Reviews For One Good Day
Reviewer: goldenniffler
Date: 07/16/08 1:45
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

i like the way youve expressed the emotions and thoughts of the foursome, it seemed true to what i thought the characters were thinking and feeling. I like that it was fluffy and funny, but also touched on some of the darker stuff as well. i like your writing style.

Now, i have done as you asked and reviewed... lovely incentive btw... very effective. =D

Author's Response: Incentive? What incentive? Jeez, it's been so long since I've written these earlier stories, I barely remember what's in them, let alone what I might have put in the author's notes. Thank you though!

Reviewer: Riddala
Date: 07/11/08 0:20
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

This was a very good story, and i have enjoyed reading it over the past couple of days, and i am probably one of many that is wanting to know about the sequal.

Author's Response: Actually, all of the sequels are already done. All you need do is go to my author's page and start reading the Epilogues trilogy.

Reviewer: JKRfan22
Date: 07/02/08 21:13
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

Oh my gosh...that has had to be one of the absolute BEST fanfics i've ever read on this be honest a fe parts almost made me cry....but it was soooo good!!! It was definitely something worthy of the incredible series by JK Rowling.......

Reviewer: hp_rocks_4eva
Date: 06/22/08 16:55
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight


Reviewer: Pretty_Fangirl
Date: 06/20/08 11:51
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

I really love this story! You have such a good portrait on the Harry/Ginny situation, and I haven't seen as many good stories involving it. My gosh! It's also so sweet! I love it so much! Please get a sequel up soon, if you haven't already!

Reviewer: Pretty_Fangirl
Date: 06/20/08 10:39
Chapter: Chapter 1: Just Harry

I'm reading this story again because i love it!

Reviewer: Marzii
Date: 06/13/08 0:49
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

Utterly amazing .. heart wrenchingly touching .. captures endless love and intense passion .. longing and the patience and torment of waiting for love to come back .. a thoroughly satisfying read .. thank you for putting in the time and effort for creating something so exquisite ..

Reviewer: Specialis Revelio
Date: 05/18/08 20:24
Chapter: Chapter 2: Eggs And Soda

I wouldn't imagine that Butterbeer is carbonated, it seems more like cider than beer to me. Emphasis in the butter, it's probably hot like cider instead of cold like beer. Doesn't it say somewhere in the books that Harry got like a warm sensation from the Butterbeer? Maybe I'm imagining it, but that's what I think.

Reviewer: proudgryffindor
Date: 04/14/08 22:09
Chapter: Chapter 1: Just Harry

ok part 2 of my rereadin and reviewing! i think that this story was a wonderful idea!! i love stories where the quartet and all of the main/semi-main characters just get to spend some time enjoying a normal(ish) life, and i think that if harry potter was really out there somewhere, hed be seeking you out right now to shake your hand for painting the perfect picture of what his "perfect day" would be.... NOW ON TO " EPILOGUES,

Author's Response: And part whatever in my attempt to get caught up with my reviews. You know, in retrospect, and I say this a lot, this has been my least favorite story because of I guess where I was coming from when I wrote it. I wrote Right Here as a kind of, "I can do better than that" response to a lot of fanfics that I wrote, and I enjoyed getting reviews so much that I wrote this story specifically to please people and get more reviews. Now that I look back on it, I kind of cringe. Still, there are some good things in it I suppose, and the last chapter really cemented how I view the relationships and kind of set the ball rolling for how I would approach the Epilogues, so there's that much. I know I didn't address anything in your review, and for that, I'm sorry. But thank you anyway!

Reviewer: BioHazard82
Date: 04/02/08 20:02
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

Great short. Can't wait to read the sequrls!

Author's Response: Thank you very much,and I can't wait for you to read the sequels as well. Thanks again.

Reviewer: pheonix_song_719
Date: 03/04/08 14:53
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

this story is made me cry lol

Author's Response: Aw... Well, I'm glad you liked it. Sorry it took over a month to get to your review!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/26/08 17:57
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

omg that was such a great story!!! i loved it!! but i gather that ginny isnt going on the mission with them?

Author's Response: No; at the time I felt very strongly about it. Now that I'm kind of over the Potter stories in general not so much, but I remember at the time thinking that it would be generally out of character and against the grain if she did join them. Plus, it would be thematically wrong; not bringing Ginny into the fold was part of a very intentional sacrifice on Harry's part. So I've always been staunchly against the idea of Ginny joining them on the horcrux hunt. On the other hand, I understand why so many people wrote stories to the contrary. Rowling created a justifiably interesting and rich character, and then intentionally amputated her from some of the most integral parts of the story. Anyway, thank you, and hope you continue to enjoy the stories. Seeing as I've still got plenty to reviews from you to respond to, I'm guessing you are.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/26/08 17:21
Chapter: Chapter 4: Kisses In The Dark

lol! i like this chapter!! very fluffy!!!

Author's Response: Well, most of the story is pretty fluffy. And I'll be honest with ya, the first four chapters were all about, well, writing what I thought other people wanted to read. Kind of vacuous, but it's still nice to see that they give people some joy. Thank you.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/26/08 12:48
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Strip

lol! the couples are so cute together!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/26/08 12:40
Chapter: Chapter 2: Eggs And Soda

lol!! wat a fun place to eat breakfast!

Author's Response: Hey, no big, you can eat breakfast there any time you choose. I call it McDonalds.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/26/08 12:33
Chapter: Chapter 1: Just Harry

OoOoOo!! great birthday present!!!

Author's Response: I thought so, thank you kindly

Reviewer: MissBellaBunny
Date: 01/22/08 17:43
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

THat was so awesome! I thought it was really in-character and I really enjoyed reading it!
Lots of Love,
~MissBellaBunny~ (I know, weird name right. LOL)

Author's Response: There are plenty of weird names round here, so it's not so bad. Thanks so much, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: MissMolliewobbles
Date: 01/17/08 16:52
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

Exellent! I love how you make all of them so in character! Amazing, definetely a five star!

Author's Response: Thank you ever so mcuh, and can't wait to see your reaction to the rest of them.

Reviewer: RitaSkeeterWannaB
Date: 01/06/08 15:07
Chapter: Chapter 2: Eggs And Soda

butter beer is actually made the same way as sode, the main component is cream soda. you add butter and buterscotch syrup

Author's Response: How do you know this?

Reviewer: xXRon_luverXx
Date: 01/05/08 20:17
Chapter: Chapter 1: Just Harry

omg i loooovvvvveddddd itttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol good job, really good job, i hope ron and hermione make it!

Author's Response: Only one way to find out, really. Thank you very much; I'm glad you liked it.

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