Reviews For A Child's Gift
Reviewer: Harmthuria
Date: 09/02/11 8:34
Chapter: Confessions of the Heart

I thought her confession was like a Politicians speech. That is to say, she was speaking but not saying much. The way she told him though, was realistic I thought.

Reviewer: Harmthuria
Date: 08/31/11 19:06
Chapter: Go Away


Reviewer: iscreamdraco
Date: 04/02/11 17:05
Chapter: Epilogue

OMG loved the story!


Reviewer: katrin4p
Date: 02/20/11 15:16
Chapter: Epilogue

When Lavender was reading the article about Hermione's dark twin dying, she came to the conclusion that it was really Justice who remained alive. But it wasn't, right? It was Hermione. 


Anyway, I really liked this story! It was really well written, and the plot was just really well thought. Well done!


Thank you for writing this :) 

Reviewer: secretpal1505
Date: 01/21/11 11:02
Chapter: Nowhere

It was a terrific story!! The built up during the story was fantastic, and I loved how you played with the mystery around it. Abby is the perfect Hermione’s baby girl altogether having her own temper and wits!! Draco could be the perfect loving family guy if he acknowledged the fact that he is who he is not who he used to be!! And the ending… OMG!! I couldn’t believe what was happening and actually had to read it twice!! Can I ask you something though….?? Was it really Hermione at the end or was it Justice?? And last but not least… they had a big family with Sidra and Lucian!!! First I thougt one of them was Ginny’s baby… LOL, anyhow… Great story!!

Reviewer: stormygirl
Date: 10/17/10 2:04
Chapter: Epilogue

Great Story! I'm fairly new to fan fiction and I wasn't sure about Draco/Hermione pairing but I think I like it. I've spent 3 nights this week up until 3am or later reading this piece, but it is finished now and bed awaits me! My husband hates it when I do this. Keep up the good work. I'll look forward to seeing more about Abby and Aria in the future.

Reviewer: charley1093
Date: 09/17/10 12:59
Chapter: Epilogue

It was a fairly good read. However, I think that the 34 chapters were not needed as the first 30 slowly built up a climax and then the last 4 chapters were rushed and were perhaps not worth the long wait. I did, however quite like the concept of this story. Also, I believe that a little more proof reading should have been done as there were often commas where not needed and once you called Draco Harry. I'd give this a 5/10 overall.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/12/10 10:20
Chapter: Epilogue

What a great ending. I loved this story. There was a lot of romance as well as some unexpected twists and mysteries. I hope you continue working on your next story. Hopefully you'll finish it and we'll all get another enjoyable reading experience. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/10/10 12:28
Chapter: Bitter Ends

Poor Lavender--she went so far astray. I thought it was over after the scenes from the wedding. This was fun, after they figured it all out. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/10/10 10:40
Chapter: One, Two, Three, Four

You're going to keep the cliffies going up to the bitter end aren't you? What a way for Justice to go. You have to feel sorry in a way. Justice was just a puppet in someone else's game. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/09/10 12:25
Chapter: Plans Galore

I love Narcissa--she's always so regal. I think she and Abby will get along famously. I always love the articles in the Prophet. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/09/10 9:13
Chapter: Copies of the Same

That was an interesting twist that I didn't expect--a clone. And that explains why Justice wants the baby. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/06/10 12:48
Chapter: Surpises Around Corners

Gosh--who's the spy from the hospital? I'll bet Justice really didn't plan for them to take Hermione to a muggle hospital. But, who is the mysterious woman at the end? Did Justice kill her? Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/06/10 10:52
Chapter: Feverish

I was surprised that Hermione ended up sick. I hope she has something that can be easily healed at a muggle hospital. Like, maybe she can have pneumonia or exhaustion or something. I was sure the police were going to get involved and cause even more trouble. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/05/10 11:04
Chapter: Kiss Her!

That was a very good scene when Justice came in disguised as Hermione. I'm glad Harry made Draco kiss "her" before taking her to Draco's apartment. He would've been quick to kidnap the girls again. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/04/10 12:28
Chapter: Terror and Joy

At least someone knows where Hermione is. There are a number of mystery people running around at the moment. I like seeing Draco and Harry working together. Great chapter.

Reviewer: somu25
Date: 07/30/10 22:58
Chapter: Wicker Speaks

Many mysteries revealed, though the susceptor is a new thing. Its also properly explained. Is it imagination or real legend?

Reviewer: Llyrfe
Date: 07/29/10 19:50
Chapter: Epilogue

wow... this is an amazing fanfic... and your one amazing author... this has gotten me frustrated, anxious and excited all at the same time... geez... don't you know that i want to hurt you really bad because of all the cliffhangers and for making me wait until chapter 30 /31 (not sure) to reveal who Justice is... LOL... just kidding... but really, I am so anxious to know who Justice is that I didn't sleep until 1:00am just to finish this story and I have to go to work at 7:30 am... haha..., btw, didn't expect that... a clone... geez... I've been trying to guess who Justice is but didn't come close... anyways... thank you for sharing this wonderful story...

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/23/10 12:35
Chapter: Tricky Tricks

Aww, the scene with Draco clutching Hermione's pillow was so sweet. I smiled at the vision of Draco falling asleep with both girls and at Abby calling him Dad. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/21/10 15:15
Chapter: Are Ye Lost

I was wondering if the old hag was helping Justice. I don't think she's going to have much luck getting the girls past everyone in the penthouse. Great chapter.

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