Reviews For When Is Too Late?
Reviewer: lunalovy
Date: 07/19/06 11:28
Chapter: Waking Up on the Wrong Side of Bed

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm working on it - look out for the next chapter fairly soon!

Reviewer: hogwartsduchess
Date: 07/05/06 14:32
Chapter: Waking Up on the Wrong Side of Bed

Well, since this is for the review circle, I have to be critical in a constructive manner. The only problem is, I can't find anything to criticise!

Very well done! I love how you've managed to stay in character with everyone while still being utterly hilarious. A rare gift in an author, to be sure.

I very much am looking forward to the next installment!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks Kasey! I'm really pleased that you're enjoying it! I need to update Dear Dumby first (my reviewers are just gathering pitchforks! ;-p) but then I will post chapter 5 (Ten Things Ron Hates About Hermione). Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 06/21/06 22:46
Chapter: Boy Meets Ground

I love how you characterized Ginny here. Way to go, Hermione, for showing Ron who's boss! I thought this was an awesome chapter. I'd like to torture Ron, too...can I help? *pulls out tools* I'm ready whenever you are, dear! Put me in there!!! :)

Great work!

Kumy

P.S. This is your complimentary review. Thanks for entering the Gryffindor In-House Challenge! :D

Author's Response: Heya Kumy! *Giggles* Of course you can help torture Ron! Although I think more than a few people have got that covered for the next few chapters... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 06/11/06 20:44
Chapter: Waking Up on the Wrong Side of Bed

NO!NO!NO!NO!NO!NO!NO!NO!

Arg! Hermione! Arg! Cannot form complete sentences...too frustrated.

I love your style of writing. I'm not quite sure what it is about it, but something just sucks me in so completely!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! =D You've really made my day by saying that, and by reviewing every single chapter! I'm so pleased that you're enjoying it! Thank you!!

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 06/11/06 20:37
Chapter: Boy Meets Ground

Stupid Terry and Lavender and Claire and Ron and Hermione and Voldemort. (Well, even though Voldemort has nothing to do with this, he's stupid anyways.) Look at this, a mere three chapters and you've already got me hating these perfectly nice people, well, except for Lavender.

Author's Response: *Giggles* Too true, dear! I'm glad I've absorbed you into this that well! Ah, all these stupid people - what are we going to do with them? Where are Colin and the Giant Squid when you need them, eh?! Thanks!

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 06/11/06 20:29
Chapter: Well, Why Not?

I'm just a bit confused here. Mrs. Weasley told Ron to go Flat hunting, Harry and Ginny are married, which both imply that they are all out of Hogwarts. (Also, last chapter Hermione mentioned being out of Hogwarts.) Yet, the second scene seemed to take place at Hogwarts.

Hagrid thought Ron was going out with a hammer. That one made me laugh. (Which wasn't too good because lost a mouthful of tea.)

Bloody *insert swear word here* Lavender. She's messing up Ron's date with Hermione!

Author's Response: Sorry for the confusion - the double line was meant to show that it was a memory. They are all out of Hogwarts, by several years. That was just a flashback to an incidence that happened in Hogwarts. Sorry, I should have made that clearer. Oops, sorry about your tea! I know - poor Ron and Hermione! Will they never be able to get together? Read and see!!

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 06/11/06 20:20
Chapter: The Wedding

Luna really is smart, though not many take the time to realize it.

At first, I thought it was Ron and Hermione getting married, I was so excited! But then I thought, wait, then what kind of relevance does the summary have?

Can't wait to read more! This is going to be interesting.

(Loved the thing about giving Harry to the Giant Squid...or Colin.)

Author's Response: Yes, she is - after all, she's in Ravenclaw! In some ways, I think she's smarter then all of us (but I won't go into that here!). Well, I did feel a bit fiendish, and tried to make it out so that it could have been Ron and Hermione who were getting married, then change it (a few times, if you've noticed!) until it gets to the actual names! Thanks - I had fun preparing to torture Harry, so I'm glad you like it! Please read on!

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 06/11/06 19:01
Chapter: Waking Up on the Wrong Side of Bed

OhO! I was wondering who that Claire woman was.... interesting.... the plot thickens.... and I just realized that I was going to use the chapter title Boy Meets Ground, but you already have. Guess I'll go change it. :)

Author's Response: Interesting? I hope so! Thanks! Yes, we will see Claire in later chapters... Don't worry, you can still use the title 'Boy Meets Ground' if you like! I know you won't have stolen it from me, as you'd already thought of it! I don't mind, really! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: this isnt jess
Date: 06/11/06 9:46
Chapter: Boy Meets Ground

I really liked that last line. =] Good story!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Alexys_Nicole
Date: 06/05/06 6:53
Chapter: Waking Up on the Wrong Side of Bed

*Eye Twitch*

Author's Response: Yes! *nods enthusiastically* Indeed! I hope this means you want the next chapter to come up - so do I! But the mods are great - so hopefully it'll be up soon!

Reviewer: beth1191
Date: 06/01/06 19:01
Chapter: Boy Meets Ground

i like the plot.its a great story.plz update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really pleased you're enjoying it! I'm submitting the next chapter in a min!

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 05/31/06 10:04
Chapter: Boy Meets Ground

Sweet! Very sweet! Please update, you have a great storyline.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm just submitting the next chapter!

Reviewer: mugglenetdudette
Date: 05/20/06 10:00
Chapter: Boy Meets Ground

Fab! you write ending lines really well!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: mugglenetdudette
Date: 05/20/06 9:46
Chapter: The Wedding

Fantastic story. Bit confusing at the start but you get to understand it. I love luna's comments at the end!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I was going for a sense of mystery (but I guess confusion was close!), not knowing quite who was getting married. I'm glad it made some sort of sense at some point though! Luna was quite fun to write, I may have to give her a bit more somewhere... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Nicole Weasley
Date: 05/17/06 15:38
Chapter: Boy Meets Ground

This now is on of my fave story! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: *Is proud, pleased and blushing!* Thanks, I'll try!

Reviewer: Nicole Weasley
Date: 05/17/06 15:18
Chapter: The Wedding

Very Beautiful chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 05/14/06 13:46
Chapter: Boy Meets Ground

ah. I take it the double page breaks are the begginings/ends of flashbacks. makes more sense now. Can't wait to find out who this Claire person is... 10/10

Author's Response: Yes, that's right! Don't worry, you'll see more of Claire in the next few chapters...!

Reviewer: Alexys_Nicole
Date: 05/13/06 11:36
Chapter: Boy Meets Ground

That's funny. He won't not like until pigs fly. ^^

Author's Response: Teehee! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Alexys_Nicole
Date: 05/13/06 11:27
Chapter: Well, Why Not?

OH. No. He forgot? HE FORGOT? After all that he forgot?

Author's Response: *Laughs* I know! Boys, eh? Well, Lavender stressed him out a bit, then he had that nagging feeling that he was forgetting something, but he thought that it must be going back to Gryffindor Tower, but then he just fell asleep where he was, forgetting that he had fogotten to meet Hermione... Yes, my explination was probably no help whatsoever! But still - he forgot!! Silly boy!

Reviewer: Alexys_Nicole
Date: 05/13/06 4:29
Chapter: The Wedding

How funny. At first I thought Hermione was marrying Harry. I'm not a big H/Hr shipper.

Author's Response: Thanks! No, no, I'm not a big H/Hr shipper either...I really don't like it at all! (No offence to anyone who does, but since most of my stories are R/Hr, I think that's pretty much taken for granted!) Thanks for reviewing!

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