Reviewer: tonks_quill1803
Date: 08/08/06 13:23
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

I am amazed with how you wrote this. This has been by far one of my favorites and I must say, that you did an excellent job on this story. I can't wait to read your newest one if you writre another.

Reviewer: IS bookworm
Date: 08/08/06 12:53
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

Loved the story! I totally agree with your stuff about staying pure even when it is hard. Thanks for putting that.

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 08/08/06 11:09
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

YOur story was so good! I love your message at the end. Great job!

Reviewer: hogwartsgirlhg
Date: 08/08/06 10:32
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

omg that was great so sweet i loved it totally

Reviewer: sarcastic hp lover
Date: 08/08/06 10:31
Chapter: Letter From James

i had to come back to say one more thing i liked how your story had meaning behind it like i said before my family,not to mention me,belives in celibacy it was terrific.

Reviewer: sarcastic hp lover
Date: 08/08/06 10:28
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

I loved the last paragraph i completely agree. My family belives in calibacy before marrige. I think you did a wonderful job on this story and you should continue to write.

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 08/08/06 10:10
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

GREAT STORY!!! i loved the last paragraph!!!! this is such a good fic, i loved it so much. very good job!!

Reviewer: lubug
Date: 08/08/06 8:07
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

oh good job!!!! you did really well rapping it up. I also liked the way you tied in the name at the end! ;)

Reviewer: catalina792
Date: 08/08/06 7:10
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

OMG! i LOVE this story! i'm so happy that this chapter is up but sad that it's over. whatever you write next i will definatly be reading and reviewing ^__^

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 08/08/06 2:37
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

Wow, I absolutely LOVED it! My only complaint is that it is over *sob*. I thought the song was beautiful, perfectly fitting for the occasion!

I also liked the message you had in it. Most of the time I strongly object to authors preaching their values through a story, but in your case, it was good. I liked that the story actually had a purpose and meaning behind it. And I agreed with what you said. I have always thought it was an issue of personal choice, but your story made me actually think about it more. Now I have decided I want my first time to be as special as theirs was. Oh I'm sorry, was that too much information? The point I am trying to make is that this story really touched me. Great job! You should definately write more.

Author's Response: Thank you for this review, it means a lot to me. I was really hoping that people wouldn't call me a dork for believing in things and having morals like that, so I thank you! :-)

Reviewer: Mrs Liz Potter
Date: 08/07/06 23:25
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

Gosh, I didn't know that this story was about abstanence, but I think you make a very good point. I wish the "love" scene had, had more to it but it was still beautiful. And how James wanted to take it slow was very sweet. I also wish that the wedding was in more detail. It just seemed too short for my taste. I don't mean to be crule and I hate to say this but this was definatly not one of my favorite chapters, I actuall didn't like it at all. It just seemed so lame and dull compared to all of your other chapters. I'm sorry if I seem mean but I'm just trying to be honest. I had just imagined a different ending and this one did not reach my expectations. You had writen just such a beautiful set up and I just couldn't wait to see what you would do for the ending and this was not what I was expecting, the sex yes but the lack of passion in your writing, it was like you just gave up. Anyways I hope you write more stories because you are an amazing writer.
~Love*Always~

Author's Response: I appreciate this review as well. I don't think you sounded mean at all. Actually, I knew this chapter probably wouldn't be everyone's favorite because I'm really bad at writing about weddings because I get extremely mushy. Also, I didn't have more about the wedding night because, being 15 and having the morals that I do, I don't have any experience in that sort of area. I'm sorry that you did not enjoy the chapter, I wish it could have been better.

Reviewer: fredluvr13
Date: 08/07/06 22:56
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

wow this story was awesome!!!!! one of the best ones i ever read!!!!! thank you!!!!

Reviewer: HPHP
Date: 08/02/06 18:06
Chapter: A Bet and a "Date"

What is the ACTUAL name of the chapter, A Bet and an Date, or A Duel and a Date? The story says duel and the icon says bet.

Author's Response: a bet and a "date"...sorry, typo

Reviewer: Mariahp
Date: 08/02/06 17:42
Chapter: A New Year and a New Beginning

I love this story, it almost makes me cry to picture Lily and James dead after all that! Why wont it let me access the Epilouge?

Author's Response: the epilogue has not been validated yet

Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso
Date: 07/31/06 14:00
Chapter: A New Year and a New Beginning

I can't believe the story is almost over! Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: BlackPearl
Date: 07/31/06 12:43
Chapter: A New Year and a New Beginning

wow you write amazing stories please don't stop! I'd like to make a request if you don't mind that the next chapter is from James Point of View~ I enjoy those the most! lol you are an incredible writer i can't wait to read the rest of your story

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I just finished writing the chapter and it is already in queue! I'm so so sorry that I could not answer your request :-(

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 07/31/06 3:16
Chapter: A New Year and a New Beginning

Oh I loved this!

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 07/31/06 2:19
Chapter: A New Year and a New Beginning

yet another excellent chapter! i love the way you have built up their relationship. only one more chapter to go now? if i didn't love your work so much, i would hate you for that cruelty!

Reviewer: sarcastic hp lover
Date: 07/31/06 0:24
Chapter: A New Year and a New Beginning

As always sweet and cute. I liked this chapter too. keep writing.

Reviewer: Mrs Liz Potter
Date: 07/30/06 23:55
Chapter: A New Year and a New Beginning

Of course I enjoyed, but I don't think I've ever been so sad to see a story go. I only hope that the epilouge is longer than your chapters usually are. I just can't get enough of you story. Thank you so much for creating this.
Greatful for ever more,
~Love*Always~

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