question? where is the next part to be found? I want to read it...
add soon please!!! I love this story, and want to know what happens!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Thank god this isn't the end of the story, I was so upset when i thought it was. I love this story and I hope you update! At the start she was with a doctor, don't they call them Healers in the magical world? It was very interesting reading about Nott studying her, was that part of what she said about Voldemort trying to steal her powers? This is definitely one of my fave stories and I hope to read more! :) 10/10
Author's Response: Good point about the doctor... I missed that one... But, actually, considering that Lynn spent several years with Muggles, she may associate healers with doctors, even in her memories. Yes... we'll stick with that story...
This story is SO good. Definitely one of my favourites. I knew there was something there, so she doesn't need a wand to do magic? That's an interesting idea. Harry seems very... like a teenager. He didn't seem like he wanted to talk to her, but I guess he had lost sirius and alot was going on, so he has the right. I just read your last Response to the latest review. LAST CHAPTER?!?! I don't want there to be a last chapter cos that means it's finished :(. Well... all good things must come to an end. 10/10!
Author's Response: Well, there's more to Lynn's story, for sure, but this is just the end of one part of it. Fear not! I am working on the next part, which deals more with... well, can't say. You'll have to wait and see...
Fantastic! This story is really good, it's on my favourites list thanx to this chappie! I was wondering, she touched Remus' face and looked into his eyes and she knew, she touched Peter's doorhandle and she knew someone had apparated 9or maybe she heard that) she said she had wanted to look into Peter's eyes and touch his face to make sure. Sirius looked into her eyes and it said that was something not many would have done, why? Does she have some special sort of power? I wasn't really wondering about why she didn't use her wand until you mentioned it, now I really want to know! 10/10 :):)
Author's Response: Lynn is quite adept in reading intentions, as you may notice later on. Huh? Did I just divulge that? Oh well. Yes, you know how they say to look a person in the eye and see if they're lying? Lynn takes that to the extreme. She can tell intent... as to why she can do that, you'll have to read on...
Very very interesting. Good plot and ideas, though there are a couple of spelling errors in there. It also seems that you've missed the space bar a few times. Still, it's exciting! Can't wait to read the next chappie! :)
I love this, it's so intriguing. I'm gathering she was friends with Lily and James, so it'll be interesting to find out what really happened. Great story! 9/10 because there were a couple of spelling mistakes. :)
Author's Response: I swear, I'm going to work on those spelling errors! I hate bad spelling... I'm glad you liked it.
OMG! great story. Keep up the good job and UPDATE SOOON!!!
Okay, I read this a couple days ago, and was about to review, when my computer decided not to show me anything on the internet. and then I was so busy yesterday...
any way, I think this fan fic is awesome hurry up with the next chapter, okay. a big, huge, fat, *10*
P.S. You rule!
Author's Response: Finally, someone who understands the truth of my superiority - I DO rule! Kidding... Thanks for the lovely review!
It was good that you eneded the chapter there, becuase now everyone just HAS to read the next chapter. It was so great!
Author's Response: sneaky, aren't I?
Cool stuff, we know all about James' Friends from the books but I cant remember anything about Lilys.
Author's Response: Thanks! Like I've said before, I really like to write between what is already said, that way my story works no matter what comes in the future. Thanks for the review!
WOW what a fabulous story more more more like yesterday
Author's Response: Awww, thanks!
Oh, I hate cliffhangers! But they keep me coming back to the computer to find out what happens. PLEASE update soon! This chapter was most intriguing... sincerely, On Angels Wings
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it... I will try to update as soon as I can. I wish I could update more often, I really do. But, especially since now I have decided to extend this story and keep parts One and Two on the same fic, my life is somewhat hectic. I will continue this as soon as I can. Promise.
This is excellent so far! Please update soon.
Author's Response: I just might!
Oh, it's a short story! NOOOO! Anyway, glad there are sequels. Keep writing ... I'll keep a look out for you!
Author's Response: You know, due to popular demand, I may just keep this one going! I have to think about it, though....
Author's Response: All right! I know when I am defeated!.... I will keep this story going on this same fic, and just label everything as part two. This should be interesting...
I love this story !!!It has such an interesting twist. Please update soon. I wanna know wha hapens!!!!
Author's Response: Well, this is the last chappie of this fic, but there is more to learn about Lynn... The Next one will be titled, "What Was Left Behind", and it will pick up right where this one left off, with Lynn comming to back into Hogwarts. keep an eye out for it!
Oh, are you ever going to update? Agh, I need more!
Author's Response: Yes, I am going to update... I've tried several times but my fic has been rejected each time! So, I am overhauling it to work out the gliches. SHould be in working order within the week. Meanwhile, check out my humor fic... sofar, it seems to be getting good reviews.
Author's Response: Alright, last chapter has been posted and approved!
Interesting..a wandless witch, eh? I can't wait until you write some more of this story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the last chapter.... should be up fairly soon!
Oh the spelling mistakes! I have to agree with Ella about your wonderful writing style though. A wandless witch eh? Interesting concept.....
Author's Response: My computer word program is evil and out to kill my fan fictions!!! I swear I'll try to fix those mistakes... dumb word program... oh, and thanks for the review!!!
This just keeps getting better - having her thinking of Godrics Hollow and then accidently apparating there was brilliant. Some small spelling mistakes were really annoying - sorry I had to say it. Can I assume from Lynn's reaction that the boy-who-lived isn't meant to be famous in America? Great story so far...
Author's Response: SO sorry about the spelling mistakes!! I tried to catch them all, but for some reason my computer doesn't catch some! I ran it through spell check, like, eight times! Anyway, Sure, Harry's big in America, but she's not apart of the wizarding world there, so she wouldn't know. Thanks for your reviews!! And I'll try to fix those mistakes...