Reviews For Love Me For Today
Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 04/24/06 11:17
Chapter: Oneshot

"It takes two, I thought one was enough, it's not true, it takes two of us!" This poem is an honor for a musical theatre fan to read. It captures Sondiem's spirit really well! The only thing I don't like about this poem is that it proves that you, my dear sister, write a damn lot better than I do! ~Lexi~

Reviewer: Natasha_Haress
Date: 03/30/06 15:16
Chapter: Oneshot

Woot! Rock on!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: james and lily fan
Date: 03/24/06 23:02
Chapter: Oneshot

great job! that was a really good, rythmic poem!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, james and lily fan. Of course, if I wanted to, I could apply this poem to James/Lily. It would work for them, too, as a poem Lily wrote before they died, on their wedding day or something. I am going to see how it goes as Ron/Hermione though. I've gotten 2 reviews so far, probably part of the Feel Good chain.

Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond
Date: 03/24/06 15:33
Chapter: Oneshot

All in all, I enjoyed it. Your style is there, and the meaning is clear, but the form is inconsistent. Not that that's a problem, but I feel that poetry should either have no form a a consistent form. But, I think that I might be biased because Ron/Hermione is my second favorite ship, only overthrown by Harry/Ginny. I dub it an 8/10.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, biases are hard in ships. I do agree with you, I'm a little inconsistant, I was trying internal rhyme in honor of Stephen Sondheim's 76th birthday, and it was my first crack at internal rhyme, and also, once again, the divided writing periods. Yes, usually my school doodles turn into poems, that's why they're a little inconsistent.

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