Reviews For One Good Day
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 08/29/06 1:25
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

how could anyone possibly leave a bad review after this...?

That was by far the single best ending to any fic i have read on MNFF so far. There have been many. But none even come CLOSE to that. It was epic. It was unimaginable. Writers like you are the inspiration for beginners like me. You are the second author i've read that makes me want to give up my own writing... not out of shame that i couldn't write something as good...but because i just get so much power and love and emotion out of out of reading stories like this. I almost feel like i get more out of stories from others then from myown. I cant begin to thank you for writing a sequel and i cant wait to start reading it. Please please write more!!! Absolutely phenomenal!!!!!

Author's Response: Man I love it when people do what you have done, and I get to read the reactions after each chapter and then I get this. the first four chapters are usually something quick and nice, and I appreciate it, but I put so much heart into the last half of this last chapter, and when I get reviews like this, well, it makes it seem worth it. Thank you so much for everything. While I have said many times this is the least favorite of my fics, the ending is something I'm quite proud of. And don't stop writing PLEASE! There is a lot you can do to develop yourself as a writer but the single biggest thing you can do is just to keep writing, find and hone your voice, and one day you can be like me and write fanfics that get awesome reviews like this one (note: this last little bit was written kind of tongue in cheek. I don't really think that highly of myself). Thanks for the wonderful reviews and can't wait to read more from you.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 08/29/06 0:17
Chapter: Chapter 4: Kisses In The Dark

awesome... for a guy that doesnt write much fluf, you sure got a handle on it! Great stuff!!

Author's Response: Thank you. Okay, I like fluff. A little fluff. It sure is fun to write when you're a big softy like me.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 08/28/06 23:57
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Strip

love this story... its so imaginative, and yet so perfect at the same time! It fits them so well!

Author's Response: Thank you. I think with this story it was a big experiment just to see if you know they kids would get to be just kids if all the other crap in their life was taken out.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 08/28/06 23:48
Chapter: Chapter 2: Eggs And Soda

well i do believe it is, but i dont think as much as cola or anything like that. (great story...im lovin it!)

Author's Response: hehehe... i'm lovin it... nice product placement there. Yeah, see, no one seems to know for sure if butterbeer is carbonated or not. Really would suck for me if it was.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 08/28/06 23:38
Chapter: Chapter 1: Just Harry

this is awesome. Well done!! Cant wait to read on.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, can't wait to read the rest of your reviews.

Reviewer: staggering
Date: 08/28/06 1:52
Chapter: Chapter 2: Eggs And Soda

I'm pretty sure butter beer isn't carbonated. Still love the story.

Author's Response: Thank you. yeah, it was on another site where I ran into someone who would disagree with the both of us, so I just put in the disclaimer. One of these days when I'm rich and famous and writing continuation books in the HP universe, I'll be sure to ask JKR whether it is or isn't. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: staggering
Date: 08/28/06 1:30
Chapter: Chapter 1: Just Harry

Looks really good so far.

Author's Response: Cool!

Reviewer: LMelynn
Date: 08/08/06 2:38
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

Great story....I loved it, as well as the one that preceded it, I know that you said you were surprised that you wrote a songfic-(generally I find songfics cheesy), you were absolutely right, the lyrics were perfect, I could actually hear it in my head during the fight/recap of their relationship. Anyway, so far I'm enjoying the series and I'm sure I'll continue to be impressed. Oh, and I love the Buffy reference, morbid in a way maybe, but it is a great episode.

Author's Response: HAha! another buffy fan. I find it so odd that there aren't more buffy fans in the HP fandom considering there are a lot of parallels between the styles and themes in story telling. And yeah, I hate sounding presumptuous, but I still hate songfics except the one I wrote. Yup, not conceited at all.. Thanks for the wonderful review.

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 08/04/06 16:52
Chapter: Chapter 4: Kisses In The Dark

that was funny , brilliant, and romantic all together.

Author's Response: Well thank you kindly.

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 08/04/06 15:00
Chapter: Chapter 1: Just Harry

that was awesome i must keep reading

Author's Response: Yes! You must! I compel you to read more!

Reviewer: some1wanting2read_
Date: 08/01/06 22:57
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

I really liked your fanfic because it wasn't completely focoused on Voldemort, or H/G & R/Hr, but it was still happy... now, where's the sequel?!?!

