Reviewer: lantern_light
Date: 03/05/07 14:38
Chapter: Secrets Unraveled

This is probably one of the best stories I have read on this site and if I don't see you published or running for the Booker Prize then I don't know what to expect!

Reviewer: Geeooo
Date: 02/27/07 19:05
Chapter: Repercussions

il do a proper review once i hit the end, but so far, like your other stories ive read, its awesome!

Reviewer: MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd
Date: 02/24/07 20:03
Chapter: Epilogue

This was such an amazing fic. I followed it till the end, and I usually don't have such patience. It inspired so much emotion in me that I'm honestly amazed. Thank you for this; a wonderful read while waiting for the Deathly Hallows.

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 02/18/07 12:40
Chapter: Epilogue

Wow. This is probably the best fan fic I've ever read, and I have read many great ones to compare it with. I would be very surprised and disappointed if JKR didn't use half of the ideas in this story for The Deathly Hallows. I feel like this is a sneak peek into what the book is going to be like. I will certainly read this one repeatedly until the last book comes out because I'm sure this is the closest anyone can get to it at the moment. All of your amazing ideas for the plot seemed to be carried out precisely in the way it was supposed to. I think it had the same balance of romance, action, and angst as the original Harry Potter books. Well, there might be a little more romance, but I'm not complaining! It was all played out in way I agreed with. My only question is from the chapter when Dudley says what he saw during the dementor attack in the OotP. I thought that dementors made people think of their worst memories, not their worst fears. Since I doubt that the Dursley's ever put Dudley in Harry's cupboard I think you may have written that wrong. But other than that this fic is perfect! I can't wait to read your other works. Thank you so much for writing such a magnificent story. It has been a pleasure reading it! =D

Reviewer: roXtar
Date: 02/14/07 22:18
Chapter: Chaos

OMG UMBRIDGE!!!!!!! my mouth literally dropped open wen i read that! OMG UMBRIDGE!!! AHHHH!!!! OMG!! I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT I'M THINKIN!!! UMBRIDGE????!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: roXtar
Date: 02/14/07 22:18
Chapter: Chaos

OMG UMBRIDGE!!!!!!! my mouth literally dropped open wen i read that! OMG UMBRIDGE!!! AHHHH!!!! OMG!! I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT I'M THINKIN!!! UMBRIDGE????!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: roXtar
Date: 02/14/07 22:18
Chapter: Chaos

OMG UMBRIDGE!!!!!!! my mouth literally dropped open wen i read that! OMG UMBRIDGE!!! AHHHH!!!! OMG!! I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT I'M THINKIN!!! UMBRIDGE????!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: roXtar
Date: 02/13/07 20:47
Chapter: Lions and Tigers and...Dragons?

By far the most exciting chapter!!!!

Bada ba ba ba.... I'm lovin it!

Reviewer: slayerslat
Date: 01/22/07 18:51
Chapter: Epilogue

so good my favorite story on muggle net please write a sequel

Reviewer: slayerslat
Date: 01/22/07 16:40
Chapter: The Locked Room

so awsome this is my favorite story

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/14/07 20:47
Chapter: Epilogue

i can't belive dudly story dose reapeat itself let's hope he is less bright then voldy. any way i'm so happy for harry although i thought his son would be called sirius james potter or somthing ah well. ROn and hermione finaly getting married that's great. anyway i loved this story i can't wait to read some of your other work.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/14/07 20:25
Chapter: The Power He Knows Not

i loved this cahpter i agree with you about harry deserving his reward and about harry and ginny being older then their ages. I'm glad they are going back to school and the weasley reunion was lovley

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/14/07 13:20
Chapter: A New Beginning

"Bugger it all, Harry!" Ron shouted, entering the room just as Harry hit the floor. "What are you trying to do to yourself, and why are you doing it on my watch? Hermione and Ginny are going to kill me."

favorite quote

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/14/07 10:41
Chapter: Survivors

wow it's finally over i think harry will recover fine but it will take a while. i'm glad all the weaslyes are fine and a little sad about george's leg but i agree about it beeing better for george then fred. Poor draco i knew he would be devastated. and mrs. parkinson that is a true shame. Dudley worries me a little though. I agree about harry deserving the oportunity of talking to the ppl he lost i only wish he could have gotten more time the thing i'm most glad about though is that they didn't talk about petigrew.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/13/07 21:45
Chapter: The Locked Room

i loved this chapter it is my favorite of all and guess what foronce you made me cry and not out of sadness i know you always write about ppl not likeing crying girls but i can't help it. btw i loved how the conversation proceded and i agree about ppl killing harry off but it is a posibility so i'm trying to open my mind to it. any way great job

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/13/07 21:12
Chapter: Voices Beyond the Veil

first of all let me say i am proud of draco and second of all that idea is wonderful i would have never thought of it but i really think it could work. the best part is that he isn't dead now let's just hope everything turnes out fine for draco and the ppl at hogwarts

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/13/07 20:29
Chapter: Mortal Peril

wow poor harry he is in so much trouble yu know i was about ready to curse pantsy in every language i know until she died even she didn't deserve that she only did it out of desperate love. poor draco when he finds out if he get0s to find out. i can't belive it ends like this i know voldemort won't win your much to rational for that but even then i didn't see it ending like this. and hermione claimes to be smart she should be able to figure it out but she always works worse under preasure remember book 1 "buti have no wood" and the quote "Harry thought if evil could be captured, his face was exactly what it would look like." is one of my favorites. any way this is getting interesting so i should probably just keep on reading

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/13/07 19:47
Chapter: Matters of the Heart

i knew he was going to be transported somewhere i knew it. I like that harry has decided to spend time with his friends finished his letters. and the whole beach idea i love it. i can't belive that being treated like harry is dudleys worst night mare however i do like that he and harry are getting along civily.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/13/07 18:29
Chapter: Lifeline

i liked this chapter spetially what harry and hermione said. and i am so glad that ginny is ok.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 01/12/07 10:18
Chapter: Scars

i'm trying to follow even if it's a little hard i guess it's best just to keep on readingç

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