Reviews For A Child's Gift
Reviewer: FabalaOfTheWest
Date: 07/17/07 16:17
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

WOW!!!! this is the coolest story ever!!!!!
i have read the whole thing in almost one sitting (more like 3 but whose counting) but i have to share this compurter with a few other ppl and they always demand that i get off when im at the best parts...but what r u gonna do. siblings will be siblings. anyway great story. i love ur writing style and think u have done a fantastic done with all of the characters!!!!! Kudos to u!!!!

Always,
FabalaOfTheWest

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I know the sibling syndrome I have five.

Reviewer: natrualdisaster99
Date: 07/16/07 23:11
Chapter: Something of Hope

“Think about it, you big lummox. When we argue, how does it usually end?”

Harry’s confused expression lasted only a few more seconds before it cleared. He grinned, “Ohh.”


Best lines EVER lol

Author's Response: Thank you. It always pleases me when someone finds the humor in my story since I'm not great at writing humor. Thanks.

Reviewer: kristola
Date: 07/15/07 10:14
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

hi my name is karissa and oh my goodness, i absolutly love your story. it is by far my favorite dramione romance flics i have read so far and even though i only got hooked on mnff a few weeks and have only just started on reading dramione flics i dont think they will compare to your story. how many chapters do you plan on writting? i hope a lot but then again i hope it doesnt take too long, but then you cant rush creativity. could you PLEASE email me when ever you post a new chapter because i am dying to know what is going to happen next. My email address is iwantsorbets@yahoo.com

thanks and again i absolutly love your story.

Love Always,
Karissa


Author's Response: Wow! Um, I'm glad to hear you love the story. I plan on 32 chapters though I might end up with 33 from the way the story is shaping up. Oh and if you sign up for auto notice you will get an e-mail telling you when the story is updated. Thank you so much for the lovely review.

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 07/14/07 23:49
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

Wow!!!! That was really great,you thoght everything out really well,it was believeable and intresting at the same time!!!! Great story,Update soon, *~*Sarah*~* P.s I like how Harry told Draco about how he both lost and gained love in the war. Great characters and great wording,this story is ASOME!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you. More to come soon.

Reviewer: slyslytherin1314
Date: 07/11/07 16:20
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

Dang it!!! I was waiting for this chapter to come out to see who justice was. Hopefully the next chapter will tell us, but I still think that this chapter was great.

Author's Response: Um, Justice is for later, but thaniks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: marijnemijn
Date: 07/10/07 6:03
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

this is becooming weird
every story i addd to favvies takes AGES to upload
i got this email saying you'd uploaded it on the 3rd or something
but it's taking a week to validate?!
wow, those mods must be BUSY any way i'm leaving for sapin so i won't be able to read it until the 25 of august *cries*
well at least I'll have deathly hallows, right? :)
thank you for writing a beautiful story :)


Author's Response: You are not the first to tell me that the e-mail goes out before the chapter is actually up. I hope your time in Spain is AWSOME! I have never been outside the US and hope to someday got to Australia. That's my country of choice, anyhow. Yes, Deathly Hollows will have to be your mate. Thanks for suggesting that my story is beautiful.

Reviewer: All_things_fiction
Date: 07/09/07 5:10
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

YAY!!!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!! Whats the deal where it always shows another chapter but it is not validated yet? Why?... Great story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I don't know why it shows the next chapter before validation, it's frustrating, I know. Sorry.

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 07/08/07 22:11
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

Awesome........... I really don't think there are any other words to describe this chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: milly_13
Date: 07/07/07 21:08
Chapter: Go Away

fainted? thts a little retarted don't u think? but im glad tht hermione is finally in the picture i was gonna give up on this story if she wasn't