Author's Response: Well thank you. I try and go outside the mainstream in what I write because I think there are so many things out there that have been done over and over again, and I don't want one of my fics to just be the same rehashed story with a different voice. So thank you, and the sequels are the Epilogues, and Everybody Does It, so I can't wait to read your reviews for those.

Reviewer: Ron_weasly_luvr13
Date: 07/28/06 21:56
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE READ YET SO THANK YOU!!!!!!! IT MADE ME CRY TRU OUT AND I LOVED THE ENDING
YOU R A GREAT AUTHER AND KEPP WRITING PLZ!!!!

Author's Response: NO, THANK YOU! I HAVE KEPT ON WRITING AND THERE'S PLENTY MORE WHERE THIS CAME FROM. KEEP READING PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Harry J Potter
Date: 07/28/06 17:16
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

cool!

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: starry eyed
Date: 07/24/06 0:33
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

i loved it, it made me cry *tear* ur portrayal of the characters were very, very good, and it was really a cute story.

Author's Response: Thank you. Again, I just can't tell you how much it means to me to connect with the reader emotionally, and I'm honored that you really liked how I portrayed the characters, I love writing for them.

Author's Response: Thank you. Again, I just can't tell you how much it means to me to connect with the reader emotionally, and I'm honored that you really liked how I portrayed the characters, I love writing for them.

Reviewer: kalaylee
Date: 07/23/06 22:46
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

WOW! That was great you captured R/HR perfectly and of course H/G perfectly! Keep up the good work


Author's Response: Thank you very much, I intend to. I hope you'll continue to read my continued work as well.

Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 07/21/06 15:32
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

Woah....I'm totally speechless. When Dumbledore died in HBP, I was the only one of my friends who didn't really feel like crying. But this? Omg. This made me feel like crying so hard. It was so good. I'm absolutely amazed at your writing, and your intake on all things such as love. It is so hard to believe that this is just a fanfiction, and not many people are going to be abled to appreciate it as much as I did. Just because of this chapter, this story is going on my favorites list. I absolutely ♥ this story!! Can't wait for the sequel, which I know will be just as amazing.

And on another note, the whole time I was reading this chapter, the song "No Day But Today" from Rent kept playing in my mind. =]

Author's Response: I need to check with my girlfriend about the Rent soundtrack, she's really into musicals. Well, I'm glad you like it and I hope you really enjoy the sequels as well. I'm also glad that the end really got you emotionally because when it comes down to it, the end is the party of this story that I'm really proud of, and in the writing, I even shed a tear or two, so that's just indescribable when you can connect with a reader like that. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: SDhufflepuff
Date: 07/18/06 14:54
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

I love this story!! so are the sequals the Epilogues?

Author's Response: Thank you very much, and yes the Epilogues are the sequels. Also, don't forget that Right Here precedes this story, so please read that too. I will warn though that while all of my stories follow the same arc, each has its own tone and mood. This is by far my fluffiest story. thanks for the review

Reviewer: ans
Date: 07/11/06 17:34
Chapter: Chapter 2: Eggs And Soda

your title came from the fact that he had a magic free day

Author's Response: Nope. Only hardcore fans of Buffy the Vampire Slayer will get the answer. Other than that, you'll have to read the a/n I put in before the final chapter.

Reviewer: smiley10792
Date: 07/08/06 12:28
Chapter: Chapter 1: Just Harry

I love this story! I read it twice. This doesn't have an exciting plot, but a good message. Great!

Author's Response: whoo boy, lots of reviews for this story to catch up on. Okay, well you are right, it's not the most exciting plot, and in retrospect, this is the least favorite of my stories that I've written. At the same time, I think it proves to be a good intro to the Epilogues series along with Right Here, and it continues to net me more reviews than anything else I've written. I'm incredibly honored that you read it twice, and while I don't like the story as a whoel, there are definite bits that I'm proud of, in particular that good message you speak of so thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: lilcushinggirl2005
Date: 07/08/06 4:22
Chapter: Chapter 5: Fireside and Moonlight

I loved how you switched back and forth. I thought it was sad but in a romantic way Great Job

Author's Response: Yup. From the moment I knew I was going to write Chapter five like that, I had it planned out for the cut scenes. To me, that just seemed the only way to go really. Thanks for the review

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