i love this sory more than any other i've read, write faster!
uh-oh....later was sooner than she thought, huh? well, i hope we get the next chapter soon, because this is really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really good.
HAHAHAHAHA, i'm only submitting a review because i know what's gonna happen even though it's not validated yet!!! hahahahahah... it's awesome though... i def. love it!
Hey, missy!! I hope you know who this is by now... i just wanna know that i love you and i'm your #1 fan!!!!!
This chapter is perfect!!! I love how you portrayed Peter as caught between good and bad!
~ You- Know- Who- This- Is~
Hey, great chapter as always! I hope that the next one is accepted soon!!!!!
~~JLS
Great! can't wait for more! and i mean soon, darn it!
Cool, you updated really fast. Peter is such a snitch!
GRRR I HATE SNAPE I HATE PETER!Got to love the ending though!
that was so cute!!!!!! though the part about his love healing her was a tich corny, it was still really cute. i just loved james, and how he will always be there to protect her....and it was so CUTE!!! update soon. i can't wait!
Great story! I can't believe this is your first one.
This is a really good story. Keep updating.
Oh, thats so cute! I like the fact that Peter was made out like he was stupid, because that in many ways could be like his motive; he's sick of the marauders treating him like the dumb one. Well done, though, I really liked it. 10000/10
aww that was very cute... u have no ide how worried i was at the beginning but james pulled through once again... really happy how the end was and i wish there was someone like that with me... great job writing!
Aaaaaaaaawwwwww! I loved it! I wish they had gotten Snape I trouble though. The way James cried when he asked her to stay with him was so sweet. And letting Peter feel pain and anguish for what he had done was perfect. I think the fluff was great and I'm ready for more. Please update soon I love this story and I'm not sure how long I can go without it. ~Love Always~
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww! that's sooooooooo sweet!
What's going to happen? What is James mad about? Let me guess, it is to do with Peter.
What's going to happen? What is James mad about? Let me guess, it is to do with Peter.
wow, i just started reading this, and it is soooo good! i loved it! i can't wait for more...and grrrr i hate peter! peter is a bad bad bad bad badb abd babdbabdab BAD person. good thing sirius knows he is up to something. i love the way you portray james in this story and sirius and remus...all are so good. okay, i can't wait for more, so update soon!