Reviews For One Good Day
Reviewer: HPFanatic1991
Date: 07/05/06 17:48
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

GREAT STORY!! MORE MORE!!!

Author's Response: Your wish, my command. Go check out the Epilogues, and hey, if you get this response, you may also want to hit my LJ, which is reachable from my bio. I got some original works there, along with LOTS of banter from some friends I met here.

Reviewer: rockstaragent
Date: 06/28/06 22:24
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

no offense or anything but this is a bit dull to me, maybe try to lighten it up like put some action in it or more action dunno

Author's Response: Let me guess, you want more action? Well, all I can say is that Epilogues Part III is where the action will be, I just have to get there first.

Reviewer: Crazy Addict
Date: 06/26/06 18:24
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

Oh My God!!! This story was AMAZING!! I loved it so so so so so much!!! It is my favourite FanFic EVER!!! I was balling my eyes out at the end and still am!!! You are an incredible writer and I can't wait for the sequel!!! Please write more stories!!! Thanks for making my day!!!

Author's Response: A month late, no matter. Yeah I got one and a half sequels done, and to me they are all much more meaningful and deep than this story, but I'm still glad you cried because the ending for me was really important, and really emotional for me. So I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope that I see more reviews for you in the Epilogues and Everybody does it.

Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp
Date: 06/23/06 20:17
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

hm i liked the concept of this stroy at first but i really dont know what to think about this one...

Author's Response: well, it does take a definite turn at the end, and to be honest, that end, for me, is the story. It's the point, and it's what to me makes it more than just some happy fluffy drivel...

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 06/22/06 21:47
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

I don't know if you'll read this, since this was posted quite a long ago. But I can just say: It's beautiful! Just be ware of some misspellings; not big deals, but some of them.

Author's Response: Thanks, yup, I definitely still keep an eye on the old ones. thanks for the review. And yeah, I bet I got some pretty serious errors in there, that was before I got studied up for the beta tests, or even started using betas myself so I imagine those two stories are a little more rough than my later ones.

Reviewer: amy4rupert
Date: 06/21/06 13:36
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

i love this but i find it a little sad.Great looking forward to starting the sequel

Author's Response: Oh man, if you find it a little sad... Well... that's kind of how most my stories are, sad... that's kinda what I do. But I"m glad you liked it.

Reviewer: amy4rupert
Date: 06/21/06 11:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: Just Harry

im confused as to what Ginny said.Are they going out or not?Please reply im confused.

Author's Response: Well, she says it pretty plainly in the first chapter. They are dating only for that one day. Then after that, she goes along with his wishes that they not be a couple.

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 06/16/06 15:13
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

OMG!!! WRITE A DAMN NOVEL!!! YOU'RE SUCH A GOOD WRITER I ALMOST CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!! Seriously, you have writing skills that in a few more years of practice and smoothing out the (very few) rough edges, could rival those of J.K. R.

Author's Response: YES MA'AM!!!! And I'm tryin' real hard with those rough edges, thank you... I'm so glad you like it.

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 06/15/06 23:56
Chapter: Chapter 1: Just Harry

Wow! Your stories are so amazing! They've completely made my day! They're just absolutely perfect and I love your writing style. I read this story right after I read 'Everybody Does It' and that one made me cry, but even tho i was sad from that one, this story made me smile. 11/10!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you ever so much. My whole goal when I wrote this one was to make you smile, so since I've accomplished that, yay me! Appreciate the review, and hope you'll keep reading.

Reviewer: hpgirl_91
Date: 06/12/06 20:00
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

This was an amazing story, especially the last chapter. While I loved the fluffy and light feelings of the other chapters this more serious chapter was perfect. I can't believe that Ron proposed! I loved this story and I can't wait to read the sequel!

Author's Response: Man, since you already read the sequel, I don't know what else to say. This last chapter really is the best part of the story in my opinion, and well, I'm glad you liked it. anyway, thank you so much for reading through the stories, I'll try and keep Part II moving at a steady pace. thanks.

Reviewer: Hermioneweasley4ever
Date: 06/12/06 10:04
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

after reading ypur fist story i thought i should read more of your storys and i raaly enjoyed this one too! i thought it was differnt and also thought a lot of the parts in the story were very funny!!!!!! i also really enjoyed the last chapter of the story and how you went into each couples coverstions when they went off alone it was sweet and exciting loved it.!
~Jenny~

Author's Response: Well, thank you thank you. I'm just now realizing that I'm responding to all these reviews backwards, but that's okay. well, I'm gald you enjoyed it, particularly the humor, I always think I'm a little off on the humor, which makes me nervous about Part II of Epilogues because that story is intended to be at least a good chunk of it funny. And I loved writing the conversations at the end, that just hit me, and I went with it, and it's really one of the things of this story I'm quite proud of. Thanks for the reviews, and thank you so much for reading all of my stories, that's awesome.

