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Name: Monster Book of Monsters (Signed) · Date: 05/03/06 0:22 · For: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight
Yay - good story! A little too fluffy at the end for my taste - II get bored with "I Love You's" after the first time they say it - but that's just me. It was a good concept, the whole "but COME BACK" thing and makes me wonder if JK won't hint at that in the final book somewhere...

Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, this one's a fluffathon. I'll let you in on a little secret, after all the conversations were had, I really didn't know exactly how I wanted to fade out of that, so there were the I love yous... In retrospect, a bad call.

Name: Monster Book of Monsters (Signed) · Date: 05/02/06 23:32 · For: Chapter 3: The Strip
The vibrating chair bit was pretty good. I think you hit it right on the head. (Oh man, that was bad... LOL... couln't help it...)

Author's Response: You know, you're the only one that has really picked up on just how dirty that was supposed to be.

Name: Monster Book of Monsters (Signed) · Date: 05/02/06 23:23 · For: Chapter 2: Eggs And Soda
I'm just wondering why McDougalls instead of McDonalds. Is that supposed to be a play on Scotland? 'Cause dude they have McDonalds over there. I ate at a couple of them!

Author's Response: That was mainly because I didn't want to throw in a disclaimer about McDonald's on top of the disclaimer I already had. Didn't feel like dealing with copyright stuff, so I dodged it. Now, the question is, what movie did I pick up McDougall's from?

Name: Monster Book of Monsters (Signed) · Date: 05/02/06 23:12 · For: Chapter 1: Just Harry
Harry opened his eyes blearily? There you go making up words again... heh Still, it's an interesting concept - acting like Muggles for a day. Although, I thought when Harry said he wanted to be "normal" he meant "a normal wizard" - not the boy who lived and that sort of thing. ?? You know I'll still read the next chapters though. Gotta "see" this.

Author's Response: Such a stickler... and yes, Blearily is a word. Honestly. What, you think I just make stuff up over here?

Name: Katastrophe (Signed) · Date: 05/01/06 15:59 · For: Chapter 1: Just Harry
Most excellent! And in the story, you brought up a very good point, very close to a moral of the story. No maatter what the hardships and trials, we all deserve one good day.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's very funny, but you're the first person to mention that, and that theme is actually VERY important. Not only is it important to the very heart of this story, but it's absolutely vital to the sequel too. Though, I think you'll find I take everything in a very different direction, it's that sentiment that Ginny expresses to Harry that comes back to play a major role in shaping his life right after the death of Voldemort. Thank you so much for the review, I hope you'll keep your eyes open for Epilogues Part I:Shadows, which is the sequel I speak of. I also hope you wouldn't mind giving a read and review to Right Here, which is actually the prequel to this story. Thanks again, I really appreciate it

Name: heartsinger2 (Signed) · Date: 04/30/06 22:15 · For: Chapter 1: Just Harry
good . and I'm wondering if you are the person who goes by the same pen name on GP.com?

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and yes I am. In fact, I'm the same pen name there, SIYE, and HPFF. Though only Right Here has made it through queue there. Thanks for the review.

Name: mAgic62442 (Anonymous) · Date: 04/29/06 9:26 · For: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight
i just read the story in 5 minutes!!! i couldn't stop!!!! it was THAT GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: 5 minutes!!! Are you kidding, I can't even read it in five minutes, and I wrote it! I'm really glad you liked it that much! But, as a parent, I almost feel the need to say, "CHEW!!!" Don't just swallow. I'm just joking. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

Name: charles2180 (Signed) · Date: 04/28/06 5:54 · For: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight
I was quite impressed with the last chapter. The chapters before were fairly typical, not that that is bad. But nothing overly original. However, this last chapter I felt was very emotional and I truly enjoy how Ron describes marriage. (Well, actually how YOU described marriage.) It might not always work out that way, but that IS how love and marriage are supposed to work. Again, a very satisfying conclusion. Look forward to another installment.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yeah, I did mix it up a little bit, didn't I? I think when I started writing this, it was going to all be really fluffy and full of nothing but, "aw, isn't that cute" moments. And then, somewhere around chapter 2, I realized that it just wasn't going to work out that way. So I get no end of satisfaction when people tell me how much the last chapter really shines above the rest. I like to think I put a lot of heart into that bit. Um, yes, the sequel to this has been finished for some time now, but the first chapter still hasn't made it through the queue, so please keep an eye out for Epilogues, Part I: Shadows. If you want to read through the rest of my author's responses, I give out a lot of details as to what you're in store for. On top of that, I'll probably be sending out pm's to people to let them know when the first chapter makes it through. Also, If you haven't yet, I'd really appreciate you looking at Right Here which is sort of the prequel to this story. Thanks again.

Name: PadfootsGirl_722 (Signed) · Date: 04/27/06 8:11 · For: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight
brilliant! just as good as your Right Here song fic. loved it!

Author's Response: Man, I'm really glad you chose to read this. It was definitely fun to write. Like I said, in the author's response to the last review, please keep an eye out for Epilogues, I continue the story, but we take a much different track than in the first two.

Name: staciann (Signed) · Date: 04/27/06 4:27 · For: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight
wow that was a great story it made me break down in tears

Author's Response: As I told one reviewer on a different site, I never thought I would actually enjoy making someone cry. But I really am glad because that means I did something right. I really hope you'll keep your eyes peeled for Epilogues, Part I: Shadows. It is the sequel to this fic, and I've worked very hard at it. Thanks for the review!

