Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 07/22/06 16:11
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

Good chapter! I knew Lily's parents were going to die sometime...but it's so depressing to re-read it over and over again in everyone's stories. Anyways, great story and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. So hurry and update!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 07/22/06 15:05
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

awwwww, way cute chapter! loved it. fantastic! i can't wait for more! but lily needs to sulk a little....she can't just bounce back. this is a big deal.

Author's Response: don't worry...she will

Reviewer: houseelves4ever
Date: 07/22/06 11:29
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

omg, that is so sweet, but i still think it should take Lily a tad longer to get over the death of her parents, after all, they're her parents, but other than that, amazing

Reviewer: sweet_harry
Date: 07/22/06 11:09
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

YAY! A MARRIGE!! FINALLY!!!

Reviewer: Mrs Liz Potter
Date: 07/22/06 10:27
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

NNNNNNNOOOOOOO!!! How could you end this story. I'm so sad now. This was like my first story and now it's almost gone. I might just go into a state of depression now.

I like this chapter. I don't know how much longer James and Lily can hold off their urges, especially James. I thought Lily's mourning time was a little too short and unrealistic but I do like it. It's better then those 7 chapters of mourning that are in some stories.

I'm going to miss you and your fast updates so much. You are such a fantastic writer that I'll have to start reading your other stories now. Actually I think I already have. Anyway, as much as I hate endings, I would love it if you updated quickly.
Loveing you and this story forever more,
~Love*Always~

Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso
Date: 07/22/06 10:20
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

So sweet! Can't believe there are only 2 more chapters!

Reviewer: cedrics_chick
Date: 07/22/06 0:45
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

awww so sad

Reviewer: nsg7harrypotterfan
Date: 07/21/06 21:52
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

Awwwww.....totallly loved it.......sooooooo sweet......let them become happy again soon but i understand the greaving process......keep up the great work and update soon...

Reviewer: heartsdesire456
Date: 07/21/06 16:58
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

aww! how sweet.

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 07/21/06 16:00
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

that was really rushed, im not sure if i liked it to go that fast...

Reviewer: MissLily
Date: 07/21/06 15:23
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

Really like this chapter, but just so you know this doesn't follow in cannon. Lily's parents died after she had left Hogwarts. Not really important though just thought I'd let you know. Anyway update soon :-)

Reviewer: siriuslypadfoot62442
Date: 07/21/06 14:08
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

Well, it had to happen. I think that this chapter was good, though short. Keep 'm coming!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: YoU_sMeLL_LiKe_HAm
Date: 07/21/06 13:46
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

another great chapter! keep writing!

Reviewer: BoodaDuck
Date: 07/21/06 12:53
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

This is really good! I love how passionate and strong James and Lily's relationship is. Just one thing: in my opinion, Lily seemed to grasp the fact that her parents were gone a little too quickly. Maybe you should extend her sorrow a little bit! Other than that, excellent, excellent job!

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 07/21/06 11:52
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

oh, sweet chapter! well done.

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 07/21/06 11:44
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

*sobbing* i dont want it 2 end! *still sobbing*

Reviewer: totally obsessed
Date: 07/21/06 11:31
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

i really liked it. i think Lily's reaction was a bit rushed, but i can understand the reasons behind that. other than that, good job!

Reviewer: Iwishiwern Tamuggle
Date: 07/21/06 11:06
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

awe, its adorable, sad but adorable, and Sirius is by FAR my favorite, lol

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 07/21/06 9:55
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

THis chapter is exciting, sad, and sweet. Oh, and histarical!! I loved Sirius's comments!!!! Update soon!

Reviewer: nickyandscamp
Date: 07/21/06 9:50
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

what do you mean TWO chapters????? It can't be over??!!??!!
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

ok i'm gonna go cry now

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