Reviews For Make It Right
Reviewer: ginny96
Date: 06/26/12 18:20
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Its really well written and it is sooooo goddamn FUNNY. I LOVE your ending. so funny. i no it was a one shot but couldent u write more? PLEASE?

Reviewer: ljlove
Date: 10/15/11 21:19
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

this was so cute! i know i'm a little late in reading it haha but you did a great job! i think you portrayed james and lily's characters amazingly, almost the exact same as i would picture them. and the story itself was very cute and mcgonagall at the end too funny.

~El

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley 25
Date: 12/02/10 4:11
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

Brillant what a Fricken" awesome fic I

Reviewer: fullvioletmoon
Date: 10/30/08 12:58
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

soooo cool!!! i love the bit with mcgonagall at the end ;)

Reviewer: potters angel
Date: 08/25/08 12:52
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

ahah! nice ending!
great story!

Reviewer: RowenaHeart
Date: 02/29/08 14:14
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

Oh, I love this story!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/24/08 22:43
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

lol! great story!! very creative!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/24/08 22:32
Chapter: A Slip-Up at the Station

lol! great first chapter!!

Reviewer: xoxoJMCxoxo
Date: 02/03/08 10:32
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

awww how sweet

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 09/07/07 23:02
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

Ahh! Simply amazing. I love the bit about McGonagall. Terrific work!

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 08/20/07 15:35
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

This was awesome! fantastic job!

Reviewer: fawkeshermione221
Date: 08/07/07 19:52
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

Wow! This has got to be one of the best Lily/James fics I've ever read. It was really original, and I loved what they had to do for detention. James really sounded like James, and the same for Lily and Professor McGonagall. It was well written, it made me laugh, and I just loved the entire thing. Keep writing.

Reviewer: Aura_light
Date: 07/17/07 10:23
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

loved it!! the detention, the list and yep, McGonagall's "Mr.Potter! Ms.Evans!". lol :)

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 04/06/07 11:54
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

Hahahahahaha
Loved it!!!!
Great story

Reviewer: BlackPearl
Date: 01/25/07 14:55
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

cute

Reviewer: The Magic inside Us
Date: 01/14/07 10:37
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

Love it!

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 12/23/06 22:16
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

Still love this story. Wonderful, so sweet. My heart is warmed by the powerful emotions and use of words here. Truly wonderful writing.

Reviewer: aguamenti403
Date: 12/20/06 22:47
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

very cute story

Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/07/06 19:35
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

AW.I FREAKIN LOVED IT!!I LOVED THE END MSOTLY OF COURSE ;)

Mr Potter! Miss Evans!” came McGonagall’s rather ALARMED sounding voice.


i loved that the best.lmao.loved it!!!

x3333333

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 11/02/06 23:03
Chapter: Detentions Can Be Interesting

This is one lovely story. Wish you made it longer.

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