umbridge. no freaking wayyy. that came out of nowhere!
i really like your portrayal of malfoy. it's kind of sexy... (:
I did catch the Empire references--also my favorite of the trilogy. I am so sad Remus and Tonks died--but I liked it better the way you did it than the way JKR did. At least Remus had a chance to tell Harry he loved him and goodbye. ***Boo hoo***
great story, please write a sequel, it all fit, at least the ending, you shoukd write a sequel.
but you decide.
Great chapter, couldn't stop laughing. I love the lines you wrote for Fred and George, and the Gnome screaming all the way, just made me laugh out loud!
Great, just great.
I am writing this after the Deathly Hallows and prefer your epilogue. I liked how you kept Harry's intregrety with Ginney until the end. The sexual experiences seemed believable and I was happy they were included. And, Finally, Umbridge got what was coming to her. You did such a nice job with the conversation text. I believe I was actually grieving the loss of the Harry Potter series but then I came across this wonderful story. I love a story that makes me feel the emotions of the characters. Crying and laughing right along with the characters. Dudley, a Bad Boy??? now that is a twist I didn't expect but certainly leaves this story open ended. I'm hopeful that you will reconcider writing a sequel for all of us truely selfish Harry Potter fans. GREAT STORY
THE BEST HP FAN FIC EVA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was magnificent. I cried through the whole chapter.
I read the epilouge, again, and I LOVED IT! Wow! This is such a great story ROCK ON! =D
I've read this too many times now, but it never gets tiring. The more you read it, the more you realise how clever it is. It's 100% completely awesome.
Uh oh...bad Dudley! Bad, bad! Good story, though. I love a good epilogue(sp?).
Dolores Umbridge is really incredibly stupid...
Yay! Ron's awake!!! But reading this after the publication of HP7, I'm surprised by the mention of Ravenclaw's tiara...O.o
Oh, Malfoy's not all bad...mostly bad, yes, but not all. I could learn to like him...
thank you so much for writing THE BEST HARRY POTTER SEQUEL EVER. your writing is just like jkr's: SIMPLY MAGNIFICENT. :) thanks for giving me a good read!!! nice work. i look forward to seeing more of your great work!
that was the best story ever. it was like jkr wrote that herself
i do hope you make a sequel to this. and make dudley the bad guy. your storys are great to read.
oh my gawd dudley is the new voldemort!!!!!!!!