Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/09/06 17:42
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

awww.its so sweet.i loved the little thing you put at the end.its so sweet and cute.i loved this fanfic.this id goin straight to my faves=]]

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/08/06 20:43
Chapter: A New Year and a New Beginning

When James looked up at Lily, his breath caught and he started coughing.
haha.thas was absolutely hilarious

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/08/06 20:33
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

awwww.thas sos sad.and james is so sweet to her.

but omg you have GOT to love sirius




James, not in front of Sirius," Lily said, mischievously. They both looked over to see Sirius cowered in a ball on the couch covering his eyes.

"He's not looking," James said, eagerly pulling Lily back in as fast as he could. After he had done this, he realized it was probably not the best idea. Lily leaned in to kiss him again and did not even stop when she heard Remus come through the fireplace. However, when he dropped his trunk in pure shock of seeing them in full make-out mode they pulled back reluctantly.

James looked at Lily and said, "You know, we really gotta find a better place for this."

Lily laughed and pulled away to hug Remus. James looked resentful but knew they couldn't carry on in front of his friends.

"Moony, be glad you weren't here a few minutes ago. It was even worse," Sirius said. When Remus looked over to see Sirius in the fetal position on the couch, he burst out laughing.

"Padfoot, what in the bloody heck are you doing?" Remus asked, amidst his laughter.

Before Sirius sat down, he looked at the couch skeptically. "What did you and Lily do, James? I need to know before I sit down on this couch."

James threw back his head and laughed. "Nothing, Padfoot, I promise."

Sirius sat down after placing a blanket down on the couch, causing James and Remus to break into laughter again.


HE IS SO FREAKIN HILARIOUS

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/08/06 20:33
Chapter: Christmas at the Potters'

awwww.thas sos sad.and james is so sweet to her.

but omg you have GOT to love sirius




James, not in front of Sirius," Lily said, mischievously. They both looked over to see Sirius cowered in a ball on the couch covering his eyes.

"He's not looking," James said, eagerly pulling Lily back in as fast as he could. After he had done this, he realized it was probably not the best idea. Lily leaned in to kiss him again and did not even stop when she heard Remus come through the fireplace. However, when he dropped his trunk in pure shock of seeing them in full make-out mode they pulled back reluctantly.

James looked at Lily and said, "You know, we really gotta find a better place for this."

Lily laughed and pulled away to hug Remus. James looked resentful but knew they couldn't carry on in front of his friends.

"Moony, be glad you weren't here a few minutes ago. It was even worse," Sirius said. When Remus looked over to see Sirius in the fetal position on the couch, he burst out laughing.

"Padfoot, what in the bloody heck are you doing?" Remus asked, amidst his laughter.

Before Sirius sat down, he looked at the couch skeptically. "What did you and Lily do, James? I need to know before I sit down on this couch."

James threw back his head and laughed. "Nothing, Padfoot, I promise."

Sirius sat down after placing a blanket down on the couch, causing James and Remus to break into laughter again.


HE IS SO FREAKIN HILARIOUS

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/08/06 20:26
Chapter: Christmastime is Here

AW.OMFG.I SMILED SO BIG WHEN JAMES SAID "SHS GONNA BE MRS.POTTER SOMEDAY"i loved it. i dnt know why.hes so happy.so is she.lol.aww

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/08/06 20:20
Chapter: Wait For Me

again ADORABLE!!!AO FRKIN FLUFFY ANDI FRKIN LOVE THAT.GREAT CHAPTER.I love this story. if you have any other stories im so reading them!!sirius is hilarious.lmao

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/08/06 20:10
Chapter: James' Anger Unleashed

awww.so frkin adorable

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/08/06 19:51
Chapter: Peter's Back...Or Is He?

lmao.now im never gonna be able to sleep.i find that hilarious.awww.i love how she teases him.lmao.cute and adorable.freakin loser peter.really hate him

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/08/06 19:46
Chapter: Hogsmeade

CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE!!ADORABEL!!!SO SWEET!!I LOVED IT OMG I CNT DECIDE WHIC HCHAPTER IS MY FAVEORITE

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/08/06 19:40
Chapter: Rachel and Remus!?

OMFG!!SO FRKIN CUTEE!!!! HAHA.I LOVE IT THA WAYY YOU DESCRIBE THE WAY JAME AND LILY KISS!!ITS SOSWEET!!!

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/08/06 19:29
Chapter: Six Wasted Years

AWWWWW.OMFG I LOVED IT!!FAVE CHAPTER OF COURSE.FIRST KISS AND FIRST LOVE=]].HOW FRKIN SWEET!!

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/08/06 19:21
Chapter: A Failure and A Talk

AW.THAS SO FRKIN CUTE!!I ADORE IT!!

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/07/06 20:05
Chapter: A Bet and a "Date"

AW.IM SO FEAKIN SMILING RIGHT NOW!!! i freakin love this story

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Reviewer: ELEYTERIAAAX3
Date: 11/07/06 19:43
Chapter: Letter From James

He gave the letter to Remus and plopped back into his own bed. A minute later, though, Remus dropped the letter back next to James.

“Prongs, buddy, it’s for you,” Remus said, shocked.

lmao.theyre so shocked!!lmao.I FREAKIN ADORED THIS CHAPTER!!

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Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 10/29/06 21:36
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

wow. I am in tears after that last part. you are an amazing writer. keep going!!

Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 10/29/06 21:11
Chapter: James' Anger Unleashed

awwwwwww I loved it!! it wasn't too fluffy trust me!! loved it

Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 10/29/06 21:04
Chapter: Peter's Back...Or Is He?

I hate Peter and I hate Snape.


I hate Voldemort and the Death Eaters, too, considering that the whole storyline of death and sadness leads back to them, but since they weren't exactly brought up, I didn't know if I should mention them.

Reviewer: MarauderWannabe
Date: 10/09/06 14:06
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

I LOVED YOUR STORY! so sad that its over *cries* i just wanted to put that I wasnt thrilled about the last paragraph yeah, i like the idea but i think the end would have been more effective wtihout it, like if we could have drawn our own conclusions

Reviewer: HG_MadWill
Date: 09/21/06 19:53
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

Awesome Story! I loved it and I am glad you didn't drag out the whole "Will James get Lily?" Scenario it gets kind of boring after awhile, but your story was amazing and you have such good description

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 09/18/06 16:55
Chapter: Epilogue: A Wedding to Remember

omigosh that was a GREAT story. ALL of it! i loved it all. you make a really good writer. wow. i'm still speechless, and the story's just so adorable!! i love james and lily, they're great, but this story made me love their characters that much more! keep writing! this is going on my faves!


“I love you with all of my heart, James.”

“I love you more,” he replied.

“Impossible,” Lily whispered.
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