the idea of luna and harry being together, YOU DID A NICE JOB! GOOD JOB, ACTUALLY...BEATUTIFUL STORY! hope 2 see more stories from u! ~t_grint (teleri grint)

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