Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/09/08 15:37
Chapter: Behind My Raven Eyes

This was really good, it really got his personality across. It gave me a feeling of him being a lost cause.

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 07/18/06 0:47
Chapter: Behind My Raven Eyes

another incredibly amazing poem! you and DracoHollic are like my favorite poem-writers! You're both going on my favorites lists!!!! 11/10!!! great poem!

Author's Response: wow thanks! :D I'll be sure to tell DracoHollic that she's on your favs list ;) she doesn't visit this site anymore....lol. well, ok, sometimes. anyways, thanks for the review! :) cheers!

Reviewer: DracoHollic
Date: 03/18/06 4:55
Chapter: Behind My Raven Eyes

I like it! and it doesn't matter that it's a bit lite mine you know, besides, this one's better ;) hehe men sa, du mste ju stta dit min baaanner p profiiilen :D hehe anyways, love yah hun' ,please don't stop writing! ( like that would ever happen ;) )

Author's Response: lol! I haven't seen this review honey ^^ sorry...hrm well anyways thanks! :D and yes, I'll do that :)

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 03/15/06 14:26
Chapter: Behind My Raven Eyes

Hmm... I like this story enough, but it definitely needs some work. First and foremost: The Summary. I'm sorry, but the summary wasn't very good at all. It looks very messy to use chatspeak in a summary, and even messier to barely mention the poem at all. However, I do like most of the rest of the poem. It's from Snape to Lily, right? I think by having no set rhyme scheme but a lot of great rhymes you took the risk of having the poem sound forced, but it turned out well. Besides the summary, I really liked this. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: thanks for all that! :) I suck at summaries, but well...I'll try ;P and yeah I've got some problems with rhyme, but I'm glad it turned out ok ^^

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