Reviewer: AParselmouthsPatronous
Date: 11/06/11 17:06
Chapter: Guilt of Murder

die, Ron, die
no, seriously, brilliant story, good twist with Luna

Reviewer: moon_girl_175
Date: 06/06/07 17:20
Chapter: A New Beginning

this was asome it is to bad you had to kill off luna though.

Reviewer: JoliePotter
Date: 11/28/06 5:46
Chapter: The Dark Mark

omg such a great fic I don't know what to say!

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/24/05 6:21
Chapter: A New Beginning

Oh my God... The ending was so so sad!!! It leaves me with a lot of questions as well. SNAPE AND RITA???????????? EW. But still, it was very good, and it summed everything up very very nicely. Who did Lily get married to though? I like how George stayed single. Anways, until we meet again, your faithful reviewer, SIRIUSLYINLUVWITHSIRIUS

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/24/05 6:17
Chapter: The Dark Mark

My God!!! I can't believe it was Malfoy!!! All along, it wasn't Wormtail, it was him. Everything is coming to me now... That was most definitely THE best chapter you've written. They all had a common motive... And now I'm positive, this needs to go in Mystery or something. By the way, Nott's son was named Theodore.

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/24/05 6:10
Chapter: Guilt of Murder

Are you implying that REVIEWS are stupid or something? Ron is throwing them in the bin? RON... RON... RON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I forgot, YOU killed him. I am getting way too emotional over this story... I love it, don't get me wrong, but it's so so so so so so SAD!!!!!!

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/24/05 6:05
Chapter: Furtive Confessions and Casualties

NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Must I make my point any clearer? Screw my game, what's up with this???? First off, RON is absolutely dead, and secondly LUNA?!?!? What the heck!?!?!? Was she under the Imperius or something? It better be something like that. Harry killed the love of his life! This is so so so so so wrong!!!

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/24/05 6:02
Chapter: Dead Man Behind the Veil

I love that Harry can talk to Sirius again!!! That is so awesome. ANYways, the REVIEW is supposed to 'library' right? When in doubt go to the library? I am guessing who the murderer is ... Cho! Cho had that advice column and the dude was talking about his Dorcas. Or something like that. I know, it's probably not going to be Cho or anything, but still, I hate her, so I 'm guessing her. Are you sure this shouldn't be a mystery?

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/24/05 5:57
Chapter: Clue Hunt

Okay, I'm going to play a game now... REVIEW replaced the word 'letter'. Am I right? Am I? Am I? Am I? Anways, this chapter was good, the part with Krum and the werewolf was really unexpected. *10*

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/24/05 5:54
Chapter: Weasley Wizard Wheezes; Diagon Alley

Wow. Hermione pregnant. Wow. George's outlook on honeymoons might have been a little off, but it was funny, never the less. Wow.

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/24/05 5:51
Chapter: The Gray Mare, The Better Horse

Okay, I'm reviewing every single chapter just because I like your "Reviewisms of the Day". This chapter was great, I anticipated George messing it up somehow. He needs to get with Katie Bell or Alicia Spinnet. Lee needs to pair up with the other one, and they can all be a happy Quidditch/Quidditch Commentator family. Anways, this chapter was great, Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/24/05 5:48
Chapter: Trinal Prophecy

I loved Dumbledore's speech about un-sorting them so they all became equals, postively wonderful. There was an OOC in here though. Snape and Harry are ... friends, sort of??? Scared the crap out of me, they were talking like old friends. Ugh. Other than that, great.

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/24/05 5:41
Chapter: Memories On the Hogwarts Express

The part with Crookshanks really being Forrest Evans was interesting. I liked the part where you put "Ron knew it all along", that made me laugh out loud. Their baby sounds so so so cute!!! Blonde hair and green eyes... aww. Do you actually know a guy named Forrest? I do.

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/24/05 5:27
Chapter: The Dark Mark

Loved it loved it loved it! I can't wait to read all of this to see how it turns out. Two things I caught : Ginny's full name is Ginevra, not Virginia (even though Virginia is a nice name) and when Arthur said: "There's no time to loose." There's only one 'o' in lose. It was great though, like I said, I can't wait to read the next chapter. *10*

Reviewer: Tonks Lupin
Date: 11/29/05 20:41
Chapter: A New Beginning

A+++++++++ that story was fantastic! It really felt like I was actually there while reading it....fantastic storywriting. I can't wait for the sequel, really want to know who his daughter is marrying....please post soon! X

Reviewer: Lady Lycanthrope
Date: 08/31/05 17:17
Chapter: A New Beginning

Really good! But i want to know who Harry's daughter is marrying. --Lady Lycanthrope

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 08/14/05 16:59
Chapter: A New Beginning

Malfoy is dead!! I could SING!!! *Sings a song no one knows* wonderful ending. I hope yur next fic has Harry marring Hermione, since they both lost the loves of their lives. 10 10 10 10 10!!!!!

Reviewer: MADLAX
Date: 08/09/05 18:10
Chapter: The Dark Mark

I enjoyed this story. The only things I didn't praticuraly like was that after the deaths of Harry's loved ones he just snapped into action there was no grief, also mabye a little obvious who was behind it. Enjoyable story over all. (Are you sure this belonged in Harry/Luna just because he married her?)

Reviewer: Dox
Date: 06/19/05 12:26
Chapter: A New Beginning

I always like post Hogwarts stories and this one is great. Very sad story yet it had wonderful touching and light moments between all the characters. Finally the ending was great with Dumbledore’s explanation to Harry about love. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading the sequel “A New Beginning”. Keep it going!

Reviewer: Skittles
Date: 05/31/05 9:31
Chapter: Guilt of Murder

Much better. Still don't like the story, but much better.

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