haha wow this is THE most fluffy passionate story i have ever read. It's quite a good story. I thought it was funny when you made Lily to think of her self as "A vixen" that was geat. good job and I can't wait to read more!
awe!! it's cute, sorry but i love fluff, I NEED MORE FLUFF, and i think it's good that you made lily want to wait, but anyways, i am in desperate need of another chapter and hope that you are about done, thanks!
That was an awesome chapter Ihope you update as soon as you can.
As they walked away, Mrs. Evans whispered discreetly to Lily, “He’s also quite a looker, too.” my number one FAVORITE Quote in this whole story....loved it. also, i like the quote "I love you." "I love you more" "impossible." that one is also my favorite. okay, update soon! loved this cahpter!
Awwwwww.....soooooo cute......I wonder what they will do over christmas break....wink, wink......no i am just playing i love how james respects lily so much.......loved it....
yay the fluff is back!!!!!!!!! this chpater was amazing... i hope there are many many more like this... please update soon!
That was an interesting ending. update soon
that's so cute, go Lily and James! Also, I am so glad you made them bring up "things" because a lot of couples do that, so that was good. It was also quite clean as well, which is always good, so well done. 1000/10
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was nearly rolling around the floor at Sirius's comments! Stupid git!!! Hee hee, so funny!!!! Ahem, yes, to the story, great as usual, I love it so much, one of my absolute faves! 100000/10
Lily is has it all! Perfect bf! Perfect parents! Perfect friends! She is perfect. I want to be her.....Ohhhhh James is soooo sweet!
great chapter, as always. i loved how they were so open about their relationship, its cute! update soon
please please please write more this story is really really good but I think you should have had lily go home for the holidays with James it would just be sweet!
Very nice. Not cliched, which is golden in itself. I like that Lily and James are becoming friends here, it's also nice that Lily has an attraction to James, that way when they do become a couple, it's not because Lily all of a sudden finds James gorgeous.
Only one thing. Obviously I haven't read the future chapters yet, so I don't know, but make sur Peter isn't inconspiciously absent the entire fic, it's a bit cliche when Peter is constantly absent. We know from the scene in OotP that Peter is in fact hanging with them.
Author's Response: Yeah, Peter comes back, I promise
i loved it upload soon.pls
that was a really good chapter. please update soon...im lovin it!
Again a very good chapter. can't wait for another one. From previous experiances I probably won't have to wait too long.
Well, the grounded one has a few mins on the computer to reveiw her bff's fic! Good chapter, as per the usual. Keep going and I cant wait to get the next one.....soon please?
ahhhhhhh... I LOVED IT!!!! it was absolutely adorable... especially at the end!! Please update soon.. (as in.. YOU BETTER!) haha
Oh my gosh, I love this chapter! Actually, I love all the chapters, lol. I'm waiting for the next one!
Aaawww...I don't want it to be over!!! I liked this chapter A LOT though it seemed like they were making a big deal out of a couple of days appart. As always I love the story, you, and your writting. I love you even more because of your quick updates. So if humanly possible please update soon. Bravo to another flawless chapter!