Excellent, this is straight off to my favorites list (which is getting so long...oh well...).
Excellent start, it really grabs the reader. Looking forward to reading more - and thanks for your review!
A wandless witch, eh? I like ... Your writing flows very naturally. I really love it. She knew James and Lils and all the Marauders, and what you've done with her makes her seem like she really could have been there all along. Congrats! I love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Ella!! You always say the nicest things about my writing! I so glad you like it!
yay! this is nice! I like the personality of Lynn! she's brave but cowardly if that makes any sence. Or at least she is that way in my mind. anyhow, I'll read on and hope for the best! Peace out!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like Lynn! She's one of my favorite characters to write! Last Chapter is sumitted and waiting approval!
OoOoO!! Me likey! I must carry on! continue! yes! good story needs reviews! Peace out!
Author's Response: Thanks!... I think...
This is really good. I like the tension that you've put in Lynn. It's really intriguing. Man, I wish I could do OC's like that.
Author's Response: Thankyou so much! Lynn is very dear to me, as most of my characters are, so I really appreciate the compliment for her. As soon as I can, the final chapter will be up! It's all ready to go, I just have to subitt it! Thanks again!
Oh, wow, I am really loving this. I confess, you've got me hooked. Please, write quickly! And please read my story, The Pheonix's Feather! :D
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you like it! I have the rest written, I'm just waiting for the mod's to approve it! Shouldn't be too long...
I like this ... I really really like this. It was on my favorites because I wanted to be able to find it, but I really really like this. Very interesting plotline. Excellent job. Excellent.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it!!! I'm still working on the next chapter, hopefully it will be up soon... And I'm in your favorites? I'm honored!
I think that was the most excellent introduction posted on the site. Many have mastered the art of story-telling, but few have mastered the art of introducing the aforementioned stories. Applause, my friend, much applause.
Author's Response: *sniff* Thankyou so much! The stories in between the stories are my favorites... that's why I wrote this.
No fair ending a chapter before it is done. MORE! Soon, please.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you liked it!! Don't worry, the next chapter needed some reworking, but i've got it submitted and it's just waiting for the Mod's approval!
Very good. Please keep on writing. Rating:8
Author's Response: Don't worry... I intend to! keep writing, I mean...
This is a great start. Quick as you can post another chapter. I need to read more. It would be great if you could please take a moment to read and review my story. --- Samantha
Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate your feedback... another chapter should be up as soon as the mod's approve it! (hopefully that'll be soon!)
