I thought her confession was like a Politicians speech. That is to say, she was speaking but not saying much. The way she told him though, was realistic I thought.
When Lavender was reading the article about Hermione's dark twin dying, she came to the conclusion that it was really Justice who remained alive. But it wasn't, right? It was Hermione.
Anyway, I really liked this story! It was really well written, and the plot was just really well thought. Well done!
Thank you for writing this :)
It was a terrific story!! The built up during the story was fantastic, and I loved how you played with the mystery around it. Abby is the perfect Hermione’s baby girl altogether having her own temper and wits!! Draco could be the perfect loving family guy if he acknowledged the fact that he is who he is not who he used to be!! And the ending… OMG!! I couldn’t believe what was happening and actually had to read it twice!! Can I ask you something though….?? Was it really Hermione at the end or was it Justice?? And last but not least… they had a big family with Sidra and Lucian!!! First I thougt one of them was Ginny’s baby… LOL, anyhow… Great story!!
Great Story! I'm fairly new to fan fiction and I wasn't sure about Draco/Hermione pairing but I think I like it. I've spent 3 nights this week up until 3am or later reading this piece, but it is finished now and bed awaits me! My husband hates it when I do this. Keep up the good work. I'll look forward to seeing more about Abby and Aria in the future.
It was a fairly good read. However, I think that the 34 chapters were not needed as the first 30 slowly built up a climax and then the last 4 chapters were rushed and were perhaps not worth the long wait. I did, however quite like the concept of this story. Also, I believe that a little more proof reading should have been done as there were often commas where not needed and once you called Draco Harry. I'd give this a 5/10 overall.
What a great ending. I loved this story. There was a lot of romance as well as some unexpected twists and mysteries. I hope you continue working on your next story. Hopefully you'll finish it and we'll all get another enjoyable reading experience. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.
Poor Lavender--she went so far astray. I thought it was over after the scenes from the wedding. This was fun, after they figured it all out. Great chapter.
You're going to keep the cliffies going up to the bitter end aren't you? What a way for Justice to go. You have to feel sorry in a way. Justice was just a puppet in someone else's game. Great chapter.
I love Narcissa--she's always so regal. I think she and Abby will get along famously. I always love the articles in the Prophet. Great chapter.
That was an interesting twist that I didn't expect--a clone. And that explains why Justice wants the baby. Great chapter.
Gosh--who's the spy from the hospital? I'll bet Justice really didn't plan for them to take Hermione to a muggle hospital. But, who is the mysterious woman at the end? Did Justice kill her? Great chapter.
I was surprised that Hermione ended up sick. I hope she has something that can be easily healed at a muggle hospital. Like, maybe she can have pneumonia or exhaustion or something. I was sure the police were going to get involved and cause even more trouble. Great chapter.
That was a very good scene when Justice came in disguised as Hermione. I'm glad Harry made Draco kiss "her" before taking her to Draco's apartment. He would've been quick to kidnap the girls again. Great chapter.
At least someone knows where Hermione is. There are a number of mystery people running around at the moment. I like seeing Draco and Harry working together. Great chapter.
Many mysteries revealed, though the susceptor is a new thing. Its also properly explained. Is it imagination or real legend?
wow... this is an amazing fanfic... and your one amazing author... this has gotten me frustrated, anxious and excited all at the same time... geez... don't you know that i want to hurt you really bad because of all the cliffhangers and for making me wait until chapter 30 /31 (not sure) to reveal who Justice is... LOL... just kidding... but really, I am so anxious to know who Justice is that I didn't sleep until 1:00am just to finish this story and I have to go to work at 7:30 am... haha..., btw, didn't expect that... a clone... geez... I've been trying to guess who Justice is but didn't come close... anyways... thank you for sharing this wonderful story...
Aww, the scene with Draco clutching Hermione's pillow was so sweet. I smiled at the vision of Draco falling asleep with both girls and at Abby calling him Dad. Great chapter.
I was wondering if the old hag was helping Justice. I don't think she's going to have much luck getting the girls past everyone in the penthouse. Great chapter.