Name: mrrlyn (Signed) · Date: 04/26/06 20:11 · For: Chapter 1: Just Harry
I loved both of you stories so far and cant wait for the sequels

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really hope to have the sequels pushed through the queue soon. I know for a fact it's been over a week now... I'm just too scared to say anything. I guess I'll just give it another week. Then I'll say something... Maybe... Not sure yet. Thanks very much for the review.

Name: halfblood_princess_3 (Signed) · Date: 04/25/06 2:09 · For: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight
i love this story its so cute.and funny your really talented! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really appreciate it. Not much else to say other than I really hope you check my other fics. Well, okay, for now there is only one, Right Here, but Epilogues should be through the queue any day now. Thanks

Name: mrrlyn (Signed) · Date: 04/23/06 23:15 · For: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight
All I can say is....thank you for the truely wonderful story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Name: bertybottaholic (Anonymous) · Date: 04/23/06 16:17 · For: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight
Listen, I left a review for every chapter of this story and I am looking ahead to the sequel. If I ever seem to write a ff, I would like to partner up with you to write it. Write on!

Author's Response: A final thank you to you. The first chapter of the sequel has been in queue for over a week now. So I think I'm going to let it sit for another week. If I don't hear back by then, I'm going to ask what's going on. Also, if I run into any problems, I'll probably make an announcement as to where you can go to read the sequel now. But, I will contact you when it start to actually get published, I worked much harder on it than I did on this fic and Right Here combined. (Incidentally, you can go read Right Here while you wait for the sequel to get published). Anyway, it's funny you should mention partnering up. About a week ago I received my Perfect Imaginations Accreditation, and a few days ago I qualified to be an official Beta for SIYE. So if you do want to write a fanfic, I'd be more than happy to be a beta reader for you!

Name: bertybottaholic (Anonymous) · Date: 04/23/06 16:13 · For: Chapter 4: Kisses In The Dark
Very romantic, I love the idea that Ron is scared of soda.

Author's Response: Yeah, I think you can tell that I had a lot of fun doing the whole Ron and Ginny in a strange land thing. In a way, I kinda tapped their father to help out. The two youngest Weasleys are both just too adventurous to follow their mother's lead on Muggle stuff for too long.

Name: bertybottaholic (Anonymous) · Date: 04/23/06 15:55 · For: Chapter 3: The Strip
I can't believe you didn't get any reviews, maybe it's just because people haven't read the story. I love it, as you already know....

Author's Response: Well, I've gotten a decent amount of reviews. Maybe I need to go update all my author's notes or something... Anyway. Yeah, this was a fun chapter. Nice and fluffy. I got a chance to do some risque stuff, but not too much. I think by now I was trying to lull the reader into a false sense of security.

Name: bertybottaholic (Anonymous) · Date: 04/23/06 15:45 · For: Chapter 2: Eggs And Soda
Hahaha, thats funny, he spit up the soda and the girl was flirting with Ron. You should write a humor fic.

Author's Response: Okay, I'm not really going to say thank you every single time, let me just get it over with right now. Thank you so much for the reviews. It was a bit of a shock to check out my stats and my reviews jumped up by five. That's awesome. Okay, yeah, the soda incident. To be honest, I wanted them to go during lunch so Harry could have a hamburger, but I just couldn't think of something cool for them to do during breakfast, so I compromised. The soda incident was definitely something I wanted to do from the moment I started this thing. As a reviewer on another site pointed out though, butterbeer is carbonated as well. My way of skirting that issue is to say that soda is MUCH MORE carbonated than butterbeer. I believe in webcomicese, that's the equivalent of saying "a wizard did it," but that would be confusing in HP fanficdom.

Name: bertybottaholic (Anonymous) · Date: 04/23/06 15:35 · For: Chapter 1: Just Harry
Wonderful! I love it already, this is being added to my favorites immediately!

Author's Response: Thank you! Between you and me, the first chapter seemed the most traditional in regards to Fanfic style. It was definitely the smoothest, and I had some fun with it. Ah... I still remember, Ron seeing Hermione in knickers. What fun.

Name: Nostalgic128 (Signed) · Date: 04/22/06 20:27 · For: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight
wow!! I looovee this story!! plz plz plz write the sequel!!! You are very good at writing and i cant wait till i can read the next fic you write!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes yes yes, the sequel is on its way. Actually I'm pretty much done writing it. To be honest, I've had the first chapter in queue for a week now. So if anyone here has any rules for etiquette on how long you should wait before asking about the status of your story, please let me know. I wish I had more spoilers to give, but in all honesty, I'm clean out. But there's plenty of teasers in the Author responses before this.

Name: FalconFeathers (Signed) · Date: 04/18/06 22:10 · For: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight
Once again!! another Writer puts me to the brink of death. Ah wait the list my list of writers endanger till they write sequels or gigillgook. so write fast =(

Author's Response: Thank you! I have no need to write fast. The writing to the sequel is done! Chapter one's been in queue for about a week now, so hopefully you won't have long to wait. I've kinda depleted all of my more meaningful spoilers in previous responses, so what can I say? Other than thank you, of course!

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