I admit that I generally stay away from 'general' stories, especially after HBP. But this is worth making exceptions! Your writing style is fluid and true to the HP books. I look orward to future chapters!
Well done! But of course, I'm not biased at all. Keep up the good work! Cypress
It's really good, the writing style imitates JKR's to the comma (with distinct flourishes of your own, of course). I can't wait for the next installment...update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the positive comments. I'm sure you'll be pleased to know that chapter two is now up and three is in the queue.
Hey, your story good. In fact, besides Aunt Petunia asking for forgiveness and giving advice to Harry, its like reading Book 7 itself. I'd really love to see how this story will pan out.