ooo--ooo--oooo! creepy!
Author's Response: ooo--ooo--oooo! review! all joking aside, I appreciate your comment. That's the very thing I was going for.
I just read this poem, and boy, is it good...if a bit strange. The end is a bit iffy, but it is amazingly written. Thanks for reviewing my poem!
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you!
that was a pretty good poem, but i couldnt understand it very well, it was sort of choppy. but the writing style was terrific! definitely keep writing poems, (you're really talented) but maybe just make them a bit easier to read
Author's Response: I'll be sure to keep that in mind. thanks for the advice. I loved your poem, by the way.
I'm sorry, I really have no clue how my review got posted three times!!!!! I'm so sorry!
Author's Response: Not a problem, it happens to the best of us =)
I'm sorry, I really have no clue how my review got posted three times!!!!! I'm so sorry!
Author's Response: ah! double reviews!
Thank you for reviewing my fic. Reviews are very rare in the poetry genre, it's rather unfortunate as there are quite a few great poems. I liked the poem, however I felt the rythm was rather inconsistant. Good similies. However, I think your interpretation of this poem really depends on your interpretation of Serverus Snape's character, so I feel that you will get varied interpretations of the poem. 6/10. Have a nice day.
Author's Response: I was trying to write this as a choppy free-form, to somewhat reflect what I think Snapes mind must be like.
Thank you for reviewing my fic. Reviews are very rare in the poetry genre, it's rather unfortunate as there are quite a few great poems. I liked the poem, however I felt the rythm was rather inconsistant. Good similies. However, I think your interpretation of this poem really depends on your interpretation of Serverus Snape's character, so I feel that you will get varied interpretations of the poem. 6/10. Have a nice day.
Author's Response: ah! double reviews!
Thank you for reviewing my fic. Reviews are very rare in the poetry genre, it's rather unfortunate as there are quite a few great poems. I liked the poem, however I felt the rythm was rather inconsistant. Good similies. However, I think your interpretation of this poem really depends on your interpretation of Serverus Snape's character, so I feel that you will get varied interpretations of the poem. 6/10. Have a nice day.
Author's Response: ah! double reviews!
