Reviews For A Child's Gift
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/21/10 10:13
Chapter: Sneaking Away

I'm surprised that Ginny didn't keep better track of Aria and Abby. She's Ron's sister and friend of Hermione and Harry so you'd think she's know better than to leave two young girls alone to plot and plan. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Car623
Date: 07/20/10 12:25
Chapter: Epilogue

Honestly the best fanfiction I have read! And I have read quite a few.
At first I thought you were going to have Wicker as an animagous and he was the one kidnapping her because he disappeared the first time she was taken. LOL!
All the twists and turns you put in kept me guessing the whole time.
There was just enough action, suspense, and romance that made it perfect. I couldn't stop reading.
Amazing story. Fantastic job :D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/20/10 11:10
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

It almost seems like Justice is a ghost or some sort of undead thing. I hope Leo has found something useful. I think we'd all find it very interesting if our pets could talk. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/20/10 8:51
Chapter: Taken Away

Interesting about Wicker. I know we're all dying to know who Justice is. Wouldn't it be funny if the Muggle criminal figured it out. At least Hermione knows who it is. Great chapter.

Reviewer: ultamitespider-man
Date: 07/19/10 22:28
Chapter: Epilogue

I lovedd ittt!! I love how you made Lavendar the bad guy :) I did that in my story as well, she's just so easy to make a nut-job haha! Anyway, I loved your story and I'm requesting more Draco/Hermione from you :)
Amazing, as I said up above.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/19/10 12:24
Chapter: Dead Men Don't Talk

I liked how you wrote the scenes between Draco and Hermione. We know that she was out to seduce him and we know they had sex several times. Yet, you left the details to our imagination. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/16/10 10:55
Chapter: The Heart Knows the Words Unspoken

I keep thinking about Wicker's blue eyes. I've known many dogs and I haven't seen many with blue eyes so that makes Wicker unusual. I still say something strange will come out of Wicker. I wonder if Draco will miss Pearson and try to figure out who's to blame for his disappearance. The ties of the Justice Project to the Ministry are very interesting and I'm sure you'll explain them over time. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/15/10 15:10
Chapter: Confessions of the Heart

For some reason I thought Nowhere was in Wyoming but in this chapter you said it was in Wisconsin. Those are two wildly different states. I thought that Abby was Draco's daughter but I still think, if I were Draco, that I would've had to say "OK, but really, am I definitely Abby's father?" I just like things put clearly. This kind of complicates things even more. I'd really regret all of the missed time, if I were Draco. You'd think if he really wanted to find Hermione he would've but I guess us Muggles have something called the internet that I'm not sure works for Wizards:D Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/15/10 13:30
Chapter: Home Invasion

I don't think Draco and Hermione are acting all that out of character. This is after the War so people change. I would think they would have to change to survive. I can't wait for you to reveal who Justice is. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/15/10 12:59
Chapter: Letters

I'm curiious, as I'm sure everyone else was, as to who Justice is. I was surprised to see Pansy as Narcissa's guest. I guess I'm also surprised that she's unmarried and still seems interested in Draco. I'm so glad I found this story. It's so interesting. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/14/10 10:30
Chapter: The Lost One

I'm a little confused. I thought Draco and Hermione were neighbors in Wyoming and that her parents lived in Britain. I must have missed something somewhere. Or are they all returning to Britain. I'm finding the Wicker situation to be a little suspicious. The dog disappeared when Abby did. Knowing dogs like I do I would think the dog would be part of the rescue party but he wasn't. When Abby returned so did the dog. I'm thinking Wicker and Spooky could be one and the same and that Spooky is an animagus. I always like to guess and I'm usually wrong. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/14/10 10:10
Chapter: The End of the Beginning

This totally made sense--for Abby to mask where she went so Spooky couldn't follow her in the snow. I'm a little surprised that she was unable to use even accidental magic to help herself out of the situation. She's also Hermione Granger's daughter so I would think that Hermione might have taught her some spells or something to help keep her out of danger. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/14/10 9:28
Chapter: Something of Hope

Well, that was kind of mean leaving the end of the chapter like that. I wonder what Abby did. She did seem like she was going to make a move of some sort. I'm glad Draco and Hermione kissed though. I guess that wasn't so odd considering they had a relationship in the past. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/14/10 9:10
Chapter: My Lips to Your Ears

I'm so excited that they could see that Abby was alive. Funny that the spell came out of a muggle magic book. Draco is starting to think about when he asked Hermione if Abby was his daughter. There are so many mysteries going on beneath the surface in this story. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/14/10 8:27
Chapter: Old Enemies, New Friends

I like that you give flashbacks so we can see what happened in the past. I think it was good of Harry to come right out and set things right with Draco rather than assuming that everything was fine. I also like that we know what's going on with Abby. But who's the mysterious hooded man? Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/13/10 15:33
Chapter: I Have You

I had to chuckle at Draco's determination at the end of the chapter. It sounds like he has some plans. I'm really curious as to who has Abby. I'm really enjoying this story. I'm glad it was featured and I found it to read. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/13/10 15:11
Chapter: Missing

Wow--I wonder who took Abby. I also don't think Draco thought about what Hermione said. She didn't really answer his question of whether Abby was his daughter. I don't think he realized that. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/13/10 12:38
Chapter: Morning After

Draco did learn something new--that Abby doesn't know who her father is. I wonder what happened to Ron. I hope Hermione is home and talks to Draco. Wouldn't it be cool if Kim was a house elf? Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/13/10 12:22
Chapter: Back Again

Now I'm mad at Draco. I wish he hadn't gotten drunk and passed out. I wanted to know what he had to say. I think that Hermione isn't married and that Abby's father doesn't live with them but that's all I'm going to say for now. I want to know what mysteriously happened 10 years ago. Why did Hermione leave? Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/13/10 11:40
Chapter: Firewood

You know, if Draco was smart he'd welcome Abby into his home and gather all of the information he can about Hermione. I think she's got more than a few surprises up her sleeve. I like Abby's style. She's to the point and honest. Great chapter.

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