This was really good, and I think the shortest story that has ever made me cry. It was amazing.
That was great.
Be bold enough
The bad ways.
And when its time
To say goodbye
Author's Response: again, thanks for that. this response is late in coming, but well, glad to know that i stand somewhere among this huge bewildering world of great writers.
This poem was very good, it was very moving. I liked the rhyme pattern. Is this a oneshot? It would be wonderful to have one of these poems for Dumbledore. However, I thought the poem should've touched on Harry more. Otherwise, great, and I can't believe I'm the only review! Well, then again, my poem's been up for a week and a half and got all of 11 reads, so poetry isn't that popular here. But, still, great poem!
Author's Response: hi, thanks a lot for the review(btw, this was my first poem submission EVER), i really appreciate it. And if you liked my poem, you might enjoy the one from where i took the original idea- read it on the following link, its great. www.lcsheriff.org/donotstandatmygraveandweep.html