AGH!!!!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!!!
wow. i really love the title to your fan fic and still amazed that this is your first! :) i loved it all and i'm looking forward to read more of your stories!
OH WOW! Great story but i'm so sad that it's almost over :( james is sooo romantic!
hurrah!! i can't wait to read about their wedding.
Woot! Mrs. Lily Potter!!!
HEHEHEE *chuckle* great chapter even though it was short
ooo!! a promise ring. brilliant. this story is just getting better and better!
I love how you ended this chappy w/ "Impossible" and I still am furious @ THE LITTLE RAT WORMTAIL!!! ARGH..Snape seems a little OOC but then again...we don't really KNOW what he was like to Lily..i guess i've read too many fanfics where Snape is not THAT mean to Lily (at least not mean enough for Crucio) because she was so kind to him
CURSE YOU PETER PETTIGREW!! That nasty little RAT! ARGH!!!!
love *sigh* love is so beautiful..
hey! did remus french her?! anywayz i still wanna see sirius do the thing w/ mcgonagall!!! lol
kimmy likes sirius..sirius likes kimmy...same goes for remus/rachael!!! THEY ARE PERFECT!
LOL!!! i wanna see moony french rachael!! i don't care if sirius professes his "deep love" for mcgonagall cuz that's something he'd probably do anywayz.
AWWW!!! THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER YET!!! YES! James finally makes his move..
woot! woot! woot! Lily the Courageous..wow. she was the one that asked James not the opposite!!! HURRAY!!!
awww!!! love is stirring in the atmosphere between Lily and James!! Finally Lily is being nice to him!
I really like the idea of Lily playing Quidditch..I've only read one other fanfic that had Lily as a Seeker for the Gryffindor Quidditch team but most fanfics don't have her on the team. YUP. I quite enjoyed this chapter...:)
I think it's a great chapter. Don't worry it's fine with me.
WOW...I am astonished that this is only your first fanfic! If I were to right a fanfic, it would be so horrible my reviews would be -1000. I love it so far and I can't wait to continue this wonderfully written story.
Brilliant!! i think the moral was a good idea!