Reviewer: mooncalf
Date: 10/18/06 15:54
Chapter: One-shot

I have to say, of all your Draco/Hermione one-shots this has to be my above-all favourite. I love how you incorporated so much humour into the story, but managed to keep a good plot, snappy dialogue and a wonderfully characterised Hermione. While the descriptions in the fic are very funny, especially the repeated allusions to Draco as a devil from hell. However, the real beauty of this fic lies in the witty, delightfully cutting conversations between the two. Probably because of my twisted mind, I laughed out loud when I read the threatened castration with a hairpin. I also loved how poor Draco managed to put his foot in it with the elephant line. Im not worried, Hermione spat. Im angry, agitated, despairing, annoyed and, apparently, the size of an elephant!. Typical! Grammatically, your fic was pretty much faultless -- even I, the notoriously picky beta, didn't notice any obvious errors. The ending was wonderful; you showed her new relationship with Draco so well in the scene where she is waiting and waiting for him. This was comical and yet, at the same time, very touching. Overall, an excellent fic!

Author's Response: Thank you, mooncalf. Draco's resemblances to the devil seem to have been the favourite part in my reviewers' opinion :) I'm glad you liked them, too. I'm extremely pleased to hear that you thought the conversations were best, since I deeply value good conversations in fanfics. You don't have a twisted mind; I like the hairpin castration comment as well (though since I'm the one who wrote it, I might not be the perfect person to ensure your sanity). Yeah, the elephant comment is worthy of remembrance as well, I think ;) I'm glad you didn't find grammatical errors. I reread my stories countless times, because I know, from having read numerous fanfics, how typos and such can interrupt the flow of a story. Plus, I have a wonderful beta, whom I find irreplaceable. I'm happy to hear you liked the ending - endings are important. I am inexplicably flattered by your review, mooncalf, thank you.

Reviewer: SmileZ
Date: 10/15/06 21:14
Chapter: One-shot

HAHAAH! SHE SCREAMED! Lol that was hilarious. haha this one is your best out of all of the one shots i read! haha so funny. what I'm gathering from here is that Draco wants forgiveness... from a passed relationship? or no. maybe just for being a (sexy) ass. THIS IS NUMBER UNO! can't wait for more of your one shots!

Author's Response: She did, indeed. He was interrupting her daily routine, what would you expect her to do? :) Thanks, SmileZ, I'm glad you liked it. Option two: Draco wants forgiveness for being an arse. Thanks again! You don't have to wait long.

Reviewer: ShippersUnited
Date: 10/13/06 15:37
Chapter: One-shot

This is such a cute story, even if i don't like the idea of Hermonie and Draco, it's still cute and i love it, Favorited by me!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Coming from a non Hr/D shipper, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Dan_Fan90
Date: 09/22/06 20:27
Chapter: One-shot

loved this one you definetly should write a fic with this one pls pls plssssssssss

Author's Response: I'm not making this into a chaptered story, sorry, but thanks!

Reviewer: Helios
Date: 09/19/06 17:59
Chapter: One-shot the whole satan thing.

Author's Response: Thanks, Helios!

Reviewer: Roselin
Date: 09/12/06 20:33
Chapter: One-shot

Love it! So funny! It's one of the best!

Author's Response: Thank you, Roselin!

Reviewer: xXcrimson_dawnXx
Date: 09/02/06 21:52
Chapter: One-shot

how did he find her almost everytime?

Author's Response: He has his ways...

Reviewer: skyeclarke009
Date: 08/28/06 19:43
Chapter: One-shot

Yes, well now i'm done with that, i'd like to say that that was AMAZING. Very well played out. Both characters seemed to be very like the characters in the books. so yah, it was great. Write a second one please?

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you. I really appreciate your kind review. A second one? There won't be a second chapter to this story, I'm afraid, but after I've responded to my newest reviews, I'm posting another Hermione/Draco one-shot called "Take the Plunge", so you can check that one out soon. Bye!

Reviewer: obbsessed_over_ron
Date: 08/22/06 18:20
Chapter: One-shot

I loved this one too. All the names for Draco were somewhat funny

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: GinnyMWPotter
Date: 08/12/06 19:47
Chapter: One-shot

I NEED MORE! Why one chapter? I think you should continue it!

Author's Response: You need more? Oh, I'm sorry, but this is a one-shot (thus the single chapter) and I don't intend to continue it. Thank you for your review, GinnyMWPotter!

Reviewer: kazfeist
Date: 08/07/06 0:02
Chapter: One-shot

I remember reading this! I liked it then, too. Was wondering if you wanted to replace "..The barbarian COULD whine..." with CAN, in the same sentence. Or, did you want that particular nuance? Anyway, loved it!

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you liked it before just as you like it now the second time you've read it. I'll see if I can change 'could' to 'can', but first I have a lot of reviews to respond to since I've been away for so long on holiday. Thanks, kazfeist!

Reviewer: kazfeist
Date: 08/07/06 0:02
Chapter: One-shot

I remember reading this! I liked it then, too. Was wondering if you wanted to replace "..The barbarian COULD whine..." with CAN, in the same sentence. Or, did you want that particular nuance? Anyway, loved it!

Reviewer: little bee
Date: 07/31/06 1:55
Chapter: One-shot

This story is absolutely wonderful! I love the humor and sarcasm ;)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, little bee!

Reviewer: charmed03
Date: 07/23/06 0:15
Chapter: One-shot

where's the sex?!!!!

Author's Response: Excuse me?

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 07/20/06 3:54
Chapter: One-shot

LOL Who knew giving forgivness could be so tiring.

Author's Response: Yes, poor Hermione...

Reviewer: lexymalfoy
Date: 07/16/06 22:34
Chapter: One-shot

This was great. You have a real distict witty sense of humor that's very refreshing. Great fic. (Hope you don't mind me Reccing this over @ LJ)

Author's Response: Thank you, lexymalfoy! I'm flattered that you liked the humour of this story.

Reviewer: Crank_up_the_Volume
Date: 07/15/06 15:58
Chapter: One-shot

I can relate to Hermione AND Draco in this situation... XD

Author's Response: Really? Hopefully not to that extend... Thanks for the review, Crank_up_the_Volume!

Reviewer: Bebe Midnight Eye
Date: 07/09/06 23:43
Chapter: One-shot

oh man. that was funny. i love your stories and one-shots.

Author's Response: Thank you, Bebe Midnight Eye!

Reviewer: Marietta Mink
Date: 07/09/06 22:20
Chapter: One-shot

That was really good!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 07/03/06 15:23
Chapter: One-shot

I like it. Yay! SDraco IS an insufferable moron who's good side can melt into his bad side. THAT'S the personality I like.

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it. Yes, he must have to sides, he just must have. Thanks, stormy_lovegood!

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