This story had me hooked, the whole way you wrote the story is just so interesting with so many twists and turns. I absolutely loved it
Great story!! Although I really enjoyed it, honestly, you NEED another proofreader. The grammar was horrendous. The biggest problem was the improper use of to/too. Also, I've noticed many times, I think you mean surely! You always write surly, which is a completely different word and is an adjective. I strongly suggest you are more thorough with your proof reading in the future.
Much different than I thought the course of this story would take when I first started reading! Just simply SPLENDID!
Man, this clone is so crazy!
I don't have much to say except that this was a really really great, no, an amazing story. I also wanted to comment on how it hooks you, and pulls you in until before you know it you are losing sleep and can't seem to think about anything else. I hope you continue writing HP fanfiction because I'll definetly be a follower of you work. Thank you for the joy it brought me to read this story it was unfathomably entertaining!
Absolutley LOVED the story! There was a little mistake that I wanted to point out~At the beginning of the story and in the summary it's written that Nowhere is in Wyoming, but towards the end it is stated that Nowhere is in Wisconson. Sorry for being SO picky! Other than that, TERRIFIC FIC!
just a truly remarkable story!!!! i really never thought of hermione and draco as a couple until this story . i got teary eyed at some points in the story. thanks for writing it! your story gave me pointers on how to write my first story so thanks :)
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooo sweet
whoa great story
whoa this is getting freaky but i love it
so great loving it
oh wow love it
wow its getting better by the chapter
i dont understand is he or is he not????!!!???!!! so confused :/
awesome story so far very creative imagination :)
OMG!!!! Did NOT see that coming! awesome
Ohhh well That was interesting:)
People need to get over themselves. Cliffhangers arethe best way to finish off chapter's or stories in my opinion. Makes the audience/readers want more.
I wonder if I'm the only one who thinks Justice might be Ron Weasley. He's supposedly dead, he loves Hermione, hates Draco, her child with him should have been his (read the books), I often expect the unexpected. Just for a better surprise at the end if I'm wrong, or joy at being right.