Wow, this was really amazing. It was brilliantly written with a lot of emotion. I could tell instantly it was talking about Draco, and the change of viewpoint was smooth. Really good job.
Very dark,but interesting.
This is beautiful.
This is amazing. Your diction is very... cant find the word... thought provoking? I guess that works. I like how they dont fit, but at the same time they do. Cant wait for more.
I saw this story on LJ too! I was sort of skimming though, but I'm glad I read it! Very good and poetic!