Reviewer: ginny96
Date: 07/02/12 11:59
Chapter: August 20 - September 1

write more, i order you! (joking, of corse)

Reviewer: savannaharrington
Date: 10/30/09 15:45
Chapter: August 20 - September 1

this is a great story. i cannot wai t till you get another chapter out

Reviewer: JessC
Date: 07/24/07 22:58
Chapter: August 20 - September 1

i think there are too mani big words 4 dum ppl like me..... xD

Reviewer: JessC
Date: 07/24/07 22:57
Chapter: August 20 - September 1

i think there are too mani big words 4 dum ppl like me..... xD

Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso
Date: 05/01/06 15:35
Chapter: August 20 - September 1

OH add more chapters! This Lily is a great one! Not all-to-serious-and-a-big-know-it-all-that-won't-listen-to-anyone. She is PERFECT! this story is added to favs!

Reviewer: Untouchable_M
Date: 03/29/06 11:40
Chapter: August 20 - September 1

You have really built up the characters and developed the scenery well. I think you have all the characters spot on to how I imagine them myself. Brilliant piece of writing I usually find in most these fics that authors like to jump straight to the middle. Really looking forward to reading more, keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Why thank you, love. :) I'm way behind on writing, but I will try to get a new chapter up ASAP.

Reviewer: lubug
Date: 03/24/06 19:57
Chapter: August 20 - September 1

Hey! Im the first reviewer? Thats preety cool! ok so GREAT JOB on your story! I thought you did an terrific job with all of the characters. Especally James, Lily and SIRIUS! -haha! that whole thing with the carrige and the kissing the hand, AND the stalker part! teehe! very funny! Ok normaly I give 1 gold star if i like a story... but i think i will give you 2 because you had a great story (*one gold star*) and your story was long! yay! (*another gold star!*) PLEASE DONT KEEP ME WAITING! and HURRY AND UPDATE! =D **

Author's Response: Aww, thank you, dear. :) I'm glad you liked it. I haven't exactly started the next chapter yet... *cringe*... but it'll be coming along soon. I've got a lot of plans for it, so it'll be easy to write. Thanks again!

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