Reviews For Fade away..
Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 03/22/07 11:15
Chapter: Dare

This was really good, and I think the shortest story that has ever made me cry. It was amazing.

Reviewer: RiddleHatred
Date: 10/07/06 11:33
Chapter: Dare

That was great.


Be bold enough
to refuse
The bad ways.

And when its time
To say goodbye
Fade away....



Author's Response: again, thanks for that. this response is late in coming, but well, glad to know that i stand somewhere among this huge bewildering world of great writers.

Reviewer: lupinslover12
Date: 03/21/06 18:39
Chapter: Sirius

This poem was very good, it was very moving. I liked the rhyme pattern. Is this a oneshot? It would be wonderful to have one of these poems for Dumbledore. However, I thought the poem should've touched on Harry more. Otherwise, great, and I can't believe I'm the only review! Well, then again, my poem's been up for a week and a half and got all of 11 reads, so poetry isn't that popular here. But, still, great poem!

Author's Response: hi, thanks a lot for the review(btw, this was my first poem submission EVER), i really appreciate it. And if you liked my poem, you might enjoy the one from where i took the original idea- read it on the following link, its great.

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