Author's Response: No, I don't think it is 'retarded' of Hermione to faint and nor did anyone else since you are the first to suggest this. Forgive me if I sound sore or a tad grumpy but this story is into it’s 22 chapter and so far, (as I can recall) only a handful of readers have hated this story. However, even those that claim to dislike the story or even those that critique my style or grammar mistakes have never said Hermione’s fainting was retarded. Moreover, the use of this word (retarded) offends me since it is often used, by the ignorant people of society, as a word to describe those that are unfortunate to think and grow slower than most of us. I am related to such a person and often I see how hurtful this word can be to people such as this. I may be offending you at this very minute, but I find that I don’t much care. After all, you said yourself that you were about to give up on this story after only three chapters, simply because Hermione had not yet come into play. Well, my advice to you is to give up on it, Hermione is not a all that CANON in this fictionally creation of mine so I have no doubt you will hate it anyhow. For anyone else this may have offended since I find myself being very blunt tonight, I am sorry. I do love those that read and enjoy the story, though that is not to say that I hate those that do not like this fiction. I do not mind the critique I get nor do I mind those that find it hard to pass up the chance to correct my grammar. So for anyone else, besides the person that this response is aimed at, was offended, I am sorry and do hope that this will not stop you from your continued enjoyment of A Child’s Gift.

Reviewer: slytherins_queen2
Date: 07/06/07 10:48
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

You continue to surprise me each and every chapter with your brilliance. Your writing astounds me each and everytime, and just when I think I know what's going on, you twist it. Well done, I applaud you. xDD

Author's Response:

Reviewer: slytherins_queen2
Date: 07/06/07 10:47
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

You continue to surprise me each and every chapter with your brilliance. Your writing astounds me each and everytime, and just when I think I know what's going on, you twist it. Well done, I applaud you. xDD

Author's Response: Thank you, I think that's one of the best compliments I have recieved thus far. I can only hope that I can continue. Once again,thank you.

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 07/06/07 5:08
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

Great chapter!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Cont soon!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: frenchiee
Date: 07/05/07 21:21
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

that chapter confused me

Author's Response: How can I un-confuse you? Let me know.

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick
Date: 07/05/07 16:43
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

Great chapter. Loaded with info. Can't wait to see what Leo wants to say. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Leo might not have anything to say, but more is coming. Thanks.

Reviewer: ginny_ potter
Date: 07/05/07 14:24
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

wow i absolutly love this story i cant wait to figure out what happens to hermione and abby please hurry u with this story i cant wait =D

Author's Response: I'm going as fast as I can, really. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 07/05/07 14:05
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

Can't wait for the update.

Author's Response:

Reviewer: dollfaceDISASTER
Date: 07/04/07 18:20
Chapter: Visitor

great chapter once again. a couple things i noticed:
you missed the word 'mind' after 'subconcious' in the first paragraph.
there was a misplaced comma here: 'He took a few calming breaths and, tried to settle'
right here, in this bit, 'In one fluid motion; He ignored his body’s complaints and got up from the bed.' the semicolon should be a comma and for future reference, you don't need to capitalise the first word after a semicolon.
i guess i'll bring up the mum factor? i mean, she could totally be a brit in the states but it's just something i noticed.
there was a missed space here: 'sayyou are welcome'
please don't be offended by all my comments, i'm just picking up what beta eyes don't see.
i loved this chapted by the way. the girl you created is bloody adorable. :D

-Cpt. Avelia


Author's Response: Thank you for your comments and I believe everyone who reads this loves Abby.

Reviewer: dollfaceDISASTER
Date: 07/04/07 18:04
Chapter: Nowhere

ooh, i liked the first chapter. one thing that got me though was the way that the girl spoke of her mom as 'mum.' most american kids don't do that. especially the ones in wyoming.
but i loved the story anyway! *going on to the next chapter.*

-Cpt. Avelia

Author's Response: Yes, but since you are reading on, you will see why the girl says MUM, not MOM. Glad to have a new reader and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Marie Granger
Date: 07/03/07 9:44
Chapter: Taken Away

Interesting. Though, why do I have the feeling that Ron isn't really dead in this story?????

Author's Response: Yes, Ron IS DEAD!!!! No one, as JKR has pointed out can come back from the dead. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: oliverps
Date: 07/03/07 5:38
Chapter: Taken Away

omg that was gr8!! i cant help but wondering if Justice was the guy mione had a one night stand with...hmmm....but plz update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and no, the one night stand is not Justice.

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