Reviewer: Lostlovegoods
Date: 07/13/06 0:09
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

haha wow this is THE most fluffy passionate story i have ever read. It's quite a good story. I thought it was funny when you made Lily to think of her self as "A vixen" that was geat. good job and I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Iwishiwern Tamuggle
Date: 07/12/06 20:34
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

awe!! it's cute, sorry but i love fluff, I NEED MORE FLUFF, and i think it's good that you made lily want to wait, but anyways, i am in desperate need of another chapter and hope that you are about done, thanks!

Reviewer: LuckOtheIrish
Date: 07/12/06 14:53
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

That was an awesome chapter Ihope you update as soon as you can.

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 07/12/06 13:38
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

As they walked away, Mrs. Evans whispered discreetly to Lily, Hes also quite a looker, too. my number one FAVORITE Quote in this whole story....loved it. also, i like the quote "I love you." "I love you more" "impossible." that one is also my favorite. okay, update soon! loved this cahpter!

Reviewer: nsg7harrypotterfan
Date: 07/12/06 13:33
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

Awwwwww.....soooooo cute......I wonder what they will do over christmas break....wink, i am just playing i love how james respects lily so much.......loved it....

Reviewer: iluvharryandron
Date: 07/12/06 12:41
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

yay the fluff is back!!!!!!!!! this chpater was amazing... i hope there are many many more like this... please update soon!

Reviewer: Crazy About Dan
Date: 07/12/06 8:47
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

That was an interesting ending. update soon

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 07/12/06 7:11
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

that's so cute, go Lily and James! Also, I am so glad you made them bring up "things" because a lot of couples do that, so that was good. It was also quite clean as well, which is always good, so well done. 1000/10

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 07/12/06 7:05
Chapter: Wait For Me

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was nearly rolling around the floor at Sirius's comments! Stupid git!!! Hee hee, so funny!!!! Ahem, yes, to the story, great as usual, I love it so much, one of my absolute faves! 100000/10

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 07/12/06 5:11
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

Lily is has it all! Perfect bf! Perfect parents! Perfect friends! She is perfect. I want to be her.....Ohhhhh James is soooo sweet!

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 07/12/06 3:05
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

great chapter, as always. i loved how they were so open about their relationship, its cute! update soon

Reviewer: malfoys_gurl_1234
Date: 07/12/06 1:40
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

please please please write more this story is really really good but I think you should have had lily go home for the holidays with James it would just be sweet!

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 07/11/06 23:35
Chapter: Letter From James

Very nice. Not cliched, which is golden in itself. I like that Lily and James are becoming friends here, it's also nice that Lily has an attraction to James, that way when they do become a couple, it's not because Lily all of a sudden finds James gorgeous.

Only one thing. Obviously I haven't read the future chapters yet, so I don't know, but make sur Peter isn't inconspiciously absent the entire fic, it's a bit cliche when Peter is constantly absent. We know from the scene in OotP that Peter is in fact hanging with them.

Author's Response: Yeah, Peter comes back, I promise

Reviewer: cedrics_chick
Date: 07/11/06 20:23
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

i loved it upload soon.pls

Reviewer: ve88
Date: 07/11/06 19:59
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

that was a really good chapter. please update lovin it!

Reviewer: sarcastic hp lover
Date: 07/11/06 18:10
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

Again a very good chapter. can't wait for another one. From previous experiances I probably won't have to wait too long.

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 07/11/06 18:03
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

Well, the grounded one has a few mins on the computer to reveiw her bff's fic! Good chapter, as per the usual. Keep going and I cant wait to get the next one.....soon please?

Reviewer: BrighterThanSunshine
Date: 07/11/06 17:48
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

ahhhhhhh... I LOVED IT!!!! it was absolutely adorable... especially at the end!! Please update soon.. (as in.. YOU BETTER!) haha

Reviewer: YoU_sMeLL_LiKe_HAm
Date: 07/11/06 16:28
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

Oh my gosh, I love this chapter! Actually, I love all the chapters, lol. I'm waiting for the next one!


Reviewer: Mrs Liz Potter
Date: 07/11/06 16:24
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

Aaawww...I don't want it to be over!!! I liked this chapter A LOT though it seemed like they were making a big deal out of a couple of days appart. As always I love the story, you, and your writting. I love you even more because of your quick updates. So if humanly possible please update soon. Bravo to another flawless chapter!

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