Reviewer: txreina
Date: 06/11/06 21:47
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

Beauitful. Loved Harry's emotional outbreak. it was a long time coming.

Author's Response: Thank you. This is the chapter that makes me not hate this story so much, and really, it's the chapter that has really set the tone for the rest of what I have written since. You are, however only at the beginning of the story, and now that you are done with One Good Day, I'd definitely appreciate you checking in on the epilogues series. Thanks for all the reviews.

Reviewer: txreina
Date: 06/11/06 21:02
Chapter: Chapter 4: Kisses In The Dark

Making out in the movie oh what fun. What also cute is Ron, and how ckueless he is when girls are hitting on him.

Author's Response: I thought so. And I'm glad you pointed out the bit about Ron getting constantly hit on. I can't remember exactly why I did that now, but I remember it being a kind of important motif.

Reviewer: txreina
Date: 06/11/06 20:44
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Strip

Sounds like they are having a great time together.

Author's Response: Yup. Kinda the point.

Reviewer: txreina
Date: 06/11/06 20:33
Chapter: Chapter 2: Eggs And Soda

Great fun chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. The soda incident, my first planned bit of humor in writing, I wasn't that thrilled, I think with it. Seemed much funnier in my head.

Reviewer: txreina
Date: 06/11/06 20:24
Chapter: Chapter 1: Just Harry

What a sweet chapter and a great idea. Except the one day Harry's being waiting for and he can't do magic that's kind of ironic well at least he and Ginny are back together.

Author's Response: Well, someone once upon a time long ago made a similar comment. It's interesting because we see in Epilogues I again do something similar with magic, although it's under a much darker flag. Well, glad you like the beginning.

Reviewer: Mrs Liz Potter
Date: 06/06/06 13:01
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

I really, really, really LOVE this story. It was so sweet and it seems like something that could really be in the 7th book. I really hope you put the sequal up soon. I love you and your writting so much (please don't think I'm crazy). Love Always...

Author's Response: Wow, not common for someone to profess their love for me in a review. Um... thanks... yeah. No, seriously thank you so much. I guess, I should start calling this story my big earner now, it just keeps getting reviews. I'm glad you like it, and I'm glad it's the first of my fics that you've read because between you and me, it's probably my least favorite. And you mentioned the sequel, which means that I seriously need to update the summaries and author notes because there's a whole lot out there for you to read in the same storyline. I guess we start with Right Here, and the you have this story, and after that, you can move on to Epilogues Part I. I also have the first chapter of Epilogues Part II in queue, so yay for that. And then you can also check out Everybody Does it, but I wouldn't recommend that story until at least after Epilogues Part I. Anyway, I'm really glad you enjoyed it and it'd be nice to see something like it in book 7, but we all know that probably won't be. Thanks for the review, and hope to hear from you again soon.

Reviewer: Alex and Louis
Date: 06/06/06 0:32
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

It was amazing and whats the name of the sequel cuz i want to read it now!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. There's a prequel called Right Here, and the sequel is actually going to be in three parts, but Epilogues Part I is finished and posted in its entirety. If you just click on my user name, you can pretty much read all of my fics in order, and t should fit together. I really kind of have to write all my stuff in the same 'verse, it's just how I'm wired.

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 06/03/06 14:19
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

Hey! Your story was amazing! It made me cry at the ned, byt that is what made it special!

Author's Response: Well, thank you ever so much. You know, one of the things I'm really loving about MNFF is that unlike other sites where my stories get buried and after a certain point are never reviewed again, I'm continually getting reviews from people, and that's super awesome. And yes, the crying, the end of this story was probably a big moment for me in the realm of writing fanfiction. Originally the point of this story was to just be five chapters of fluff, but I took that turn at the end, and there was no looking back, and I'm really glad I did that. So, in the end, when you say you cried at the end, you really weren't at the end, but only the end of the beginning. Yup, the story continues in Epilogues Part I: Shadows, and I really hope you enjoy it. I've even got the first chapter to Part II waiting in queue, but while you wait for that, you can also check out Everybody Does It. Anyway, I'm really happy you enjoyed it so much, and I thank you immensely.

Reviewer: xiofs13
Date: 06/01/06 1:37
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

Wow that was an amazing fic and VERY well writtenn. the characterization was right on the mark and had a very authentic feel to it. It was very light-hearted an fluffy in the first4 chapters but you really turned it around cuz this chapter is so deep, emotional and thoughtfull (as well as fluffy) You've got me hook, line and sinker and i dont think im going to get some sleep unless i read the prequel and epilouge and i have a feeling they will get the same rating from me as this one...1000/10

oh yeah srry i didnt review the other chaps i just couldnt stop reading long enough

Author's Response: Well thank you so much. Honestly, I got to wonder, this fic gets by far the most reviews, which just strikes me as weird since it's been ages since I posted this. Anyway, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it and I hope that you really do go and read the rest of the stories. Well, can't wait to hear from you.

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